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Outbreak (a very, very first fanfic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Rinin, Oct 1, 2000.

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  1. Obi the Kid

    Obi the Kid Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Apr 13, 2000
    Nothing wrong with that post!! EXCELLENT!!
     
  2. Jane Jinn

    Jane Jinn Jedi Knight star 5

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    No objections to An-Paj from me! If anybody can save Obi-Wan, he can!

    I liked the way you showed Obi-Wan's point of view, especially the way people were looming up in front of him one second and were across the room in the next. The way that the Force felt wrong to him was good, too, and the hallucination about the maggots was chilling! Post again soon!
     
  3. Kelly Kenobi

    Kelly Kenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Excellent imagery Rinin. The hallucinations were very creepy. Jane?s right (and she should know) if anyone can save Obi it?s An-Paj.

    Happy you found the disk... hope that means we get more soon!
     
  4. Jee-dai

    Jee-dai Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Jun 8, 2000
    Great post!

    Now if only I could persuade you to post more often...


     
  5. Kit'

    Kit' Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Oct 30, 1999
    YaY! Great post Rinin!

    *This is getting creepier**

    Kithera
     
  6. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Ewww! More please!

    Imzadi
     
  7. Healer_Leona

    Healer_Leona Squirrely Community Mod star 9 Staff Member Manager

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    Jul 7, 2000
    Superb Rinin!!!

    Very creepy and vivid. Maggots... uckkkk!
     
  8. Calamity Jinn

    Calamity Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Great post Rinin! Glad you found your disk.

    Maggots, ugh!! If it had been me, I wouldn't be scratching my arm, I'd be tying to tear it off! Not my biggest insect fear, but near the top!

    More soon, I hope! (Maggots optional.)
     
  9. Kit'

    Kit' Manager Emeritus star 5 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Come on Rin, this is ridiculous....you've found your disk now where is the post!!!!

    Kithera
     
  10. space case

    space case Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Apr 4, 1999
    Good ideas, different from the usual.
     
  11. Rinin

    Rinin Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Feb 9, 2000
    Hi guys,

    The next post is going to take a while because I have to make a few small changes to the story and one of them is in what I had ear-marked as the next post.

    So if you are looking for something else to read can I do a small promo? (I know I am not long established to do this but Kit is getting down because her readership has dropped off!)

    Okay the story is called Standing out, it is part of a series but you don't really have to read the first one to get the gist of it all...the address is.

    http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=582758&start=1112166#1112166

    Thanks

    ~R~
     
  12. mouse2

    mouse2 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 29, 1999
    Just bringing this up for you Rinin.

    Excellent post in a creepy way! I hope you have more for us soon!
     
  13. I love Sci Fi

    I love Sci Fi Jedi Master star 4

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    Jan 21, 2000
    up. Great post.
     
  14. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 19, 2000
    Just upping! Please don't forget this thread!
     
  15. Connemara

    Connemara Jedi Knight star 6

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    Nov 18, 2000
    Oh man! This is soooo good! Some of you writers are soo talented!! I just found this, I hope you write more!
     
  16. Calamity Jinn

    Calamity Jinn Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah, I was wondering what had happened to this one!

    Please post more for us Rinin!
     
  17. Connemara

    Connemara Jedi Knight star 6

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    Nov 18, 2000
    PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! Like story very much! :)
     
  18. Connemara

    Connemara Jedi Knight star 6

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    Nov 18, 2000
    Rinin, where are you? We want more stoy! You left us hanging. PLLLLEASSE come back!!! PUH-LEASE!
     
  19. Jedi Gryph Grin

    Jedi Gryph Grin Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Sep 25, 1999
    Wha...Huh?!?! How did it take me so long to catch this thread?!?!?! I didn't even know Rinin was going to start writing a thread of his own.

    Rinin, excellent writing and imagery, and my apologies for not saying so sooner. Your next post is due...oh...say...now, right? *grin*

    And Mouseypoo, sweetie darling-darling sweetie, why didn't you tell me Rinin had started a story?

    Keep on Rinin, this is really good.
     
  20. imzadi

    imzadi Jedi Master star 4

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    Sep 19, 2000
    Just upping! Rinin?
     
  21. Connemara

    Connemara Jedi Knight star 6

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    Nov 18, 2000
    Rinin? Are U there? WE WANT STORY!!!!!!!
     
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