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Beyond - Legends Not on the Schedule - Ben Skywalker Romance - COMPLETE 2/13

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by VaderLVR64, Jul 9, 2005.

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  1. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Master star 4

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    Hee, hee....very cute chapter! [face_love]
     
  2. SWpants

    SWpants Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    =D= yay!!!

    ?Nervous about making love,? he answered softly. ?I?ve never made love to anyone before??

    ?Good answer,? she whispered just before she brought his lips down to hers.


    *sigh* that was beautiful. :)
     
  3. Jedi-2B

    Jedi-2B Jedi Master star 4

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    Very nicely done. :) I think I'll pass on the PM for this -- it would be too much like knowing what my own son did on his wedding night, which I don't want to think about!
     
  4. starwarsfan1000

    starwarsfan1000 Jedi Padawan star 4

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  5. _ThatJediScum_

    _ThatJediScum_ Jedi Master star 3

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    Hilarious! Love the mush, love the comedy, love happy Skywalkers! :D :D :D

    bran
     
  6. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    That was so beautiful. [face_love]

    I absolutely love this couple and this fic.

    If I hadn't said so already, thanks for giving it to us.

     
  7. RedGold

    RedGold Jedi Master star 4

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    Woot!

    Considering it's bloody freezing outside and I just came in from it... that's what I want to read!

    And did I hear something about a PM chapter?
     
  8. RebelMom

    RebelMom Jedi Knight star 6

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    Apr 20, 2000
    Ah, lovely chapter.
     
  9. JadeLotus

    JadeLotus Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Mar 27, 2005
    [face_love] [face_love]

    Awww...just beautiful...
     
  10. Killik_Twilight

    Killik_Twilight Jedi Master star 4

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    Heh. How? sweet (no other words come to mind :p)

    Nice to see that Ben's nervous ? I would be too. *laughs* Of course, I'm not married yet. He is. *srnk*

    Tolan and Luke going to Tatooine? Hmm?

    Very good job. :)

    KT
     
  11. mavjade

    mavjade It's so FLUFFY! Fanfic Manager star 6 Staff Member Manager

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    :DThat was a wonderful Chapter! =D=

    He grinned at the thought of actually going to the station tomorrow wearing nothing more than a satisfied smile.
    [face_laugh] I don't know that could be really funny! Although it would probably attract more attention than he would like!:p

    ?Nervous about making love,? he answered softly. ?I?ve never made love to anyone before??
    Awwww, that was the perfect answer!

    ?You only see certain parts of me,? she retorted, catching him in the act once more.
    [face_laugh] That really cracked me up!

    ?Tatooine isn?t all bad,? he defended his father?s home planet.
    If he had grown up there he probably wouldn't feel quite that way:p

    ?Maybe one day he and my father can go,? Ben offered. ?My Dad could show him all the things that tourists usually miss.?
    Now wouldn't that be cool for her dad.... I want to go!

    he whispered just before he picked her up and carried her back into the bedroom that awaited them.
    And this is where the PM chapter begins???? :D[face_blush]

    Really great chapter, I can't wait for more!

     
  12. jade51999

    jade51999 Jedi Knight star 5

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    So Cute!

    Great Job.
    :)
     
  13. JediJainaSoloFel

    JediJainaSoloFel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    And you don't need a walker yet??

    No. Apparently that comes with the next birthday:p Though based on what my friends have done to each other on their 21st birthdays, a walker might come in handy:p

    When they pulled up, he motioned her to sit still and ran around to her side and opened the door. She held out her arms and he lifted her up, stealing a kiss on the way.

    How very gentlemanly of him:)

    Ben?s lips came down demandingly on hers and he drew her close. Then he pulled away and said in a shaky voice, ?Hurry.?

    Hmm...

    It's getting a little warm in here.

    He grinned at the thought of actually going to the station tomorrow wearing nothing more than a satisfied smile.

