Before Out of the ordinary (Obi-Wan's genes contain a tragic secret...can the Jedi save him?) Updated 9/26

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  1. Stella_Ripple Jedi Knight

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    Jul 29, 2005
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    OH NO!! Obi's getting worse!

    I hope Mr Kenobi can help (great way to introduce him btw)! I'm curious about exactly what is the matter with Obi, not to mention about his father's reaction. But why do I have a bad feeling that there's more heartbreak to follow?

    *Entering a fulfilling love/hate relationship with the wonderful angst you've created* :D

    Please update soon- thats a horrible cliffie to leave us on!
  2. -Darksaber- Jedi Knight

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    'Yes Jedi,' the man said bitterly. 'I am Krel-Wan Kenobi.'

    Eeek!
  3. padmay_skywalker Jedi Knight

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    And the plot thickens...

    So he found his dad...

    Obi's getting worse?!
  4. kamora1986 Jedi Padawan

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    I really think you have some sort od enjoyment in killing off Obi-Wan! It seems to be a common theme.

    The healer is not very cooperative with what Qui-Gon tells her to do is she? hmmmmm, this is a problem.

    Very excellent story! You have started to distract me from all my homework with all you fantastic stories! My teachers admonish you. [face_shame_on_you] haha. [face_dancing]
  5. Jauhzmynn Jedi Master

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  6. SiriKenobi12 Jedi Knight

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    I don't have anything new to say that hasn't already been said...but I'm totally addicted to this story and can't wait for the next installment!

    My poor sweet Obi is getting worse...Qui Gon better find a cure and soon, although I'm sorta sick because I love stories where Obi Wan is dying...love the angst! LOL...Maybe I should change my name to DarthSiri...lol.
  7. padmay_skywalker Jedi Knight

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  8. Renton Kenobi Force Ghost

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    *Taps fingers on desk* We're waiting... ;)

    [image=http://www.channel4.com/film/media/film/2l/E/evil_dead_2_lg_03.jpg]

    Hail to the King!
  9. PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight

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    Starts Chant: More! More! More!
  10. Renton Kenobi Force Ghost

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  11. padmay_skywalker Jedi Knight

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  12. Stella_Ripple Jedi Knight

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  13. Renton Kenobi Force Ghost

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    You know what got me posting?

    99 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 99 bottles of blue milk! Take one down pass it around 98 bottles of blue milk on the wall!

    :)^)
  14. JediSock Jedi Padawan

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    Sep 23, 2005
    98 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 98 bottles of blue milk. Take one down and pass it around, 97 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
  15. SiriKenobi12 Jedi Knight

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    97 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 97 bottles of blue milk...take one down and pass it around 96 bottles of blue milk on the wall.
  16. Renton Kenobi Force Ghost

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    96 bottles of blue milk on the wall! 96 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around, 95 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
  17. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    Just caught onto this one. Poor Obi and poor Qui!! *sobs* I hope something can be done and Obi starts to fight. More more more!
  18. PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight

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    95 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 95 bottles of blue milk! Take one down pass it around 94 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
  19. KylieKenobi Force Ghost

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    93 bottles of blue limk on the wall, 95 bottles of blue milk! Take one down and pass it around, 92 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
  20. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    92 bottles of blue milk on the wall. 92 bottles of blue milk! Take one down and pass it around. 91 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
  21. PadawanKaterina Jedi Knight

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    91 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 91 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around 90 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
  22. JOINME Jedi Master

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    90 bottles of blue milk on the wall! Take one down, pass it around, 89 bottles of blue milk on the- oops. Forgot I was the author for a moment. :p

    Ha ha! Oh my, you guys certainly are persistent! You make me feel terribly guilty and terribly honoured all at the same time!
    I apologise for the delay, I've been swamped with uni and work lately, but I simply can't allow this hypnotic counting to go on anymore, ARGHHHH....
    But because you are all so special to me, and I hate to see you wait like this, I'm going to post right now, gentle readers! [:D] Just stop the counting! aaahhhhh......:p

    *begins to see swirling bottles of blue milk*

    Ooh, not good. [face_hypnotized]


    Thanks so much for reading everyone! Love you all! [:D] [face_love]






    Chapter Five
    "Dangerous to Jedi, Force visions can be. Convinced, some Jedi become, that what they see cannot be changed. A Jedi must firmly believe that, in motion, the future always is. Jedi we have lost, who their own reason, do not use. Descend they do, into madness, despair, darkness...' From a lecture by esteemed Jedi Master Yoda.



