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Beyond - Legends Of Rogues and Remnants: COMPLETED, January 19, 2004!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by rogue11lovesjag, Mar 18, 2003.

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  1. InyriForge

    InyriForge Jedi Master star 5

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    Rogue, don't hate me for taking 500!

    I loved it! Especially the part where Kirney hoped to retain her sanity. It reminded me of a great line by Wedge.

    *sits and waits for next post*

    ~Inyri
     
  2. Daughter_of_Yubyub

    Daughter_of_Yubyub Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Great post! :D

    YubYub and TG- Protecting fangirls from hormonally gifted fanboys since 2002
     
  3. -thor-

    -thor- Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Uh ... I didn't know Kirney liked fishing. Petri Heil! :p [face_laugh]
     
  4. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    Yay, she's got them! :D Go Kirney! I hope Myn cares about her too. He probably will. :p

    And hibernating Kolot = cute! [face_love]

    Jae Angel

    ED: my speeling = poo at midnight :(
     
  5. Pelranius

    Pelranius Jedi Master star 5

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    Do Ewoks really hibernate, BTW?
     
  6. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    InyriForge, I don't hate you! :D In fact, I was hoping someone would take 500 for me!

    DOY, Thanks!

    thor, :p

    NJ, We'll see. ;)

    Pelranius, I don't think that Ewoks hibernate, I was just making a joke. :D

    ~Rogue
     
  7. InyriForge

    InyriForge Jedi Master star 5

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    Rogue, what's with the whole "InyriForge" thing all of a sudden? :p

    ~Inyri
     
  8. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    See, shows how much attention I was paying to answering reviews. :p

    ~Rogue
     
  9. InyriForge

    InyriForge Jedi Master star 5

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    Well, if you want to be all formal and such, I'll just have to go back to calling you "Rogue11luvsjag" instead of "Rogue" and "Hobbie's Girlfriend." :p ;)

    ~Inyri
     
  10. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hey, I happen to like the title of "Hobbie's Girlfriend."

    ~Rogue
     
  11. InyriForge

    InyriForge Jedi Master star 5

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    I know. ;) Rogue + Hobbie = [face_love]

    ~Inyri
     
  12. JAGSGURL15

    JAGSGURL15 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    ROGUE11LOVESJAG!!

    i am totally in love with ur story and i love the connection uve got between donos and slane!! i cant say i agree with the hobbie and inyri thing but oh well! i like wes and inyri!

    i think they should hook up in the books!

    lol

    i love ur story and i want to say

    UPPIES
     
  13. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    WHEEE!!! I am out of school!!!!! I just took my last final and guess what??? That means posties soon!!!!!!!!

    *is way top hyper for her own good, will now go and calm down while she contemplates your next post which will be up shortly*

    Hey, has anyone seen the Battlestar Galactica miniseries? I've been watching it the past couple of days (instead of studying like I should have been).

    ~Rogue
     
  14. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I had this one done, so it's getting updated before Aftermath, but I'm working of Aftermath, for those of you who read it. I'm sooo glad to be back, if you can't tell. :D

    ~Rogue

    ***

    Kirney approached slowly, her blaster out and ready. Dreyf was light behind her, and she nodded to Kolot.

    The Ewok stopped the door panel, and Kirney and Dreyf ducked into the bay.

    The incoming blaster fire was almost immediate and Kirney dove behind crates she?d stacked, firing stun bolts into the smoky bay.

    The blaster fire was sporadic, flying in every direction, which meant he couldn?t see them either. Kirney stuck her head around the edge of the crate. He was moving around, and Kirney tried to track his blaster fire, but without much luck.

    She heard someone coughing and turned around, just barely keeping herself from shooting Dreyf. ?Where is he?? she hissed. Dreyf shrugged, and Kirney leaned toward the open door. ?Kolot!?

    The Ewok poked his head around. ?Start venting the bay. Slowly.?

    Kolot nodded, and the door slammed shut. ?Do you know what you?re doing?? Dreyf asked.

    ?Do you have a better idea?? she asked, coughing. ?It?s just to clear the smoke out.?

    Dreyf resolutely took hold of the door frame. ?Just in case Kolot lets the air out too fast.?

    ?Good idea,? Kirney said, holding onto a crate, trusting Kolot a little more than Dreyf. ?You know he doesn?t like you.?

    Dreyf opened his mouth to answer, but he was drowned out by the sudden roar of air rushing out of the bay.

    The smoke began to clear and still holding onto the crate, she raised her blaster, firing at the shape near the fighter.

    Dreyf pulled his blaster up and squeezed off a shot. The figure crumpled.

    The air quit rushing by her ears as Kolot quit depressurizing the bay and she carefully rose. ?Come on.?

    Dragging the figure, she and Dreyf got him out of the bay, and the door shut behind them.

    ?Depressurize the whole bay, Kolot,? she said. ?The fighter?s still smoking.?

    Kolot nodded and left them to look at their captive. ?Nice shot,? she complemented Dreyf. ?Worth ten points, at least.?

    ?Being marksman rated comes in handy sometimes,? he said. ?You?re the one that caught him.?

