Outbreak (a very, very first fanfic)

Nothing wrong with that post!! EXCELLENT!!

 

No objections to An-Paj from me! If anybody can save Obi-Wan, he can!

I liked the way you showed Obi-Wan's point of view, especially the way people were looming up in front of him one second and were across the room in the next. The way that the Force felt wrong to him was good, too, and the hallucination about the maggots was chilling! Post again soon!

 

Excellent imagery Rinin. The hallucinations were very creepy. Jane?s right (and she should know) if anyone can save Obi it?s An-Paj.

Happy you found the disk... hope that means we get more soon!

 

Great post!

Now if only I could persuade you to post more often...

 

YaY! Great post Rinin!

*This is getting creepier**

Kithera

 

Ewww! More please!

Imzadi

 

Great post Rinin! Glad you found your disk.

Maggots, ugh!! If it had been me, I wouldn't be scratching my arm, I'd be tying to tear it off! Not my biggest insect fear, but near the top!

More soon, I hope! (Maggots optional.)

 

Come on Rin, this is ridiculous....you've found your disk now where is the post!!!!

Kithera

 

Good ideas, different from the usual.

 

Hi guys,

The next post is going to take a while because I have to make a few small changes to the story and one of them is in what I had ear-marked as the next post.

So if you are looking for something else to read can I do a small promo? (I know I am not long established to do this but Kit is getting down because her readership has dropped off!)

Okay the story is called Standing out, it is part of a series but you don't really have to read the first one to get the gist of it all...the address is.

http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=582758&start=1112166#1112166

Thanks

~R~

 

Just bringing this up for you Rinin.

Excellent post in a creepy way! I hope you have more for us soon!

 

up. Great post.

 

Just upping! Please don't forget this thread!

 

Oh man! This is soooo good! Some of you writers are soo talented!! I just found this, I hope you write more!

 

Yeah, I was wondering what had happened to this one!

Please post more for us Rinin!

 

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! Like story very much!

 

Rinin, where are you? We want more stoy! You left us hanging. PLLLLEASSE come back!!! PUH-LEASE!

 

Wha...Huh?!?! How did it take me so long to catch this thread?!?!?! I didn't even know Rinin was going to start writing a thread of his own.

Rinin, excellent writing and imagery, and my apologies for not saying so sooner. Your next post is due...oh...say...now, right? *grin*

And Mouseypoo, sweetie darling-darling sweetie, why didn't you tell me Rinin had started a story?

Keep on Rinin, this is really good.

 

Just upping! Rinin?

 

Rinin? Are U there? WE WANT STORY!!!!!!!