    'It isn't normal!'

    Mayla was clearly agitated as she stood before Marc's desk, wringing her hands. The older Healer sighed, rubbed his short beard for a moment, then put aside the files he was going through. He stretched his aching back, another remainder that he was getting old. Perhaps it was his age that allowed him to keep his composure through such stress, he wondered.

    Or perhaps it was years of working in a field where he was constantly faced with injuries and wounds, and patients who would not survive. He remembered the first time he had told a Jedi Master her apprentice had become one with the Force. He had been young then, and nervous. After the stricken and disbelieving Jedi had been led away, Marc had wept. It had been the first time, and the last.

    'Healer Marc?'

    He shook his head slightly, trying to clear his muddled thoughts. His dark brown eyes focused on Mayla again.

    'We will soon know what is wrong,' he reminded the chubby Twi'Lik female who was still looking anxious. 'Worrying about him isn't going to help. The Mind Healer should be finished soon, and then hopefully we'll have some answers.'

    'You really should be more concerned,' Mayla responded, voice rising despite herself. 'You've had Obi-Wan in here before! You know what he is normally like. Doesn't this strike you as very odd, that all of a sudden he's stopped talking and he doesn't have a will to live? He was one of the most stubborn Padawans in this Temple! I was reading up on his personal history, and when he was thirteen, he tried so-'

    'Mayla,' Marc interrupted warningly. 'I am aware of Padawan Kenobi's personal history, having read it myself.'

    The young Healer went red, her smooth blue skin suddenly flushed.

    'I'm sorry Marcus,' she apologised. 'It's just that Obi-Wan..well...' She hesitated.

    Marc nodded. He understood what she meant, what she failed to say.

    'You have only just become a Healer in this ward,' he said gravely, bracing himself for what he would say next. 'You will learn, after years of experience in this field Mayla, that, you must not attach yourself to terminally ill patients.'

    Mayla gasped. Marc bowed his head.

    'Terminally ill?' she whispered. 'He can't be, you didn't say...'

    Marc half laughed, bitterly.
    'You mean I should let Qui-Gon know? I doubt he will even believe me.'

    Mayla closed her eyes for a moment. When she opened them they were moist with unshed tears.
    Marc looked at her sympathetically.

    'The Force does work in mysterious ways,' he said gently. 'Nothing is certain. But I've been analysing several scans of his body's deterioration and it doesn't seem as if anything can stop this.'

    'Unless Qui-Gon finds a cure,' Mayla whispered, willing herself to believe it.

    'I highly doubt he will. But for Obi-Wan's sake, I hope he does.'

    Marc wished that he didn't sound so cold. He cared for his friend, and he cared />
  23. hyperspace_police FanForce CR Arkansas US

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    Great chapter...Really enjoying this story. Glad to have discovered Fan Fic.
    Keep up the excellent work.
    :( poor Obi:(
    Curious to see where you are going with this.
    Hope Qui Gon finds a cure...[face_praying]
  24. Star_Drifter Jedi Knight

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    [face_thinking] Hmmmm. Blue milk. Is that the Star Wars version of the "udder cola"?

    Great update, Darth Alexis! :D

    'What did Master Yoda say?'

    Marc looked tired as he rubbed his beard. 'He says he will meditate on what this means,' he muttered. 'He says we shouldn't assume anything. Namely I shouldn't be preoccupied with the fact that I'm going to be murdered by a fellow Jedi and a friend. Which means that Qui-Gon will act out of anger, and will be lost to the Dark side. Which explains why his Padawan is so determined to keep him away.'


    Everything is going according to your plans... ;)

    You certainly are doing your Sith training proud! [face_laugh]

    I hope that all of your readers will understand that "real life" must come first! Uni professors don't care about anything other than what you are doing in their courses, do they? :rolleyes:

    Keep on studying!
    Darth Mom :cool:
  25. KylieKenobi Force Ghost

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    Sep 25, 2005
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    wow. You updated! Yay! Great story! keep writing!
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