Not missing you - a Tahiri poem

Read it first before you kill me

NOTE: This was inspired by John Waite

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[b] Not missing you [/b]


[b]I[/b]?m not missing you at all,
[b]T[/b]hat is what I tell myself
[b]W[/b]hen thoughts of you occupy my mind
[b]I[/b] tell myself
[b]I[/b] ain?t missing you at all


[b]I[/b]?m not missing you at all
[b]S[/b]ince you left me all alone
[b]W[/b]hen my soul is chained and my heart barred
[b]I[/b] tell myself
[b]I[/b] ain?t missing you at all


[b]I[/b]?m not missing you at all
[b]T[/b]he day you thought of yourself alone
[b]W[/b]hen your actions chilled me to the bone
[b]I[/b] told myself
[b]I[/b] am not going to miss you at all


[b]I[/b]?m not missing you at all
[b]A[/b]fter memories of you warm my frozen heart
[b]W[/b]hen I know the soul accepts no deception
[b]I[/b] tell myself
[b]I[/b]?m going to miss you forever


~FIN~

 

that was good, i liked how u has her try and tell herself that she didn't miss him, even though she knows she really does

 

elfsheen, you really are good at this poetry stuff. keep it up

~aeryn

 

Very nicely done, especially how you conveyed the conflict of Tahiri's emotions Poor girl!

 

I agree with AERYN. Can't wait until you treat us with more of your poetry

 

Thank you all for reading! Emotions are always conflicting, especially in situation as the one Tahiri is in!

Aeryn

And you will certainly see more of me

Thanks again for the feedback, I appreciate it!

 

Another great poem. Keep it up.

 

Caught the feelings did you
Reb

 

Thanks

 

Awww!!! I love this, Elfsheen! You did beautiful work with this, and I love how Tahiri tries to tell herself she doesn't miss Anakin - though of course she does. Very moving piece. Keep up the great work!

 

Thanks Rogue_Even!