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  1. Padwan_Jennifer Jedi Padawan

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    Feb 20, 2006
    This is my first post! Please tell me what you think.It is about Qui-Gon after Obi-Wan left for Melida/Daan

    1.
    i
    am always
    looking at
    the bond
    you left.
    i have still.

    2.
    i
    watching
    our memories
    between
    parts.
    tears

    3.
    i
    waiting.
    crying
    us
    of you
    because of you.

    4.
    i,i,i
    am always watching,waiting
    looking at our memories: crying
    the bond between us
    you left parts of you
    i have still tears because of you
  2. LilQui-Gon Jedi Knight

    Member Since:
    Jul 29, 2004
    star 2
    i have still tears because of you :_| :_| :_|
  3. Genimay Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Jun 2, 2005
    star 4
    Very creative. I never really thought of it from his POV....not sure why though..

    I LOVE IT! Sad,but not to sad.
  4. Taraum Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jan 7, 2006
    star 3
    Really good. Definitely seems to describe the situation. Good job.
  5. Healer_Leona Manager Emeritus

    Member Since:
    Jul 7, 2000
    star 9
    Nicely done Padwan_Jennifer. :)
  6. Padwan_Jennifer Jedi Padawan

    Member Since:
    Feb 20, 2006
  7. KILIK Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    May 21, 2005
    star 4
    =D= Cool and sad and great all in one. :D I liked it, :) Great job Padwan_Jennifer and nice icon to.:) Do you have anymore poems like that or any fics in the works or that are already done? :)
  8. Padwan_Jennifer Jedi Padawan

    Member Since:
    Feb 20, 2006
    No, this is the first thing I've even attempted!:) I'm glad you liked it.
  9. Nienna_Narmolanya Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Jul 5, 2005
    star 4
    you left parts of you
    i have still tears because of you


    Great job, Padwan_Jennifer! =D= A moving look at Qui-Gon's thoughts. The raw pain of betrayal. :_|

    I look forward to more from you in the future. :)
  10. Padwan_Jennifer Jedi Padawan

    Member Since:
    Feb 20, 2006
  11. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

    Member Since:
    Feb 5, 2004
    star 8
  12. Sarabi Jedi Padawan

    Member Since:
    Jan 5, 2006
    Wow! I really enjoyed that!
  13. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 12, 2005
    star 4
    A tender, moving, poem my Padawan. =D=

    I like poetry sometimes, and this one hit the spot. Poor Qui-Gon, I wonder if Obi felt the same thing?
  14. DaenaBenjen42 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    May 15, 2005
    star 5
    Very moving and evocative.

    Good poetry. :)
  15. JadeSolo Manager Emeritus

    Member Since:
    Sep 20, 2002
    star 6
    i
    watching
    our memories
    between
    parts.


    Ohhh, I loved that part. :(

    Great work! I hope you do more poetry. :D
  16. DarthIshtar Chosen One

    Member Since:
    Mar 26, 2001
    star 9
    am always watching,waiting
    looking at our memories: crying
    the bond between us
    you left parts of you
    i have still tears because of you


    Powerful stuff.
  17. Padwan_Jennifer Jedi Padawan

    Member Since:
    Feb 20, 2006
    Wow! So many people are reading it! Thanks!!!![face_blush]
  18. BrentusofGath Jedi Master

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    Aug 12, 2005
    star 4
    An Up for my missing padawan's poem.
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