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Before - Legends One by One (Obi-Wan, Bant, Qui-Gon, and others)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by padmay_skywalker, Aug 25, 2005.

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  1. KnightTachi

    KnightTachi Jedi Knight

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    Yippy! This has made my day! More soon!
     
  2. JOINME

    JOINME Jedi Padawan star 4

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    [face_dancing] Wow, that was great!

    I'm glad you got your notes back! [face_dancing]

    I really enjoyed this update. :D

    The medical ward. A learner has been kidnapped.?

    ?Other then Obi-Wan?? Qui-Gon was genuinely shocked.

    ?Yes master.? Obi-Wan was getting annoyed that all the masters think that he was the only one getting kidnapped which was not?actually? it was, true now that he thought about it.


    [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Oh that's just priceless! [face_laugh]

    and uh oh, that note is creepy... [face_worried]

    Can't wait for more! [face_dancing]

     
  3. -Darksaber-

    -Darksaber- Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I like this. Very creepy, that One by One thing.

    "Other than Obi-Wan?" Qui-Gon was genuinely shocked.

    Lol! [face_laugh]
     
  4. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Thanks every one! I'll try and get the next post up soon!
     
  5. Force-sensitiveLyn23

    Force-sensitiveLyn23 Jedi Master star 1

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    this is an awesome story please updae!!!!!!!!
     
  6. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    [face_thinking] I think you all deserve another Postie![face_love]

    Enjoy!

    Chapter 4 Another one down

    ?Serious this is.? Master Yoda said in a tired voice.

    ?We will need to make sure where all the Padawans are at all times. We don?t want to give who ever this mysterious vandal is any more.? Master Polo Koon said as the Chamber door shut.


    Obi-Wan and Bant tried with all their might to hear what the Master?s were saying inside the Council chamber. ?Sith! The door is sound proof! And Master Qui-Gon told me that it was force proof too.? Obi-Wan stamped his foot in frustration. ?I mean he?s our friend! We should be allowed to hear what they?re saying!? He was now pacing along a 4 foot radius, as Bant sat on a bench quietly with her head in her hands.

    ?Obi, please don?t do this. I know your upset I am too, but the Council will tell us if they want us too know.?

    ?You sound as if you don?t want to know what they are thinking!?

    ?Well, I don?t know-?


    ?What how can you say that? He?s our friend! He was kidnapped! I?m starting to think you don?t want to find him!? As soon as Obi-Wan said that he wished he could take it back. The look on his friends face made him want to die.

    Bant felt as if Obi had just slapped her. ?Obi-Wan Kenobi! How can you say that? Of course I want to find him. I loved him like a brother and I know you know that.?

    Bant ran down the hall crying partly because she was so hurt by Obi?s words, partly crying because she was scared. She knew that whoever would be next it would be close to her and Obi again. She just hopped that it wasn?t Seri or Bruck, even if he could be a jerk at times.



    [hr]Obi watched as his friend ran and cried. He wished he could cry too, but he felt that if he did the council would come out and find him and not think he was strong enough to become a Jedi Knight.
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    Bant ran hard to her room. She didn?t want people to see her as she cried again for the second time today. The door opened and she saw a familiar face, a face she hopped she wouldn?t see for a long time. He walked right up to her and said, ?You will see your friend soon don?t worry.? An evil grin fell on the face and everything went dark.

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    Obi wan walked back to Bant?s room so see if she was Ok, she wasn?t at dinner, which wasn?t a good sign at this point of time. The door opened and he saw a scene that was all too familiar. Bant?s saber was on her bed and a note was by it. The same note as last time:
    [u][b]They Will All Be Mine, One By One[/b][/u]
     
  7. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    Oh, no. [face_worried] Bant! And Obi was mean to her. :_| Poor Bant! Poor Obi! [face_worried]




    Edit: And I got the first post!!! :D :D
     
  8. Bastet

    Bastet Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh dear, now Bant has been kidnapped! Noooo! :eek: And it's someone familiar, huh? Hmm... I feel bad for Obi, now he's gonna feel guilty about the last thing he said to Bant, poor boy. :(
    More soon!
     
  9. JOINME

    JOINME Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great update! But?

    Oh no! <worried> Bant has been kidnapped?now what?s going to happen?

    *hops about nervously* Please post again soon!
     
  10. KnightTachi

    KnightTachi Jedi Knight

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    [face_worried] Oh no! Poor Bant! Who's next? :confused: More soon! I'm loving this! [face_love]
     
  11. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Obi-wan has made Bant cry and now she is missing

    Obi-wan is going to hate himself for making her cry.

    :_|
     
  12. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm gonna post soon! Don't worry! I still love you guys![face_love]

    I'm just so swamped at school and work.
     
  13. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

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    :D What a nice little fic! Padawans are disappearing one by one, the Council is worried that the Temple cooks are trying to kill off the Jedi by feeding them garbage, and Obi-Wan is sure to get it!

    Who could ask for more! [face_laugh]

    Yeah, real life tends to get in the way, but it needs to come first, doesn't it. :rolleyes:

    And, anticipation is half of the fun! [face_dancing]

    Post when it doesn't get in the way of what you need to do, and we'll understand! [:D]


     
  14. rubber_band

    rubber_band Jedi Youngling

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    oooooooo this is great! obi has to save the day!
     
  15. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    Post when it doesn't get in the way of what you need to do, and we'll understand!

    I won't understand! Post NOW! j/k

    please...[face_batting]
     
  16. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi

    Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oh man....this can't be good at all. Obi may be next, and Bant's gone and he was mean to her!!! More soon!
     
  17. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    To borrow from Renton Kenobi:

    99 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 99 bottles of blue milk! Take one down pass it around 98 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
     
  18. Master_Talek

    Master_Talek Jedi Youngling star 2

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    98 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 98 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around, 97 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
     
  19. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    97 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 97 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around, 96 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
     
  20. JOINME

    JOINME Jedi Padawan star 4

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    96 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 96 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around, 95 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
     
  21. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    95 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 95 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around, 94 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
     
  22. PadawanKaterina

    PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight star 2

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    OKay... Hurry up! Please! I'm dying to know what's going on! Post soon.

    And UP.
     
  23. padmay_skywalker

    padmay_skywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Ok You guys...I'm so sorry, but I'm not going to be able to finish the story soon. Thank you all for reading but I'm going through a rough time so I'll PM you ppl if I start again.:(
     
  24. Gkilkenny

    Gkilkenny Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Take your time.[face_peace]

    [face_good_luck] [:D]
     
  25. Star_Drifter

    Star_Drifter Jedi Youngling star 3

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    You're going through a rough time? :eek:

    Oh, not good! [face_worried]

    [face_praying] I hope everything will get better very soon!

     
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