Saga Precious Gift (AU. 13 years after ROTS.) [Ani, Obi, Luke, Leia, Mara] Updated 8/8

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  1. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Title: Precious Gift
    Author: jacen200015
    Timeframe: Thirteen years after ROTS
    Characters: Anakin, Obi-Wan, Luke, Leia, Mara, Yoda?.
    Genre: AU
    Keywords: Anakin, Luke
    Summary: Anakin defeated the Sith yet still lost what was precious to him. Thirteen years later Anakin gets an unexpectant surprise.
    Notes: I know what you?re all thinking ?What is she doing writing another story? She hasn?t finished the other ones yet.? Don?t worry :) They will be completed. I just couldn?t wait to post this wonderful idea for a fic :) The bunny bit hard.


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    Chapter 1


    Anakin woke up to the bright sunlight flooding the room and immediately used the Force to close the blinds and closed his eyes. He heard the sound of the blinds opening and he opened his eyes to glare at them and then at the closed door. ?Stop opening the blinds!? Anakin ordered and shut them again with the Force. He attempted to go back to sleep, but then he sat up as something dawned on him. He stretched out with the Force and felt two presences in his quarters. His eyes widened and he shook his head in disbelief. It was impossible what he sensed. ?Must be the alcohol.? Anakin muttered and headed for the refresher to wash up.

    After a cold shower Anakin got dressed and left his bedroom to go make breakfast. He stopped a few steps from the kitchen when he smelled something. Anakin frowned and entered the kitchen to find a plate of oatmeal with two slices of toast on the table, along with a glass of juice. He sensed the two presences again and slowly turned around, his hand resting on the hilt of his lightsaber.

    ?Good morning daddy.? Two voices said in unison.

    Anakin backed up a few steps and bumped into a chair. Losing his balance as he tried to figure out what was going on, Anakin fell onto the floor unconscious.

    ?You killed him!? Leia exclaimed, her brown eyes wide.

    Luke frowned and cautiously approached Anakin. Kneeling down next to Anakin, Luke placed his hand on Anakin?s chest and felt the rise and fall of Anakin?s chest. ?He?s alright. Get me some cold water.?

    Leia filled a cup with some water and handed it over to Luke.

    Luke took the cup and dumped the water onto Anakin?s face. ?That should do it.?

    Anakin reflexively wiped the water from his face with his hand and then opened his eyes to see two young faces looking down at him. He scrambled away from them and stood and ran out of his quarters to Obi-Wan?s quarters.

    After franticly typing in the access code, Anakin ran inside as soon as the door opened and found Obi-Wan and his padawan finishing up breakfast.

    Obi-Wan paused what he was telling his padawan and looked up to see Anakin?s pale face. ?What?s wrong Anakin? You look like you?ve just seen a ghost.? Obi-Wan questioned.

    ?I?? Anakin ran his right hand through his hair and then left the kitchen and went into the living area.

    ?Padawan, clean the dishes and get to class. We?ll finish discussing your training schedule later.? Obi-Wan told her and then went after Anakin. He found Anakin sitting on the couch, his face in his hands. Obi-Wan sat down next to him and waited.

    ?They?re dead, I know they are. I held their lifeless bodies. I watched them and Padme be reduced to ashes.? Tears streaming from his eyes, Anakin looked up at Obi-Wan. ?I saw my children. In my quarters.? Swallowing hard, Anakin continued. ?They were alive. I could sense their presences in the Force. It?s not possible!? Anakin denied vehemently.

    Obi-Wan wrapped his arm around Anakin?s shaking shoulders as Aankin began sobbing.

    Anakin buried his face into Obi-Wan?s side, taking comfort in Obi-Wan?s soothing presence.

    Obi-Wan sent soothing waves of the Force to his brother and then sent a Force suggestion to make him sleep. As soon as Anakin was asleep, Obi-Wan made Anakin comfortable on the couch, covered him with a blanket and went to go investigate. He didn?t have to go far. The doorbell rang just as he reached the door and he opened it to see two concerned children looking up at him.
  2. G__Anakin Jedi Master

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    Cool please PM me when you Update
  3. HandmaidenVeme Jedi Master

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    Very interesting!!! Please add me to your PM list!
  4. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    G__Anakin: Cool please PM me when you Update Can do :)

    HandmaidenVeme: Very interesting!!! Please add me to your PM list! Thanks :) You've been added.




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  5. AnakinLuver Jedi Master

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    [face_laugh] My laughing is a good thing... I can just see Anakin's face when he saw Luke and Leia... whew...

    This is very intriguing... Put me on the PM list...

    And the brotherly interaction with Ani and Obi was just priceless and beautiful...

    Rachel Rose@};-
  6. KELIA Manager Emeritus

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    Whoa - Luke and Leia are still alive

    :eek: :eek: :eek:

    Very intriguing beginning. Please add me to your PM list [face_praying]

    Looking forward to more

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  7. Davedrag Jedi Knight

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    oh this is good very good keep it up put me on your pm list[face_peace]
  8. DarthJaded Jedi Grand Master

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    Put me on your PM list please. [face_batting] I love fics with the twins and if Mara is going to be there, it`s even better.