    Incorrigible!:p

    The cool slide of the robe hit his overheated skin and made him shiver.

    Temperature is slowly rising.

    Instead of answering, she held out her arms, inviting him with her eyes. He slid onto the bed beside her, leaning over her. His fingers grazed the soft skin over her collarbone and traveled up to where her pulse beat so madly. His own blood was pounding in rhythm with hers, he thought. ?I love you,? he murmured.

    Where's a cold shower emoticon when you need one?

    A look of disbelief entered her eyes. ?Ben Skywalker? Nervous about sex?? she asked skeptically.

    ?Nervous about making love,? he answered softly. ?I?ve never made love to anyone before??

    ?Good answer,? she whispered just before she brought his lips down to hers.


    Great Answer[face_love] He's a charmer for a read

    ?I can only see you,? he teased.

    How sappy:p

    ?Tatooine isn?t all bad,? he defended his father?s home planet.

    Heehee. He's a farmboy at heart.

    ?Nope, the Skywalker name is big business,? he assured her. ?They?ll probably want to sell tickets to our kids? Naming Day ceremonies or something.?

    Laugh now Ben. I'll bet it's true. The grandchildren of Luke Skywalker will be big business.

    Loved this chapter. Can't wait for more:D
     
  14. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Golden_Jedi :D

    ginchy Thank you!

    SWpants666 He's a charmer, all right. ;)

    Jedi-2B Understood! [face_sick] Yeah, that would not be ANY fun.

    starwarsfan1000 Thank you!

    _ThatJediScum_ Sometimes they've just got to be a family. [face_laugh]

    Lola64 [:D] Thank YOU for reading it!

    RedGold Nothing like a Skywalker to warm you up! =P~

    RebelMom Thank you! :D

    JadeLotus Romance and mush... [face_love]

    Killik_Twilight He's in a whole different league now. ;)

    mavjade Yep, that's where the PM chapter begins. And it's going out today!

    jade51999 Thank you! This is meant to be light and fluffy, Skywalker Lite if you will. :)

    JediJainaSoloFel He's got a double dose of the Skywalker charm, I think! [face_laugh]


    Okay, I'll be sending out the PM chapter today to those who requested it.
     
  15. Lola64

    Lola64 Jedi Master star 4

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    Okay, I'll be sending out the PM chapter today to those who requested it.

    Oh, I forgot to request. Can I still do so?
     
  16. jedi_princess18

    jedi_princess18 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Just got the PM chapter....

    **** fans self ****

    I think I need to go open a door to let some cool air in...

     
  17. SWpants

    SWpants Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    I'm with her.

    *runs outside*
    hmmmmm
    Too bad it was warm today
     
  18. jedijethro

    jedijethro Jedi Youngling star 2

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    cant wait for the pm chapter
     
  19. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I came across your story, which is amazing by the way!!! And just had to post my comment:

    YOUR STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

    Cool story. S_M
     
  20. jedijethro

    jedijethro Jedi Youngling star 2

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    ... wating/ feeling depressed:_| I-) :_|
     
  21. terribletimestwo

    terribletimestwo Jedi Youngling

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    Can't wait to see where the drama goes now that they're married.

    Oh, and loved the PM chapter. Could they be any cuter?


    Thanks.

    TTT
     
  22. Vongchild

    Vongchild Jedi Master star 5

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    Yay for mush. :)

    That was so cute!
     
  23. jedijethro

    jedijethro Jedi Youngling star 2

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    how come every one else got the pm chapter uggg
     
  24. jedijethro

    jedijethro Jedi Youngling star 2

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    just got the pm chapter; err... reminds me of the last james bond movie before the fcc got @#$%ed up man i liked those old movies :_| *sigh*
     
  25. jedijethro

    jedijethro Jedi Youngling star 2

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    hmm[face_thinking] wonder what's next:confused: gungan revolt,second galactic civil war that pits them against each other, or maybe ben becomes a p.o.w. and she has to deal with it
     
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