Outbreak (a very, very first fanfic)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Rinin, Oct 1, 2000.

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  1. Obi the Kid Jedi Master

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    Nothing wrong with that post!! EXCELLENT!!
  2. Jane Jinn Jedi Grand Master

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    Jan 12, 2000
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    No objections to An-Paj from me! If anybody can save Obi-Wan, he can!

    I liked the way you showed Obi-Wan's point of view, especially the way people were looming up in front of him one second and were across the room in the next. The way that the Force felt wrong to him was good, too, and the hallucination about the maggots was chilling! Post again soon!
  3. Kelly Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Excellent imagery Rinin. The hallucinations were very creepy. Jane?s right (and she should know) if anyone can save Obi it?s An-Paj.

    Happy you found the disk... hope that means we get more soon!
  4. Jee-dai Jedi Knight

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    Great post!

    Now if only I could persuade you to post more often...


  5. Kit' Manager Emeritus

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    Oct 30, 1999
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    YaY! Great post Rinin!

    *This is getting creepier**

    Kithera
  6. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Ewww! More please!

    Imzadi
  7. Healer_Leona Manager Emeritus

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    Superb Rinin!!!

    Very creepy and vivid. Maggots... uckkkk!
  8. Calamity Jinn Jedi Master

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    Great post Rinin! Glad you found your disk.

    Maggots, ugh!! If it had been me, I wouldn't be scratching my arm, I'd be tying to tear it off! Not my biggest insect fear, but near the top!

    More soon, I hope! (Maggots optional.)
  9. Kit' Manager Emeritus

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    Come on Rin, this is ridiculous....you've found your disk now where is the post!!!!

    Kithera
  10. space case Jedi Knight

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    Good ideas, different from the usual.
  11. Rinin Jedi Knight

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    Hi guys,

    The next post is going to take a while because I have to make a few small changes to the story and one of them is in what I had ear-marked as the next post.

    So if you are looking for something else to read can I do a small promo? (I know I am not long established to do this but Kit is getting down because her readership has dropped off!)

    Okay the story is called Standing out, it is part of a series but you don't really have to read the first one to get the gist of it all...the address is.

    http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=582758&start=1112166#1112166

    Thanks

    ~R~
  12. mouse2 Jedi Master

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    Oct 29, 1999
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    Just bringing this up for you Rinin.

    Excellent post in a creepy way! I hope you have more for us soon!
  13. I love Sci Fi Force Ghost

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  14. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Just upping! Please don't forget this thread!
  15. Connemara Jedi Grand Master

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    Oh man! This is soooo good! Some of you writers are soo talented!! I just found this, I hope you write more!
  16. Calamity Jinn Jedi Master

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    Yeah, I was wondering what had happened to this one!

    Please post more for us Rinin!
  17. Connemara Jedi Grand Master

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    PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! Like story very much! :)
  18. Connemara Jedi Grand Master

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    Rinin, where are you? We want more stoy! You left us hanging. PLLLLEASSE come back!!! PUH-LEASE!
  19. Jedi Gryph Grin Jedi Master

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    Wha...Huh?!?! How did it take me so long to catch this thread?!?!?! I didn't even know Rinin was going to start writing a thread of his own.

    Rinin, excellent writing and imagery, and my apologies for not saying so sooner. Your next post is due...oh...say...now, right? *grin*

    And Mouseypoo, sweetie darling-darling sweetie, why didn't you tell me Rinin had started a story?

    Keep on Rinin, this is really good.
  20. imzadi Jedi Master

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    Just upping! Rinin?
  21. Connemara Jedi Grand Master

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    Rinin? Are U there? WE WANT STORY!!!!!!!
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