New Movie

I just finished writing the script for my movie..."Jedi Brotherhood" (I don't know if someone used this title already)and now i'm running a little casting here in Uruguay....I already have 6 actors. I will soon upload some Lightsaber tests.
But right now, what do you guys think about the title?

DM_Jedi

 

How about "Brotherhood of the Jedi"? (Don't really use that)

It sounds a little awkward, but I can't put my finger on why. Maybe its just me.

 

It does sound better...."Brotherhood of the Jedi".
Thanks

 

But just beware that "of the" is used alot and not many people like titles with "of the" in it.

 

A [space] LOT, not ALOT, A LOT, never alot. Sorry, done ranting.

People dont like "of the", but, who cares.

 

Actually "alot" is the Colloquial usage, which I think is acceptable here. "a lot" is required for formal writings such as reports, buisness letters and essays.

It's always best to use "a lot", but in some cases "alot" is fine (though frowned upon).

-Kol

 

No! please, I beg you not to use 'of the' in your title. Please, think of the children!

*Whispering Death procedes to go into the fetel position and quiver until some one kindly reminds him that putting 'of the' in a title isn't the end of the world. He then procedes to change his soiled pants and thank the kind stranger*

Remeber kids, don't go to the dark side, keep 'of the' out of your title.

 

Don't you guys worry about, I'm already thinking on a new title.....I realized that "Brotherhood of the Jedi" sounded a little bit "off".
So i'm working again, reanaming my script....lucky me I won't have to change any character

See Ya Around
DM_Jedi

 

Don't you guys worry about, I'm already thinking on a new title.....I realized that "Brotherhood of the Jedi" sounded a little bit "off".
So i'm working again, reanaming my script....lucky me I won't have to change any character

See Ya Around
DM_Jedi

And another things.....(this is an Off Topic comment, but hey, i posted this in first place )

I recently read JediTAC's post, and what I have to say is this....I am a newbie, I did asked some dumb questions but i never felt offended by JediTAC or sombody else. When something sounds strange to me, i do ask if they are talking in a serious way or joking, cuz sometimes I can't tell. But hey...i'm not here to bother you guys, i'm here to share my ideas and learn from you guys(at the FAQ and the tutorials )
Ok, I bellive that's all.

DM_Jedi

 

wow, we get english lessons for free!!! i know alot of people ask me why i use alot alot... i always tell them i have alot of reasons...

tomorrow's lesson, children? alright versus all right!

 

I'm gonna make a film and call it "Star Wars: OF THE"

and thats it.

 

LOL@Lunatic

 

The title "Jedi Brotherhood" is fine..."Brotherhood OF THE Jedi" sounds better, BUT...I think we've all had our fill of "OF THE" in titles.

Simply adding "The" to the title, thus: "Star Wars: The Jedi Brotherhood" sounds good to me...but, hey, it's your film.

Lunatic_Pandora...I LOVE that title! Can't wait to see that one!

--Kai

 

Star Wars: OF THE...that's brilliant! What about War of the Stars?

Back on topic, I think that Star Wars: The Jedi Brotherhood sounds good.

 

Hey, if you're making it in Uruguay, does that mean it's going to be in Spanish, I can see it now...

"Luke, yo soy tu padre"
"No es verdad, es imposible"

 

What about birth of the jedi

 

Another Star Wars movie about Jedi? Who'd a thought?

"Brotherhood of the Jedi" sounds better, I agree.

 

Actually, the movie is going to be in Spanish.

And for some reason "The Jedi Brotherhood", "Brotherhood of the Jedi" or "Jedi Brotherhood" sounds bad in Spanish, so I will chance the title.

The new name will be...
"A Lot Jedi of the hood" LOL

DM_Jedi

 

"La hermandad Jedi"

"Los Jedi de la Hermandad"

"La hermandad de los jedi"

"El club de los jedi que se cargan sith en un bosque rompiendo su sable laser doble por la mitad"

Carl