Obi-Wan Kenobi meet............ (read to find out who) *NEW POST 3-23 *

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  1. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    wow! someone actually read it!
    Thanks!
    I'll try to get some more out this weekend!
    (At the moment homework calls)
    For now.....UP!
    Thanks again 4 reading
    SW-K
  2. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    UP!
    I have a post coming today after school!
    Is anyone still reading this?!?!
  3. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    up one more time....i have to go do my h/w and then I am gonna put up the new post....that is if I still have any readers :)
  4. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Obi-Wan's mind raced. What were they going to do? He looked around anxiously searching for an idea. He had a feeling that the hotel manager who looked somewhat like a Toydarian, would not appreciate it if he tried to explain that his parents were lightyears away on a the small planter of Tatooine and they hadn't seen him in 12 years.

    Then his eye caought a poster behind the desk reading,

    "ISU RA'DANI PLAYING HERE TONIGHT!"

    The poster had a large, burly looking humanoid holding some type of instrument in his hand.

    He suddenly got an idea, it was crazy but it could buy them a little time.

    In his most truthful sounding voice he said,

    "I'm here to meet Isu Ra'Dani, I'm his son."

    He waited anxiously, wondering if the manager would buy his story. Then Obi-Wan saw a grin spread across his face.

    "I didn't know Usi had a son!" he remarked almost a little suspiciously.

    Obi-Wan gulped, but before he could say anything the toydarian burst out!

    "Well, it seems like the old fellow has been keeping some things from me! Imagine never telling me about his son!" he exclaimed.

    Obi-Wan heaved a sigh of relief and he heard Bant do the same.

    "Right this way!" The manager said...still chuckling to himslef all the while.

    They two children followed the toydarian through some dark corridors and up a few flights of creaky stairs, his wings flitting noisily all the while. They went down one last corridor until he stopped in front of a door at the very end.

    "Here you are," he said, and then flitted off with another word!

    Obi-Wan and Bant stood idly by the door, not sure of what to do next. Bant looked at Obi-Wan nervously.

    "Now what?" she asked in a timid voice.

    Their options ran through Obi-Wan's mind. If they left, the toydarian would know they were up to something, that is if they could even make their way back to the lobby. Then again, if they knocked who knows what would happen.

    Obi-Wan knew that Isu Ra'Dani would recognize that he wasn't his son, that is if he even had a son. And what about Bant? This Isu certainly didn't look like the friendliest person in the world on the poster.

    Obi-Wan felt lost once more. Maybe leaving the Temple wasn't such a good idea. What were they going to do?

    Obi-Wan's mind thought back to the menacing stare of the toydarian in the lobby. He gave a quick glance at Bant, and then towards Bant before gulping loudly. He had made a decision. He raises his hand and knocked loudly on the door.

    -----------------TBC----------------------


  5. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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  6. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    ahhh a new post and i have no more readers!
    How depressing!
  7. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    well, up one more time 4 tonite.....
    I can onle hope



    *sing song voice* Oh where oh where have the readers gone? Oh where oh where can they be?
  8. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    HEY!!! I'm here don't stop this story PLEASE!!!!
  9. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Oh, wow!! It's back!! Cool!

    *Sits down with a bowl of popcorn*

    More soon please! :D
  10. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    SWEET! READERS!!!! YAY YAY YAY!!!
    Just for that I will try my best to have another post up this afternoon!
    YAY YAY YAY!!!
    S-WK
  11. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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  12. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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  13. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Hey!
    Just bringing this to da top!
    Glad u guys r still here~!
    I'm working on the next post right now!



    ~S-WK
  14. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    They anxiously waited a few moments before hearing a slight rustling behind the door. Soon they heard a latch turn, and a face peeked out from the crack in the door. The eyes darted around nervously until finally resting on Bant and Obi-Wan. He seemed to examine them for a moment before finally opening the door.

    "Who are you?" he asked in an almost timid voice, not fitting the burly man on the poster.

    Obi-Wan thought for a moment. Should he tell the truth? She he try to make up a story? How would this man react to suddenly finding two children standing outside his hotel room door? Maybe he should have thought this through more carefully.

    Suddnely he looked up and noticed the man was still eyeing them suspiciously. He dacided he might as well tell the truth.


