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Before - Legends Nice presents, an Over 30 Writers Club Summer 2007 FanFic Challenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Aug 18, 2007.

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006
    Nice presents, an Over 30 Writers Club Summer 2007 FanFic Challenge
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: JA -
    Characters:, Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, Enga
    Genre: vignette
    Summary: Obi-Wan receives a present from Siri
    Disclaimer: Star Wars = George Lucas.

    Ties in with this challenge [link=]To the rescue[/link]

    Qui-Gon was guiding a limping Obi-Wan towards the healer?s ward.

    Obi-Wan muttered ?master, next time when we have to put on a disguise get something that is comfortable. These shoes were too small and what did they get me??

    ?A treatment by me? Enga said.

    Obi-Wan gave her a scowling look and said ?you again, where is master Aaqu??

    Enga said ?he had the dayshift and is sleeping already. Come let me take care of those blisters.?

    Obi-Wan lied down on a treatmenttable and Enga removed his socks as gentle as possible. She smiled when she saw the pink socks and remembered Aaqu telling her about the mission. She said ?pink suits you? and started to treat the blisters.

    Obi-Wan replied ?wha.. Brr. Aarch. It?s a ladies colour. Aauw brr. Be gentle with my feet.?

    Enga taped the last blister and said ?you are so predictable. Done already and let your master carry you or use a hoverchair.?

    Obi-Wan said ?I?ll take the hoverchair? and he was helped by Qui-Gon and Enga into it.

    Enga said ?come back tomorrow. I will remove those bandages and your feet will be healed by that time.?


    Obi-Wan was sitting on the couch wrapped in an old comfortable blanket from his master when Qui-Gon came in carrying a package. A small card was attached to it and Obi-Wan read it.

    To Obi-Wan

    I just saw you coming home with your master and master Yoda.
    I couldn?t resist it and had to take a holopic of you two.

    He opened the package and smiled. Siri was playing a prank on him. In it was a pair of pink boxers adorned with yellow Smileys. A holopic of him and Qui-Gon was laying atop of them and another note said:


    Your master was looking quite the elegant man.
    I have never seen such a rare specimen of human.

    Purple robes with bright blue trimmings extravagant
    Platinum blond hair, bronzed face, elegant.

    I have to make a confession: you were gorgeous.
    Absolutely delicious.

    Ruby red lips and a white powdered face
    Pink pearls and white lace

    Red curly hair and a yellow dress.
    With an artificial bump to accentuate the derriere you don?t possess.

    No shoes and only pink socks to wear?
    Blisters no doubt and your master will take care.


  2. ratna

    ratna Jedi Knight star 4

    Mar 1, 2007
    This is really quite delightful! Nice poem, too!
  3. Jade_Pilot

    Jade_Pilot Jedi Master star 5

    Dec 10, 2005
    Great response to the challenge! =D=
  4. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrely Community Mod star 9 Staff Member Manager

    Jul 7, 2000
    I love the images that spring to mind from the poem. :D

    Superb response to the challenge. =D=
  5. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Jul 26, 2005
    Oh poor Obi. He paid quite the painful price, didn't he?

    At least he'll be healed overnight.

    The poem was very cute and I hope it brought a bit of a smile to Obi's face.

    Great response to the challenge

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master star 6

    Aug 21, 2006

    all thanks for your generous reviews.

    I must have had a premonition about pink things because sunday 19 aug. we had a big fire in an abandoned building and I as a firefighter was one of the decontamination unit.
    One of the firefighters wore only a pair of pink boxers under his coveralls and was the talk of the rest after his decontamination.
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