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One Chance--OT/TPM AU starring Luke & Qui--In the hands of other authors now.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Clarus, Dec 12, 2000.

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  1. anya Skywalker

    anya Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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  2. Riin

    Riin Jedi Master star 1

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  3. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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  4. SeanAGreen

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  5. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    This is my 400th post!!!!!!
     
  6. Clarus

    Clarus Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Whoa! That's so kewl. If there are any readers left, Darth Zane and I are working on it, so shouldn't be too long before we start on this story again.

     
  7. Maeve Nadia

    Maeve Nadia Jedi Youngling star 3

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    I'm reading--just got caught up today!

    So keep going!
     
  8. jedi_yoda23

    jedi_yoda23 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Keep the ball rolling guys! We're reading...
     
  9. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    We're finally back!!!

    _______________________________
    The fighter that Qui-Gon had told Anakin to stay in glided into the hanger. Qui-Gon
    visibly sighs, and is extremely relieved that Ani is still alive. Then Qui-Gon turned to
    Obi-Wan and the others and quite calmly said, "Excuse me for a moment while I go kill
    someone."

    "What?!" exclaimed Leia and Luke in shock.

    "That's funny master." said Obi-Wan.

    Han, who had been staring at the ceiling, jerked his head back to look at Qui-Gon and
    said," What? I wasn't listening."

    Qui-Gon walked over to the fighter that Ani was still sitting in. He didn't get all the way
    to the fighter, however, he stopped about three feet away, put his hands on his hips, and
    stared menacingly at Anakin.

    Anakin stared down at Qui-Gon. Then he looked at Obi-Wan, who was making no
    attempt at hiding his mirth at Anakin's situation, and at three people he didn't know, who
    were standing close to Obi-Wan. There were two males and a female, all human. The
    older male had brown hair and looked kinda seedy. The young male had blonde hair and
    blue eyes, <Like me.>. The female is the same size as the young male, she had long
    brown hair, done up in a braid. Finally he looked back at Qui-Gon, who hadn't moved a
    muscle and was still staring at Anakin menacingly.
    <I think I would be safer if I went back into battle.> thought Anakin mirthlessly. Finally
    Ani screwed up enough courage to speak.

    "I didn't do it!"
    _______________________

    I decided to go with the trend and make this really post too. Hope all the readers like it!
     
  10. Clarus

    Clarus Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOLOLOLOL!!!!

    Hahahahah!!! Omigod! That was so funny. I guess I'll post something later today.

    Hee-hee.
     
  11. Jennifer513

    Jennifer513 Jedi Master star 1

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    OMG he acts just like my Josh! Who is ironicly out in the living room watching 'The Simpsons' with his big brother!

    Anyways, I LOVE IT!

    Yub yub,
    Jennifer
     
  12. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Glad you guys liked it.
     
  13. Clarus

    Clarus Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Well. I hit "Post", and you know what happens? The BLUE SCREEN OF DEATH!! Hiss!!! (Calms herself.)

    So. Let's start over.

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    Qui-Gon, of course, did not show nearly the level of frustration he was feeling. "Oh, really? Then who was flying the fighter? Some other nine year old from Tatooine? Some other boy who promise me--"

    "That I would stay in the ship," Anakin blurted impudently. His eyes grew very wide, his face very pale, and he slapped both hands over his mouth. "Oh, no."

    Qui-Gon's eyebrow arched magnificently.

    "Do you practice that in front of a mirror?" Han wondered aloud.

    |<>|<>|<>|<>|<>|<>|
    That is all I can do tonight. (Pants). Sooooooooooo tired.
     
  14. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Good post.
     
  15. Jennifer513

    Jennifer513 Jedi Master star 1

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    "Do you practice that in front of a mirror?"

    Now THAT is a clasic Soloism!

    Yub yub,
    Jennifrt
     
  16. Ana_Labris

    Ana_Labris Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL
    that is line soo great:)
    more!
    'we' are hungry for fix!!:)
     
  17. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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  18. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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  19. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    I would've written this post sooner, but, well I'm really lazy.

    Do I really need to remind you about <this>?
    _____________________________

    Anakin started to speak in his defense again, but Qui-Gon quickly cut him off, "Don't
    even try. Just get down, without speaking, and maybe you'll live to be ten."

    "I...."

    "No," said Qui-Gon, cutting him off.

    "But...."

    "NO," said Qui-Gon again.

    Anakin started to open his mouth again, but Qui-Gon didn't give him the chance, "Down,
    Anakin."

    Finally Anakin gave up and got down from the fighter. R2-D2 whistled and beeped at
    him, but Anakin ignored him. Once he was on the ground Ani started to slowly make his
    way over to Qui-Gon. Once Anakin was in front of Qui-Gon he hesitantly met Qui-Gon's
    eyes. When he got a look at Qui-Gon's face, he quickly looked away and thought
    morosely, <I'm gonna die.>

    Again he slowly met Qui-Gon's eyes and quickly looked away.

    <I'm gonna die....I'm gonna die....I'm gonna....>

    Qui-Gon grabbed Anakin's arm and started to pull him to where Obi-Wan and the three
    strangers were. When he saw his padawan try to hide a snicker he quickly told him,
    <Don't. Say. A. Word.>

    When Qui-Gon reached the others with Anakin in tow, Ani was still fearing for his life.

    <gonna die....I'm....>

    "Let's go find the girl," said Qui-Gon to Obi-Wan.

    "Right. Let's go everyone." Obi-Wan replied.

    And they started to walk, and get pulled, off.

    <die....I'm gonna....>
    _________________________
    Anyone notice how these things always seem longer before you post?

     
  20. Clarus

    Clarus Jedi Padawan star 4

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    LOL! You're hilarious, DZ. I'll have something later, maybe tomorrow.

    Again, great job! (giggles)
     
  21. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Thanks Clarus
     
  22. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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  23. anya Skywalker

    anya Skywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    Lol!
    Poor Anakin... :D
    And, yeah, this always looks a lot more before you post.
     
  24. Darth Zane

    Darth Zane Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Glad you liked it anya.
     
  25. Maeve Nadia

    Maeve Nadia Jedi Youngling star 3

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    A qui-gon that sounds very much like a very stressed dad who's been pressed one too many times, complete with the snickering older brother and awestruck bystanders!

    lol!
     
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