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Beyond - Legends ~Of Roses and Racers~ Jaina/OC: Mush (Hot Jedi / Hot Celebrity) AUTHOR NOTE & APOLOGIES (Fic close)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by SITH_MAYO, May 15, 2007.

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  1. Jade_Skywalker

    Jade_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Well, that's good. ;)
     
  2. jaina-Fett

    jaina-Fett Jedi Padawan star 1

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    UP UP UP !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Absoloutly love where your going with this story =D=
    I'm normally a J/J fanatic, but Orion is absoloutly awsome [face_love]
     
  3. Jade_Skywalker

    Jade_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    So when can we expect that update? ;)
     
  4. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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  5. Jade_Skywalker

    Jade_Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah, I read it, I guess I forgot to reply. ;)

    It was a nice little taste, whilst we wait for the next post. :D
     
  6. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    :) Hopefully they'll be a post up on this next week...
    Thanks for all your support and comments.
     
  7. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    Sorry for the very long wait!!! [face_blush] There WILL be an update this weekend! I'm working on it right now.. finally, lol.
     
  8. jacensolofangirl2007

    jacensolofangirl2007 Jedi Knight star 3

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    wow this is amazing[face_hypnotized]

    please add me to your PM list if you have one[face_praying]
     
  9. Spyman290

    Spyman290 Jedi Knight star 1

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    WOW I can't believe i passed this fic up all the times i saw it this is an AWESOME fic i love the emotion you put into the situations and how real it feels.

    I can't wait to meet Pedro i hope that he and Jaina get along really well.

    Spyman

    P.S. Can i get on the PM list!!
     
  10. SITH_MAYO

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  11. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    Okay, I finally got into gear and wrote a long chapter! :) Hope you enjoy...

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    [color=royalblue][ Chapter 10 ? Opening Hearts ][/color]


    Delicious. Was the only word for Orion?s cooking.

    Jaina realised this man only bragged when it was the truth. And tonight he had definitely impressed her. A guy who knew his way around the kitchen was deadly attractive. Not that he wasn?t gorgeous already, she thought.

    He had served the tastiest meal: A succulent nerf steak smothered in spicy herbs and marinated in a mixture of sweet fruit juices made her mouth water. It had an odd but scrumptious flavour about it. Sweet yet hot. This perfectly cooked meat was sided with chili dumplings in thick gravy, giant potato wedges, and pasta mixed with a variety of vegetables in a thin cream.

    She was well and truly stuffed by the end.

    He?d been right to boast. The man could cook a fantastic meal.

    ?. . Well??

    Jaina held up a glass of emerald wine and smiled,
    ?Here?s to the chef.?

    He chuckled and inclined his head,
    ?Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.?

    ?It was exquisite.?

    ?To hear that from a Corellian is a huge compliment.? Grinned Orion, ?You?re not easy people to impress.?

    Giggling slightly, she assured him,
    ?Don?t worry. I think you?re passing expectations with flying colours.?

    ?Good.?

    Placing her empty glass upon the table, Jaina leaned closer. Resting her chin on her clasped hands, she returned his smirk as she studied him quietly.

    Orion moved to pour himself another Chandrilan brandy when she stopped him.

    The touch of her hand made his heart pause a beat.

    Her delicate fingers moved his hand away. She picked up the small brandy bottle and poured him a drink. He took the glass she offered, drank slowly, all the while his eyes watched her.

    ?Ever tried Chandrilan brandy??

    Jaina raised a challenging eyebrow and asked,
    ?Is it as good as my father?s stash of Corellian brandies??

    Shrugging nonchalantly he replied,
    ?Its good enough for me and my Chandrilan mates. I used to get drunk on it quite a lot when I was younger.?

    He handed her the brandy. After a tentative sip Jaina nodded in approval.

    ?Not bad,? she handed it back, ?Not bad at all.?

    After a pause, Orion asked,
    ?You know your beverages well. But what about food? Do you cook??

