Beyond - Legends On The Field

Hey, it just popped in my head, like, right now.


I walked on the field
Field in the stars

I walked on the field
A planet like Mars

I walked on the field
Just passing by

I walked on the field
No one saying 'hi'

I walked on the field
No one looking my way

I walked on the field
For only today

I looked on the field
Saying my good-byes

I looked on the field
With tears in my eyes

I looked on the field
And to my dismay

A Jedi's stunned body
Faded away

*_DONE_*

Pretty good for a spur of the moment, nah?

 

hmm. very interesting. not bad at all, i'd say.

 

that's really good!!!!! you captured the emotion beautifully!

it made me think of the NJO when i read it!

all the deaths...Anakin

wonderful job

meg

 

Mastermeg_0228Thanks!!

MagehoundYeah...those poor Jedi...

 

Yeah, I like it, too.

 

Silsolo Why, thank you!!!

 

Holy popsicle sticks, Batman! What are we going to do?

 

i forgot to reply yesterday but i liked it

 

frankieskywalker Thanks for putting in your opinion!! Better late than never!

Healer_Leona Yeah, me too. Thank you!

Fordefan327 That has got to be the ugliest thing I have ever seen!!! lol! Glad you liked it!

 

Yeah, that really hit the spot. Sad, but at the same time, wonderful. Pretty good for spur of the moment.

 

I like it! Very creative . . . it reminded me of Qui-Gon. Don't know why.

Good job.

 

Darkwriter Thank you very much. Heh, heh...I like Qui-Gon.

Arwen Djo I agree and thank you!

 

You are most welcome.

Though instead of Anakin and Qui Gons deaths, it (for some weird reason) sounds like Jaina and her trip to the dark side. But, then again, I'm weird, so you can ignore me if ya wanna...

 

Arwen I would never ignore you!

 

Thanks Shaelyn, I feel so loved.

 

You should be. No one should resent you. Or anyone else.