Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JOINME, Sep 4, 2005.
Poor Obi-wan given up all hope
and Qui turns into a killer Oh NO!
Oh, My! Obi saw Qui go evil! So that's why he's been acting weird! That's about the only thing I can think of to make him act this way.
They should tell Qui! The more info he has the better prepared to stop this he can be! (Wow, that was weird grammer. )
Why can't Krel-Wan talk outside the house? Why is he being fairly cooperative? What in the world is up?
I love this!
It's interesting that Qui-Gon's reaction would be one of anger...perhaps because he couldn't find the cure?
Now he's got to come back with a cure...he's just got to!
Obi-Wan, terminally ill! No, no, no! Aw, JOINME, you've got to get him cured some how! Qui-Gon has to come back with it, and... and...
You have got to update soon, JOINME! I need to know what happens!
Oh my, so typically Obi. Trying to save Qui, even if it hurts him. Oh man more soon!
You gotta update soon or else I'll cry some more!
This is killing me...
He's resigned himself to what the visions are showing him, but shouldn't he also remember that grand ole saying Yoda is so fond of, "Always in Motion, the Future is."
C'mon Obi, you can pull yourself out of this stupor. If for no other reason than to keep Qui from going to the dark side. He has overlooked one flaw in his plan. He may have resigned his padawanship, but that doesn't mean that Qui-Gon resigned being his master no matter what Obi or the Council says.
Well, that makes sense now. Poor Obi-Wan!
Keep it coming!
So Qui going to the dark side is why Obi has given up?! Oh dear...
And I'm very interested to find out what Obi's dad has to say, and why he can't say it where others will hear. Hmm...
And poor Obi, it's so sad how he's just lying there staring off into space all the time, waiting to die.
Thanks so much for the update, JOINME! I'm looking forward to more!
Awesome Alexis! Poor Obi-Wan! hahahah my plan worked. LOL.
Oh wow... What a wonderful update!!!!!!
Obi-Wan is dying? And Qui-Gon is going to kill another Jedi and fall to the Dark Side?
I can say only one thing...
*evil cackling can be heard echoing throughout the chamber*
I can't wait!
Incredible writing as always JOINME!
'I saw what he sees,' Jon replied slowly. 'Powerful Force visions. They seem imprinted into his mind. Jedi dying in a strange battle field, this somehow connected to him, the Force showing him what will happen should he survive... then himself, dying in the very room he is hospitalised in. I believe these visions started the morning after he was admitted.'
Poor, poor Obi!!!! Noooo! Please don't let him die!!!
In that paragraph, whoa, I got such chills. It's like Obi really did see the future for the Jedi and his role in it. And of course with that heart of is he wants to die to save others Obi!!!
Great, great great update Alexis!!!! I can't wait to see what happens! I hope Qui finds a cure, or something that can give Obi more time so Qui will have more time to find a cure.
I am completely on edge here, please update again soon!!! Erm, please? And thank you for the PM By the way...90 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 90 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around 89 bottles of blue milk on the wall! Sorry, I couldn't resist, I missed the chance to do that before your update
Eeep, oh man this sounds bad....I hope they can cure poor Obi in time!
This is wonderful!
I can't even guess at what'll happen next. This is full of surprises!
If you don't post soon I'm gonna DIE!
UPPIE??? Uppie please? *puts some chocolate on the table, pushes it across* Deal? Just kidding, no pressure. I bet school is making you do so much work school *eyes twitch* But when you can update soon please!!
Thats right NO PRESSURE
*dies painful, slow death*
*comes back to say, "It's your fault!"*
Awww look what you did, you made her die.
*Starts choking, spasms, dies*
*Comes back as a blue ghosty to say, "You will post, you will post!"*
PS We really need a blue ghost face.
Um does anyone want to sing the blue milk song??
99 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 99 bottles of blue milk, take one dwon and pass it around, 98 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
Sure! I love that song!
But let's start where we left of last time and see if we get to one.
89 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 89 bottles of blue milk! Take one down pass it around 88 bottles of blue milk on the wall!
Hey Mind if I join your song? If you don't, well, then...
88 bottles of blue milk on the WALL, 88 bottles of blue milk! Take one down, pass it around, 87 bottles of blue milk on the wall!!!
87 bottles of blue milk on the wall, 87 bottles of blue milk, take one down and pass it around 86 bottles of blue milk on the wall!