New Short: Frisbee

New short Frisbee. (for those not on my facebook)
This was shot by a crew of 2 in 2 hours. More experimental than anything as it was filmed for my video production class.
Our given location was 'on campus' and our prop was a frisbee.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ihCf52SxoSE

Critiques welcome an appreciated.


-Justin

 

Fun. I liked where you went with it, some of the shots were composed a little off, but I see what you were trying to get at. Were you wearing microphones?

 

Thanks! Yes, composition was a bit quick and dirty. I was behind the camera only half of the time--with no real time for pick ups. If the 1st shot was poorly composed, then I just tried to match the reverse shot for the pure sake of continuity.
We'll have more than 2 hours to shoot next project.

To answer your question, we used a shotgun mic mounted on the camera. I had my wireless lav mics with me, but I'm not sure how well they would have served us with the jumping and rolling.

 

That was short 'n sweet. I like little films like this that are to the point.
The flying frisbee shot looked really good. Only shot I really didn't care for was your break-dancing with the obvious pan/scan. Your moves were fine.

 

Good job! I liked the part where you had four shots at once on screen changing with the music, made it exiting. Keep it up.

 

Thanks for watching. I answered you question on Youtube, that I edited everything right in after effects.
It just seems like a much more efficient 'pipeline' (or lack of one) for me.