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Saga Observations they are, Master Yoda's diary, completed

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by earlybird-obi-wan, Jan 1, 2010.

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  1. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    Smile he had on his face. Told me that Anakin is there deep inside the dark shell.
    Anakin now with lightsaber master.

    Light will return him from the dark.


    Interesting change from "Once you start down the dark side, forever will it dominate you" concept.

    Much time has gone by... and hope prevails.
     
  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Nice! =D= =D= The faith that Obi-Wan has for Anakin's redemption :)

     
  3. The_Nerfherder

    The_Nerfherder Jedi Youngling star 1

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    As dm1 said, hope prevails. Great update, earlybird-obi-wan! =D=
     
  4. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Quite devastating to feel the destruction of Alderaan.

    Obi-Wan has joined Qui-Gon.

    =D=
     
  5. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Qui-Gon telling me Alderaan destroyed it is.
    Wept for the lost lives.


    Even with a few words you take one on an emotional roller coaster.

    =D=
     
  6. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    It sure does in his next entry


    He is staying positive and in the next post;)

    Thank you again


    I saw ANH a week ago and ESB yesterday.

    thanks again all of you and the next update was inspired by watching ESB yesterday

    Entry 25

    Son of Anakin arrived today.
    Same as father he is.

    Looking for great warrior he was
    Told him wars don?t make one great.

    Strange food he had. Wondered how big he could grow eating that.
    Got powerlamp and into argument with him. Calling Dagobah slimy mudhole he was. Got into argument with well known astromech. Anakin?s astromech it had been. Amidala?s astromech before that. Told him that taking him to Yoda I would.

    No patience in the boy
    Obi-Wan arguing with me different Luke is.
    Doubt I have
    Luke told me not afraid he was

    Humpfh
    Train him I will.
    Hope he is.



     
  7. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I think the scene when we meet Yoda is the funniest scene in The Empire Strikes Back.

    And he puts up such a great act! The only time is 'slips' is when he says that Anakin was a powerful Jedi.
     
  8. dm1

    dm1 Jedi Master star 4

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    Just about the funniest, Yoda really pushed it, didn't he? And Luke banging his head on the ceiling...

    If Luke found all these Force sensitives afterwards, weren't they around somewhere during this time? What if one of them found Yoda and trained instead of Luke? So many questions... things could have been very different.

    [face_thinking]
     
  9. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    [face_laugh]

    "Strange food" ;)

    Love Yoda's observations/impressions of Luke [face_laugh]

     
  10. serendipityaey

    serendipityaey Jedi Master star 4

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    What a great idea, very fun to read

    'Obi-Wan very naughty he was. Made drawing in my diary' :D

    'Obi-Wan lost he is on Jabiim.
    Anakin come back alone he has. Not believing master is gone.
    Siri not believing Obi-Wan gone he is.
    Agree I do. Obi-Wan somewhere in great pain he is. But regaining his freedom he will.'
    -great story-telling in just a few lines

    'Hope there is
    Luke and Leia.'

    -sad and beautiful :_|

    'Two children.
    Hope for the future.'

    -sad and beautiful again, and great descriptions about how they are all still connected [face_love]
     
  11. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Yes I thought that first meeting was fun and Yoda eating that bar.
    A bit of humour and Yoda was a weird one.

    Good job.=D=
     
  12. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    You writting the scene from Yoda´s point of view is very refreshing.
     
  13. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Lady_Misty
    dm1
    Jade_eyes
    serendipityaey
    Gkilkenny
    AzureAngel2


    The scene was very funny and showing the great directorship of Irvin Kershner.

    And to honour him the next entry is also from that favorite OT movie of mine

    Entry 26

    Luke training I am.
    Made him carrying pouch and traveled along whispering the rules of the Jedi.

    Artoo sneaky little droid he was.
    Made picture.
    Luke painted us hmmmmh talent he has.

    [image=http://i279.photobucket.com/albums/kk124/earlybird-obi-wan/forcenetart/dagobah.jpg]

    Wetted me in missing leap over the pond he did. Told him to continue exercise in Force lifting.
    Artoo spoiling concentration he did. X-wing disappearing it was.
    Showed him that sizes matters not.

    Should have left X-Wing in pond.
    Luke gone he is. Friends in trouble on Bespin.

    Fear for him I do.
    Not ready to face his father he is.

     
  14. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I'd hate getting splashed too, especially if it was swamp water.
     
  15. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Fantab tribute and update =D=

     
  16. The_Nerfherder

    The_Nerfherder Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Wonderful, nice to see Yoda in a teaching position. It seems somehow natural to him. Nice! =D=
     
  17. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Excellent, a very good likeness to Luke and Yoda the artwork is incredible.
    Yoda is right Luke left Yoda too soon.

    Great diary.=D=
     
  18. JediKaren

    JediKaren Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Dang you can draw and paint! You could seriously make money with your talent.

    Not a bad entry. Just wish they were longer. Interesting that you are going off the book version rather than the movie.
     
  19. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Great use for a painting that I know so well.

    :D
     
  20. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Thank you for your support during the year[face_dancing]

    And thank you for your kind words and support during the year.[:D]

    teaching for 900 years he has and Thank you[face_dancing]

    Yes and thanks again for the great support for this diary

    I was reading the book when I wrote the entry. and thank you


    And thank you for visiting this diary each time[:D]

    Thanks all for reading this diary and the last entry is this one

    Entry 27

    Old I have become.
    But
    Learned all I have.

    Qui-Gon taught me he did.
    Discussed with Obi-Wan all and know.

    Can become the same.
    Can become one with the Force

    Wait I will for Luke to come
    Obi-Wan told me Luke fighting father he was
    Refusing to join him

    And increasing the small light. Obi-Wan visiting Anakin he was.

    Saw the anguish on the ravaged face. A father missing his son.
    Anakin still inside he is.

    Luke help him he will.
    Luke coming he is

    Anakin bring balance he will.


    FIN
     
  21. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Wicked good!
     
  22. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Awesome, moving finish @};-

    =D=
     
  23. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Anakin bring balance he will.

    I wish he could have done so without bringing so much misery into the universe before hand.
     
  24. The_Nerfherder

    The_Nerfherder Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Great ending, earlybird-obi-wan. =D=
     
  25. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Awwww....

    I'm glad Yoda had the fortitude to hang on until Luke could return to Dagobah.

    Great job on this

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
     
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