Not so pathetic lifeform (JA fan fic)

Group hug!!! I love you guys! Darth Ratsputin has to work today and tomorrow,
so we can't discuss the next part, but I will try to on Tuesday! I owe you guys a post,
I know, but please bare with me. LOL!!!

 

Just want to keep this UP until I post again!

 

Up up up! C'mon, I need a post! I have to find out what happens to Darth Datree! So more more more more more!!!

 

Hey everyone!
*ducks flying objects hurtled towards her*
I'm sorry there hasn't been a post in...*wispers* a month.
Darth Ratsputin is leaving to go to a French University on the other side of the
country though, so we are busy getting him ready to leave. We 'Hope' to get a
post to you in the next few weks though! So please be patient. And could
you all help keep this up? It would be much appretiated! And this time it wouldn't
take 20min's to find!
Luv ya all!

 

Aha! Found this on page 13, I did. So now I say:

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!
and
MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!

er, pretty please?

 

Thanks Bastet!
Darth Ratsputin is ust getting set up in his Nova Scotia dorm room...so we have to give him a few days before he can help more on the story.
But don't worry we have NOT forgotten about the story, it's just a busy time of year.
Thanks for keepin the story UP! It will help up find it when we have a post ready!

 

Wow! I just found this story, its great keep posting!!!

 

Wow, thanks! I was hoping to get a post up sooner, but Darth Flu struck my family, AND Darth Ratsputin, so we've been pre-occupied.
Okay, I'm now going to try to think of a mini post to keep your attention until we can get a BIG one up!
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The ground rumbled under them as they ran, it seemed like the earth would swallow
them up if they paused for even moment.

'Something' was breaking through the ground, but none of them DARED turn around
to get a look.

The air was filled with a horrendous 'roar,' it was like nothing the Jedi had ever heard.

The trees snapped and fell like they were but twigs.

Qui-Gon knew there was only one thing he could do: RUN. And that'sexactly what he did.
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There, I'm REALLY sorry it's so short, but I just wrote it off the top of my head.
Thanks for keeping this story UP, you don't know how much it means to us!

 

Hello, Darth Ratsputin, co-writer of this fanfic, here. Well, after a couple of months of Tenel'Ka bugging me to write the plot for the dramatic conclusion to the story, I finally did, and my "plot outline" turned out to be as long as 1/3 of what's been written so far!

But Tenel'Ka loved it, it has some great character moments and some tense action, and a surprise ending. It kinda wrote itself. So she's busy working on it right now.

While I'm here, I might as well ask, has anyone ever done any fanfic in comic book form? Any online Star Wars FanFic Comics?

 

Hey everyone! We're baaaaccccckkkkk!!!!

I've been working on the story this evening, and should have a new post for you in the next couple of days.

So...anyone want to comment on whats been written to date?

until later...but soon!

 

Well, it is a nice story that has been ignored for to long and needs to have its authors post more frequently... as it is now November and it looked like the last story post was in July... an awfully long time to leave poor Qui-gon and Obi-wan running for their lives from... from what?

Please post soon!

 

Wooohoooo!
I'm so glad you're back, Tenel'ka! Yaayy!! I'm really looking forward to your next post! I *so* want to know whats going on in that clearing!! What's gonna happen?!?! And I also *so* want to know all about Datree and the mysterious mission of that other Jedi that Qui-Gon stumbled across. All verrry verrry interrresting!
Can't wait for mmmmmooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!

 

Just joining in! WOW! Scary! What's coming out of the ground?! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. BTW the description of the scene with the lightning was really well done.

Imzadi

 

I hope it grabs Obi-Wan, chews on him for a minute, then spits him out, just like that swamp creature did with R2D2!

 

Jane! *gasps* What do you mean chews him for a minute?! Chew him a lot! I mean, uh, no, um, leave him alone.

Imzadi

 

WOW. I'm speechless. I never realised so many people would reply to this.

Just for that...I'm gonna try my darndest to post TONIGHT!!!

Happy now y'all?

 

YAY!!!

 

That's nothing. 'I' had to re-read it to know what's going on!!!

Okay, and now, the moment you've all been waiing for... MORE!!!

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Clouds gathered in the sky overhead. Qui-Gon was practically
dragging Obi-Wan after him. He wasn't sure where they would go,
but he knew they had to get away from whatever was behind them.

A bone-chilling scream came from the hole that was getting larger.
It was a deafening sound, one that was of agonizing pain yet full of
pure rage. Qui-Gon felt a wave of force wash over him freezing him
and his padawan in their tracks. He looked down to see if his body
was still there; even though it was, he could not feel it at all. The
Jedi Master turned his head and saw Datree in the same predicament,
her eyes filled with fear. He looked at his apprentice, who was still in
a daze from his electrocution. His eyes were blank as if his mind was
elsewhere. Qui-Gon heard the rumble of the earth, and unable to take
another step, turned to face whatever evil was behind him. The great
Jedi Master physically trembled at what he saw.

A creature's head and neck had emerged from the planet's crust. The
part of the creature Qui-Gon could see was as wide as a republic cruiser
and as tall as two cruisers stacked on top of each other. It had a huge
squared mouth with a giant razor sharp tooth stretching it open at each
corner. The two giant thin arms with were connected at the creature's
neck. Each wrist had bony spikes encircled the ends of them, in place
of where hands should be, stretched down, taking a strong hold of the
planet. Then it let out another hideous roar, knocking the Jedi and
Datree from their feet with a wave of power that they recognised as
being from the dark side.

There was no silence. Qui-Gon could barely remember what it was
like. The air was filled with a deafening rumble, and the creature's
piercing screams. Qui-Gon stared at the creature as it opened its
mouth, lowered its grey scaly head and chomped down on the ground,
crushing the rock to pebbles with unimaginable strength. As the
creature continued to widen its hole to pull the rest of itself out, the
solid rock surrounding the beast crumbled under its power like loose dirt.
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I appoligise for how short it was, but I thought that was the perfect time to
stop until the next post, because the next one is going to be LONG!!! (by
our standards anyway.

 

yup, happy I am, happier I will be when post I see!

 

Look again. Post there is!

 

Ahhhh! *scrambles under desk*

 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Imzadi, make room for me!!! What is that thing?!?! It's way freaky, and yet at the same time, totally kkewwwwwlllll!!! Mwuhahahaha! It must be eating lunch, and now it has three tasty humans for dessert! Mwuhahaha!
Awesome Tenel'ka! Can't wait for more!!

 

Oh, I hope you have a big desk Imzadi, please can I join you.... That thing looks positively scary!

Please post soon!