Fifilla: Thank-you! Aaaaah, Jedi make their choices, but I think Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are satisfied with them. VaderLVR64: Thanks so much! dianethx: Yes, Obi-Wan can be so much more controlled than Qui-Gon just by his own inclinations, without any training at all. So, he wouldn't have instinctively understood Anakin's impulsiveness. It really shows up when he's with Qui-Gon, so it was nice to put in a discussion between the two of them about it. Thanks for reading! ratna: Thanks! Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan each bring very different things to the moment, but that's what makes them such a good pair. earlybird-obi-wan: Thank-you! The jump at the end seemed like a good ending. I picture it as a freeze-frame, too. KELIA: Thank the Force indeed that the thing with Mayb is done with. Glad you enjoyed the story! Master_Tigris_Leigh: Aaaaaaah, stories do have to end sometimes. That's how you move on to new ones. Mayb is an OC who always assumes that she's right first and then figures out the facts around that second. Not a suitable companion for a Jedi, but probably good for Mak since he's a bit that way, too. Thanks for the reply! Healer_Leona: Oh yes, Mayb and Mak are just a bit similar. They even dress to compliment each other. Thank-you for reading!