    "Ummmmm....." he started out nervously.
    "Well...we're ummm....from the Jedi Temple." He said the last part very quickly as if anxious to get it out.

    The man whom Obi-Wan was now guessing was Isu, was still gicing them a quizzical stare.

    "And you're here BECAUSE??" He asked almost sarcastically.

    Obi-Wan siged and guessed he had better just say it all now.

    "Well...we were training at the Temple...but they were going to send my frined away." he said this and then nodded toward Bant before continuing.


    "So..." he said. "We stole a speeder, and left....and then we came here. Thsi place was the only place we could find, but the manger wouldn't give us a room without our parents....so......soooo.....I saw your poster and I told him I was your son...and he led us here."

    Obi-Wan said this last part almost quiltily, but with a pleading tone as well.

    Isu stared at them a moment longer and then he couldn't help but smile.

    "And he believed you?!?!" he chuckled, mainly to himself. "The old fool!!!!"

    He chuckled soem more and Obi-Wan and Bant looked at each other with bewilderment. This didn't last long though, for Isu soon said,

    "Well come on in why don't you? There's no point in talking out here in the hall!"
  15. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    hehe just as a little bribe I thought I'd let my few readers know that I have the next installment...and will be happy to post it after i see signs of feedback :)

    *does this count as blackmail ;-)*
    j/k


    -S-WK
  16. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    sorry I saw that somewhere and liked it
  17. Jenny_The_Jedi_Girl Jedi Master

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    HEHEHEHE YEAH IT WAS MEEE HEHE DIDN'T KNOW OTHER'S LIKED IT FEEL FREE TO USE ALL MY SAYING'S HEHEHEHE :D
  18. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Ok......I guess I'll call that feedback ;-)

    Or should i wait a while before posting the next part? hmmmmmmm....
    hehe......I love this
  19. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Hmmmmmm to post the next part or not to post it......that is the question.......

    maybe I'll wait for a little more feedback
    =0)
  20. Cheryl_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    YOU"RE MEAN *puts thumb in mouth*
  21. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    O.K.....I guess I'll post :)
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    Obi-Wan and Bant were relieved and slightly shocked. This man was actually going to let them in? Just like that? They decided to shrug it off, and followed Isu into the room.
    It was brightly lit compared to the dark hallway, although the furnishings were only slightly nicer than those in the lobby.


    There was one bed, with a shabby blue comforter, a small desk with a chair, and a set of drawers.

    There were a few duffle bags lying here and there, as well as some sheet music scattered about on the bed, and a datapad on the desk.

    Obi-Wan noticed an oddly shaped case in the corner, which he guessed held Isu's instrument he had seen on the poster.

    "Have a seat," Isu said. He shoved the music on the bed aside, motioning for Obi-Wan and Bant to set down, and pulling up the desk chair for himself.

    "Well..." he said.
    "I guess you know who I am by now....but who are you two?"


    "Well, I'm Obi-Wan Kenobi." Obi-Wan began.
    "And I'm Bant," the small girl chimed in.

    "Well Hello Obi-Wan Kneobi and Bant!" Isu said in a smailing voice.

    Obi-Wan was too curious, he just had to ask.
    "So why did you let us in? I mean you don't even know us."

    The question seemed to make Isu uncomfortable, but he cleared his throat and replied.

    "My brother was--or is a Jedi. I remember him leaving when I was really little. I-I've never seen him since....I don't even know if he's alive or dead.......I guess when you two said you were from the Temple, it just touched me somehow."
  22. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    up....
    hey readers there's a post here!
    hehe
    feedback please
  23. KenobisGirl Jedi Master

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    Cool posts!!

    More soon please!! :D
  24. blueangel Jedi Knight

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    Your story is cute, I like stories about the

    young Obi-Wan!!! And this one is really

    witty. G O O N [face_clown]
  25. snowbee-wan kenobi Jedi Master

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    Hey,
    Thanks for the replies KenobisGirl and Blueangel......
    I have to go ride my pony right now :)
    But I will try to get more up as soon as possible.....
    Please put up with me if this week is kinda busy....we have tests and projects and stuff......but I promise I will write lots over Christmas break!
    -S-WK
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