Before Paying the Cost of Being a Jedi (Obi-Wan AU) Completed April 8, 2003

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Aunecah_Skywalker, Apr 5, 2003.

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  1. Lurkalidth Jedi Knight

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    Feb 5, 2003
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    Very good short! I'm glad you posted the rest of it today. :D Lots of action, a good insight into BH's mind... You ended on a cliffy, though. Part of me can't help but hope the unnamed "Master" who accepts Obi-Wan in Mace.

    Thanks for an interesting story with a happy (so far!) ending.
  2. forever_jedi Jedi Grand Master

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    Jun 5, 2002
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    I am happy that Obi-Wan didn't allow Melna to escape!

    Who is the "master"? I hope, Qui-Gon Jinn again; who else would the Force allow? If I understood correctly, Obi-Wan can see only in black and white and that too, with the help of the "device". I hope someday, in some sequel, he gets his complete eyesight back.

    So, sequel soon?
  3. Aunecah_Skywalker Jedi Grand Master

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    Mar 25, 2002
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    It is actually Qui-Gon Jinn; I thought it was fairly obvious since I did write that Qui-Gon thought kicking Obi-Wan away was a mistake. Guess I should have made it more obvious. [face_blush]

    A sequel will be coming soon, but there's this idea that I got for another stoy that's just screaming to be written. So this one's sequel's going to come after that story's done, I think. :)

    Wow, I'm just piling 'fics up on my account. [face_shocked] 8-}

    Aunecah
  4. PaddyJuan Force Ghost

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  5. dianethx Jedi Grand Master

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    Glad to see that Obi-Wan has some vision back but green...I agree that black and white would be better than green!
    And I hope his headaches go away. If they showed up while he was in battle again, that might mean someone's life.

    Will look forward to the sequel!!
  6. Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Jedi Grand Master

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    Feb 9, 2002
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    Bravo Bravo I can't believe I missed all that!!

    Great job!
  7. Lurkalidth Jedi Knight

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    Yeah, you were pretty obvious. It's just that, the more fanfics I read here, the more I suspect any obvious conclusion. Sorry.
  8. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Feb 21, 2003
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    I liked it!

    It was beautiful!!

    Well done Goddess Skywalker!!

    ;)
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