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Before - Legends Obedience- A short Viggi about a Master and his ever obedient Padawan - Qui- Obi

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Gkilkenny, Jan 13, 2006.

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  1. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Master star 4

    Mar 27, 2004

    Title: Obedience
    Author: Gkilkenny
    Genre: sillyness
    Characters: Obi and Qui

    Summary: A bit of silly ness to pass the time.

    Obi-wan stared at the place where Qui-Gon was currently sitting; his mouth was gaping open, he was shocked that his Master would loose concentration in this way and find himself in his current predicament.

    ?Padawan are you going to stand there all day waiting for a fly to enter your mouth, or are you going to close it and come and assist me.? Qui-Gon asked his now dismayed apprentice.

    Obi-wan started to shake his head. ?Do I have to?? Obi asked

    ?If you do not intend to help me, we are going to be very late for the Ambassadors party and as I have indicated, I require some assistance, and as you are ?my apprentice? it is your duty, if I so request it to help me? He stated.

    ?But Master,! please do not make me, I spent all afternoon making sure I was presentable for the Ambassadors party.

    Does it have to be me, that has to help you?? He whined.

    ?I can go and find some one else to assist you.? Obi added.

    ?Obi-wan if you wish me to give you a direct order, I will?" Qui-Gon glared at his now sullen apprentice.

    ?But I thought you would help your Master no matter what conditions we found ourselves in.? Qui added.

    ?But Master I am not in the same condition as you, and if I come in there, I can assure you that I will not go, to the Ambassadors party.?
    Obi confirmed folding his arms across his chest.

    ?Very well then Padawan, I will not ask you again, I will do it my self.? Qui-Gon snapped.

    Qui-Gon inched closer and closer until he was within a metre of the edge.

    To help his Master Obi-wan would need to go to him.
    But for some reason Obi-wan could sense his Master was not as stuck as he said he was.

    ?Now my Padawan you will wade out here and take my hand and pull me out.? Qui-Gon berated

    Obi-wan hesitated. ?But Master I do not see the point of both of us being late for the Ambassadors party.?
    Obi-wan practically begged.

    ?Isn?t it more important that you assist me, ?Padawan? than worry about a party.?

    ?But Master I have been looking forward to dancing with the Ambassadors Daughter. You promised me that nothing would interfere with our down time, 'this time Master !?

    ?Obi-wan lighten up You worry to much, didn?t I give you my word that you would enjoy yourself on this vacation.?

    ?Yes Master - You did give your word? Obi-wan admitted.

    ?Tell me Padawan have you had a good time since we have been here?? Qui-Gon asked while waiting for Obi-wan to help him.

    ?Yes Master I have had the best time, but I think the good times are going to be over shortly? Obi-wan said as he fretted.

    ?Nonsense Padawan this is just a detour.? His Master said with a smile.

    Qui-Gon held out his hand. ?Now my ever obedient Padawan take my hand? Qui-Gon said sharply.

    Obi-wan waded out , with a repulsed look on his face and extended his hand grasping his Masters, and was about to pull him out when Qui-Gon reached up and pulled Obi-wan by the front of his tunic.

    Obi-wan yelled ?No Master you wouldn?t?

    ?Oh But I would my Padawan who just hates to get dirty? he said. As Qui-Gon pulled his very perfect
    and proper and clean apprentice into the mud hole that Qui-Gon had slipped into.

    He laughed at his now covered in mud apprentice, and said. ?Besides my ever faithful Padawan the party doesn?t start for another hour yet.?

    Short but fun I hope.

  2. obi_webb

    obi_webb Jedi Master star 4

    Aug 4, 2005
    short but fun indeed! =D= nice to see qui pull something like that on obi! i can picture obi's reaction when he falls into the mud... i bet he was a bit upset at first, but eventually i'm sure he saw the humor in the situation! :p
    great job!
  3. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

    Jul 26, 2005
    [face_laugh] [face_laugh][face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    That was priceless!

    I can just picture Qui pull Obi into the mudhole!


    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  4. kenobiwanobi

    kenobiwanobi Jedi Youngling star 3

    Jun 26, 2005
    Great job!=D= Wonderfully funny.[face_laugh] (yet true)

    May the force be with you and may fate be kind to you[face_peace]
  5. Kestrel_Kenobi

    Kestrel_Kenobi Jedi Master star 4

    Sep 26, 2005
    Ah, a cheeky Qui-Gon!
    I really enjoyed this GKilkenny
    Lots of fun - well done.
  6. corellian-jedi

    corellian-jedi Jedi Youngling star 2

    Jun 4, 2005
    Cute! ;) Nicely done, Gkilkenny.

  7. Mind_Tricked

    Mind_Tricked Jedi Youngling star 1

    Dec 1, 2005
    It's nice to have an ever obedient Padawan to pull into mud from time to time!

