Excellent! I've told you this several times already but you show so much potential! It would be a shame if you didn't explore this more. Glad you tackled these two, it had crossed my mind but I decided to try something different for a change! The changes you made with froggys help only served to flesh out what was already a well written piece. I know you worked hard on it, and it shows. Hope you try your hand at somemore vignettes!