    Kirney glanced down at Control?s face. ?He?s going to be sorry I did.?

    ***

    ?Well, I, at least, feel better knowing who?s got Control,? Wes remarked to Gavin.

    Gavin glared at him. ?Well, I?m glad. It?s not like New Republic Intelligence isn?t now suspicious about what we?ve been doing or anything. It?s not like we?re in cahoots with a traitor.?

    ?I don?t care what the NRI says. Lara isn?t a traitor.?

    ?Right now, that doesn?t matter. And you and I are going to have to deal with the wrath of one angry general,? Gavin said.

    ?It?s not my fault,? Wes said.

    ?Oh, I?m sure I can find some way to blame the entire thing on you,? Gavin said.

    ?You?ve gotten malicious since you became commander.?

    ?You?ve gotten annoying since I?ve become commander.?

    Wes looked shocked. ?Me? Annoying? Ne-?

    ?Always,? bel Iblis said, entering the office. Both then rose, and the general motioned for them to sit. ?I?ve spoken to Iella. Command isn?t happy we didn?t catch them, and they?re even less happy about who did.?

    ?What are they saying about Lara?? Gavin asked.

    ?Well, NRI is starting to put things together. According to Iella, they?re pinning the blame on her and Myn Donos. The current theory is that she talked him into helping her kidnap Antilles and Pellaeon. They don?t know why, but they figure she doesn?t want the Empire to surrender, which would be in keeping of their current view of her.?

    ?That?s ridiculous,? Wes said.

    ?Doesn?t matter. The NRI doesn?t care,? bel Iblis said. ?They?re trying to cover up their own shortcomings by blaming someone else. When this is all over, we?re likely going to have to help Donos and Notsil escape.?

    Gavin glanced uneasily at Wes. ?You?re talking treason, you know.?

    The general shrugged. ?I was talking treason well before you were born, Darkli
     
  15. JAGSGURL15

    JAGSGURL15 Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Great Job!!!! Glad your back
     
  16. -thor-

    -thor- Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    *Sigh*
    Imperial Intel is devious and sneaky - a real "Intelligence Service", but NRI seems to be a contradiction of its own name - it's just a big stupid load of nonsense.
     
  17. Pelranius

    Pelranius Jedi Master star 5

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    Who's going to get to interrograte Control?

    The NRI sounds like a bunch of political appointees, with the exception of Iella, of course.

    "I've been talking treason before you were born"
    LOL!!
    I can barely wait to see Borsk's face...
    And how does that Lady Berfi (sp) expect to defeat the whole NR military, anyways?
     
  18. _3MD_PsychoSniper

    _3MD_PsychoSniper Jedi Youngling star 4

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    Gavin glanced uneasily at Wes. ?You?re talking treason, you know.?

    The general shrugged. ?I was talking treason well before you were born, Darklighter. Why should now be any different??



    What will Wes think of Kolot ?
     
  19. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    JG15, I'm glad I'm back too!!

    -thor-, Oh, the NRI has more to do with this than you think. *evil grin*

    Pelranius, Oh, Control will be interrogated. He'll just be lucky if I decide Dreyf should do it instead of Kirney.

    3MD, I imagine Kolot will be his most fabulous dream or his worst nightmare.

    Possibly both.

    ~Rogue
     
  20. Daughter_of_Yubyub

    Daughter_of_Yubyub Jedi Grand Master star 6

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    Postie! Postie! There's a postie!

    I can't wait to see the look on Wes's face when he meets Kolot. I loved the banter between him and Gavin.

    YubYub and TG- Protecting fangirls from hormonally gifted fanboys since 2002
     
  21. InyriForge

    InyriForge Jedi Master star 5

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    ?Right now, that doesn?t matter. And you and I are going to have to deal with the wrath of one angry general,? Gavin said.

    ?It?s not my fault,? Wes said.

    ?Oh, I?m sure I can find some way to blame the entire thing on you,? Gavin said.


    Rogue, I'm so glad you're back! And it's a great post! I especially liked the above set of lines. It'd be so easy for Gavin to do so.

    ~Inyri
     
  22. Pelranius

    Pelranius Jedi Master star 5

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    Why not both (and add in Booster's crew, Karrde and associates...)

    There should be nothing left of Control by the time they're finished...
     
  23. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yubs, ;) Oh, I'm sure that Kolot and Wes will have all kinds of fun.

    Inyri, Oh, I can think of all kinds of ways to blame stuff on Wes. It's easy. :D

    Pelranius, While I'm sure that Control deserves much worse than he's going to get, Kirney should be quite adept at getting what she needs out of him.

    ~Rogue
     
  24. NarundiJedi

    NarundiJedi Jedi Master star 6

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    I hope the others committ treason! I like Myn and Lara/Kirney, and I want to see them together. AND I want to see Wes/Kolot together, like Yubs said. You just have to do that, rogue! :D Pwease? :p

    Jae Angel
     
  25. rogue11lovesjag

    rogue11lovesjag Jedi Padawan star 4

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    NJ, Treason is always fun. Don't know what we'd do without it. :)

    ~Rogue
     
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