    D. Jaded O:) :-B
  9. DancesWithBlasters Force Ghost

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    Yay! Another awesome fic by you! Definetly add me to the PM list, I really like it! So, why is Anakin with Obi-Wan? Who was Oria (I know i spelt that wrong)? Why are Luke and Leia together? And why, above all, did they come to meet Anakin? (Apart from the obvious fact that they have no caretaker now.) There are always so many questions in your fics. But that's why they interest me so much!
  10. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    AnakinLuver: My laughing is a good thing... I can just see Anakin's face when he saw Luke and Leia... whew... Indeed :D

    This is very intriguing... Put me on the PM list... You have been added :)

    And the brotherly interaction with Ani and Obi was just priceless and beautiful... Thanks :)

    KELIA: Whoa - Luke and Leia are still alive Yep :D

    Very intriguing beginning. Please add me to your PM list Thanks, you have been added :)

    Looking forward to more More will be coming soon :)

    Davedrag: oh this is good very good keep it up put me on your pm list Thank you :) You have been added.

    DarthJaded: Put me on your PM list please. I love fics with the twins and if Mara is going to be there, it`s even better. It sure does :D

    DancesWithBlasters: Yay! Another awesome fic by you! Definetly add me to the PM list, I really like it! So, why is Anakin with Obi-Wan? Who was Oria (I know i spelt that wrong)? Why are Luke and Leia together? And why, above all, did they come to meet Anakin? (Apart from the obvious fact that they have no caretaker now.) There are always so many questions in your fics. But that's why they interest me so much! It's great to have you onboard :)




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  11. pat_skywalker39 Force Ghost

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    i'd like to receive a pm for the next update please
  12. pat_skywalker39 Force Ghost

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  13. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    pat_skywalker39: i'd like to receive a pm for the next update please You're on :) I'm sorry that the update is taking so long. It was so easy writing the first post, but the second post is proving to be difficult.






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  14. Jaded_Rose Jedi Knight

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    Take your time, This is a really cool concept, can you add me to the PM list?

    J_Ro
  15. Meredith_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    This looks fantastic! Please add me to your PM list?
  16. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Jaded_Rose: Take your time, This is a really cool concept, can you add me to the PM list? Thank you, you're on :)

    Meredith_Kenobi: This looks fantastic! Please add me to your PM list? More to come soon :) You have been added.





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  17. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    Alright guys, here's the next post.

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    Chapter 2

    Bant lead Obi-Wan into her office and as soon as the door closed she handed Obi-Wan a datapad. ?We can say with absolute certainty that they are Anakin?s children.? Bant began and walked around her desk to sit in her chair.

    ?Could they be clones?? Obi-Wan asked, looking up from the datapad.

    ?No, but that possibility was one of the first things we checked out. The children don?t have the imprint in their DNA structure like clones do.? Bant answered.

    Obi-Wan slowly shook his head. ?How can this be possible?? He sank down onto one of the chairs by the desk and looked again at the results from the tests that the Healers had done on the children.

    ?The ways of the Force is mysterious, even to those who have studied the Force for centuries.? Bant replied. ?How is Anakin taking this??

    ?It is going to take time for him to accept this and considering how he reacted when Padme and the twins died, it won?t be easy for him.? Obi-Wan responded, raising his eyes to meet Bant?s cool gaze. ?How do I say to him that the Force has given his children back to him, but the Force did not bring his wife back to life??

    ~*~*~

    They?re dead

    They?re dead

    They?re dead?


    Anakin opened his eyes and blinked a couple of times until the blurriness disappeared from his vision. Sitting up, Anakin looked around to see that he was in Obi-Wan?s quarters. The moment he remembered where he was, Anakin remembered what had occurred that had brought him to Obi-Wan quarters. He had seen his children?no?he had?must have seen an illusion. The twins were stillborn and Padme had died a few minutes after giving birth.

    Standing up, Anakin went into the refresher to wash his face with cold water and then looked at himself in the mirror. His eyes had lost their sparkle long ago and he had gained a few early wrinkles in the past years. Anakin looked down at the sink and then looked back up at the mirror. He froze as he saw the face of someone behind him, someone who bore a striking resemblance to himself.

    ?I?m real, daddy. Leia is real too.?

    Squeezing his eyes shut, Anakin wished the illusion would go away. After a couple of minutes, Anakin opened his eyes to see the young boy?s reflection still in the mirror. He tensed as the boy walked closer to him and slipped his small hand into Anakin?s real hand. Anakin yanked his hand back and quickly left the refresher only to stop in his tracks as he saw the girl standing in the doorway.

    ?Daddy, it?s us. Search your feelings.? Leia called to Anakin as he spun around to head for another exit.