    ?Honestly its one thing I try to avoid.? Jaina smiled as she admitted, ?It?s not a talent that runs in my family. Flying, gunning, and blowing up stuff, now that I can do with my eyes closed.?

    His gorgeous laughter set her heart on fire. He poured her another glass of wine and spoke warmly,
    ?Now, that I believe wholeheartedly. I?m not naïve. I have heard about your reputation.?

    ?All bad I?m sure.? She jested.

    Shaking his head earnestly, he was quick to comfort her,
    ?Not at all. In fact, the galaxy has nothing but compliments to give you.?

    ?What did you hear??

    Gazing at her solemnly, he answered,
    ?I heard you were harsh but fair. Tough, very independent and a fighter till the end. You?re the Sword of the Jedi. Predicted to have a troublesome life, but to also bring peace and protection to all you help. I know from just having met you, that you give your all and ask for nothing in return.? A gentle smile curved at his lips as he added, ?It?s rare to find someone so beautiful, with a warm heart to match.?

    Jaina suddenly felt self-conscious hearing such a description of her self. Modest, she couldn?t stop from turning slightly red in the face. It was flattering to be thought of in that way. And for some reason she knew that if anyone else had tried saying such things, she would have thrown it back with a shrug.

    But with Orion it was different. He had spoken so sincerely that it had stunned her. It felt real and truthful coming from his mouth.
     
  12. jacensolofangirl2007

    jacensolofangirl2007 Jedi Knight star 3

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    first!!

    will be back later :D

    EDIT: ok i'm back:D

    wow that was really great, loved every part on it!!=D=

    you write everything so fantastic, I loved that that kiss at the end though the best :D

    I can't wait for the next part!!!
     
  13. Jade_Skywalker

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    Well, that brought in a few interesting aspects. First of all, and yes, I really must comment on this, the dinner was awesome. Seriously, when men know how to cook, they KNOW how to cook. That description of the meal made my mouth water. ;)

    Orion's little problem with his back showed a very interesting side to him that we haven't seen before. I love how much you show his love for his son, and how much it hurts him to not have Pedro around.

    And YAY! Jaina finally got past her guilt thing. 'Bout time. Hehehe, I wonder what Mara will have to say about this. ;) Something along the lines of "I told you so," I can imagine. :D
     
  14. Flowerlady

    Flowerlady Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow!!! =D=

    I loved the meal...what woman doesn't love a man who can cook? [face_love]

    Poor Orion he really was torn apart in that accident. But yay, he's Force-sensitive maybe Jaina can teach him some Force healing techniques to help.

    And finally, wow...that was some kiss! :*

    Wonderful, Louise....as always... I love this story. [:D]


    Sara
     
  15. SITH_MAYO

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  16. VaderLVR64

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    That meal was great, but now I'm hungry! :p

    Loved the update! =D=
     
  17. SITH_MAYO

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  18. jacensolofangirl2007

    jacensolofangirl2007 Jedi Knight star 3

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    so whens the next chapter?? I want the next chapter!!:_| Please, Please, Please, pretty please[face_batting]

    can't wait [face_peace] this is really great and I need to know what happens next!
     
  19. SITH_MAYO

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  20. jacensolofangirl2007

    jacensolofangirl2007 Jedi Knight star 3

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    ahem o_O where's the next part? ;)

    can't wait! please please hurry! [face_batting]
     
  21. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    Sorry about the delay, DRL is getting very busy lately. Uni and work is getting in the way. But in a week or so I should have more spare time to come back to this. There will be an update up within the next 2 weeks.

    My apologies. Thanks for waiting. Your support is great![face_peace]
     
  22. ccp

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    Great story.
    Could you add me to the PM list?
     
  23. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks for clicking, glad ya like it, it would be great to add you to the PM list..:)
     
  24. SITH_MAYO

    SITH_MAYO Jedi Master star 4

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    Update coming up next!:) Sorry about the long wait... DRL has been hecktic lately.
     
  25. Handmaiden_Azul

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    just got caught up...whew
     
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