    Hilarious! [face_laugh] Great job, Gkilkenny! =D=
  8. Stella_Ripple

    Stella_Ripple Jedi Youngling star 3

    Jul 29, 2005
    Whats this I see? A new method to get obi to lighten up? [face_laugh] Trust Qui!
    Great job =D=
  9. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

    Jul 18, 2005
    Obi-wan yelled ?No Master you wouldn?t?

    ?Oh But I would my Padawan?

    :eek: Qui-Gon, that was mean! [face_shame_on_you]

    I wouldn't care for a mud bath either! ;)

    GK, I thought you liked Obi-Wan! o_O


  10. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

    Dec 30, 1999
    Hee hee! [face_laugh]

    I love the image of Qui pulling prim-and-proper Obi into a mudhole. Hope it helped him lighten up some. [face_love]

    Thanks for the great viggie Gkilkenny! :D
  11. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrely Community Mod star 9 Staff Member Manager

    Jul 7, 2000
    Most silly and cute. [face_laugh]
  12. maychorian

    maychorian Jedi Padawan star 4

    Jan 7, 2005
    Very cute! =D= Yay, Qui-Gon, being the playful one for once. And poor Obi-Wan getting all dirty! [face_laugh] I'm sure his Master will make it up to him.
  13. bmwgurl17

    bmwgurl17 Jedi Master star 3

    Jul 11, 2005
    AWwwww.:_| I dont want Qui-go to die in TPM....Sorry just a little agry about that ending.*Sigh* This is why its hrad for me to read before the saga. I feel so bad about Obi.
  14. Jedi_Tigris

    Jedi_Tigris Jedi Knight star 4

    Mar 7, 2005
    [face_laugh] Oh poor Obi-Wan, having his master do that to him. I think he'd be shocked and a bit angry, but then get into the fun. :p Probably start some mudwrestling or something with Qui.

    Great bit of fun!
  15. micky-nikki

    micky-nikki Jedi Youngling star 1

    Dec 31, 2005
    lol that was good! this was really good. great job!=D=
  16. LilyHobbitJedi

    LilyHobbitJedi Jedi Knight star 5

    Aug 29, 2005
    How cute, and I can totally picture Qui-Gon doing that to Obi-Wan. Great job! =D=
  17. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Master star 4

    Mar 27, 2004

    obi_webb thanks I just imagined that Qui-Gon would have that kind of devious mind to
    make Obi-wan relax[face_devil]

    KELIAObi always looked so serious in the movies
    but every now and then a twinkle of humour escaped him
    so hopefully he would see the funny side.[face_laugh]

    kenobiwanobi Most of my stories are angsty and have Qui-Gon the stern master so I thought this
    would be a change8-}

    Kestrel_Kenobi Thank you. I am sure Obi-wan didn't think he was cheeky at the time.:eek:

    corellian-jedi Thanks. Cute? Obi or Qui
    or both
    Umm yes both are cute8-}

    Mind_Tricked I would love to see Obi covered
    in mud I am sure he would pout!:mad:

    Stella_Ripple Yes! Qui-Gon has given him a lesson
    of lightening up, relax, enjoy life.[face_dancing]

    Star_Drifter You know me well Star!

    GK, I thought you liked Obi-Wan
    I do, I do!
    I just love the little fella, and I am sure he looked wonderful even with mud all over him.

    It has been raining for a while here, and this little
    viggi planted itself in my head after I stepped out of my car into a mud puddle.[face_laugh]

    BastetYour very welcome.
    I think of these things on the spur of the moment, so I decided to start writing them down.:D

    Healer Leona Most silly and cute Thanks
    I try, and sometime after a long day silly things come to mind the easiest.:D

    maychorian I'm sure his Master will make it up to him. Oh I am sure Obi-wan will think of something
    just as devious or maybe I will. Thanks[face_devil]

    I dont want Qui-go to die in TPM:_|

    Yes it was sad, you think they could have just injured him
    and let him oversee Anakins training, instead of leaving his Padawan to handle it all by himself. Poor Obi-wan
    Thanks for coming to before the saga anyway.@};-

    Jedi_Tigris WoW mud wrestling I never thought of that
    that might be fun.[face_dancing]
    Naw! Obi-wan would get mud in his braid.[face_shame_on_you]

    micky-nikki Thank you! Qui-Gon and Obi-wan deserve
    some down time on the boards most of their lives are
    ansgty and action.
    A bit of mud should cool them off. 8-}

    lilyhobbitjedi It was fun to write and more fun thinking of a mud covered Obi-wan[face_laugh]

    Thanks Guys and gals @};- [:D]

  18. Sarabi

    Sarabi Jedi Youngling

    Jan 5, 2006
    Ha! I love your story! What other stories have you written? Will you write a sequel?
  19. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Master star 4

    Mar 27, 2004

    Hi Sarabi Welcome and thanks
    I have written a few stories they are in my Bio

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