    Seeing that the boy was blocking the exit, Anakin headed to the couch instead and sat down and buried his face in his hands.

    Obi-Wan arrived a few seconds later, moving past Leia and making his way over to Anakin. ?Anakin.? Obi-Wan gently said as he sat down next to his brother.

    Anakin wiped his face with his hand and looked up at Obi-Wan.

    ?I took the children to the Healers and they confirmed that they are your children. You?re not imagining things, they really are alive.? Obi-Wan gently smiled and handed Anakin a datapad.

    Anakin took it and numbly read its contents. He read it twice, three times, and then a fourth time before looking back at Obi-Wan. ?How is this possible??

    Obi-Wan shrugged his shoulders. ?The Force works in mysterious ways.?

    Leia slowly approached Anakin and touched his hand. ?Daddy?? She got no further when Anakin sprang to his feet and fled from the apartment. Leia?s lower lip trembled and tears began to well up in her eyes.

    Shaking his head at his former padawan?s behavior, Obi-Wan pulled Leia onto his lap where Leia laid her head on his chest and began to cry.

    Luke, who was still standing near the doorway, tightly clenched his fists as irritation boiled in him and hot angry tears began to form in his eyes. Spotting a window that had a window seat, he walked over to it and sat down on it. Luke curled himself into a ball and silently looked out of
  18. G__Anakin Jedi Master

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  19. DarthJaded Jedi Grand Master

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    Yay! an update.:D Anakin is a being a big meanie right now. Poor Luke, he isn`t coping with the rejection very well. Maybe Mara will help.;) More soon?

    D.J O:) :-B
  20. Jaded_Rose Jedi Knight

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    Luke, sweetie, everything is going to be okay, you'll see. [:D]

    Poor baby :( Normally I can forgive Ani a lot of things, but this....well, I'll just see how it pans out. Mara probably would help, though!

    Thanks for the PM!

    J_Ro
  21. HandmaidenVeme Jedi Master

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    Pain ripped through Luke?s body and with a cry, he doubled over and fell to the ground...

    ...He felt dizzy and lightheaded, but it soon passed. Luke stood up and stumbled forward a few paces before falling to the ground again with a pained scream.

    The plants that were around him began to dry and wilt until there was nothing but a large brown circle around Luke.

    Luke woke up an hour later after passing out and walked out of the garden, not at all disturbed by the circle of dead plantlife that he left behind.



    What's happening?! This worries me[face_worried] !
  22. KELIA Manager Emeritus

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    Anakin, Anakin, Anakin

    [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you] [face_shame_on_you]

    I can understand being in shock but that's no reason to turn your back on your children just becase your wife didn't come back with them.

    I hope he comes to his senses soon.

    Poor Luke - he should have just gone to sleep like he was told.

    Great update

    =D= =D= =D= =D=
  23. jacen200015 Force Ghost

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    G__Anakin: Great Chapter Thank you :)

    DarthJaded: Yay! an update. Anakin is a being a big meanie right now. Indeed.
    Poor Luke, he isn`t coping with the rejection very well. Maybe Mara will help. We shall see :)
    More soon? Hopefully. Finals week is almost over.

    Jaded_Rose: Luke, sweetie, everything is going to be okay, you'll see.

    Poor baby Normally I can forgive Ani a lot of things, but this....well, I'll just see how it pans out. Mara probably would help, though!
    Mara will do what she can to help. As for Anakin, well, you'll see.

    Thanks for the PM! Your welcome :)

    HandmaidenVeme: Pain ripped through Luke?s body and with a cry, he doubled over and fell to the ground...

    ...He felt dizzy and lightheaded, but it soon passed. Luke stood up and stumbled forward a few paces before falling to the ground again with a pained scream.

    The plants that were around him began to dry and wilt until there was nothing but a large brown circle around Luke.

    Luke woke up an hour later after passing out and walked out of the garden, not at all disturbed by the circle of dead plantlife that he left behind.


    What's happening?! This worries me !
    and you all should be worried [face_mischief] [face_whistling]

    KELIA: Anakin, Anakin, Anakin

    I can understand being in shock but that's no reason to turn your back on your children just becase your wife didn't come back with them.
    That's true.

    I hope he comes to his senses soon. I hope so too.

    Poor Luke - he should have just gone to sleep like he was told. or maybe he was asleep but he woke up at the wrong time.

    Great update Thanks :)


  24. Meredith_Kenobi Jedi Master

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    Anakin!!! Gah!! :mad:
    poor Luke and Leia :_| you had me tearing up, jacen200015.

    ...and what happened to Luke at the end there? Did he sense soemthing in the Force or soemthing?

    this was definitely a 'wow' update. I can't wait for more!
  25. AnakinLuver Jedi Master

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    Anakin... what a *bleep*

    Sorry... [face_blush]

    Is Luke feeling the effects of the dark side?

    Great chapter!

    Rachel Rose@};-
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