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Queens Don't Cry (TPM Missing scenes) ~3nd Scene added~ 7/21

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Miana Kenobi, Jul 14, 2002.

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  1. babybantha

    babybantha Jedi Youngling star 2

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    Wonderful! :D

    And I think you got a great balance between the happy and the sad in this last post. I really liked the idea that you give your Padawan some of the hair from your own braid. It's really *sniffle* sweet.

    *takes a deep breath*

    Must not cry, must not cry, must not cry... 8-}

    But when Obi-Wan and Anakin were just standing there, looking at each other...talk about awkward moments! Yeech! Even I was uncomfortable. ;)
     
  2. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    :) Thanks, BB.
     
  3. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Push this to the top once again...
     
  4. PadawanKitara

    PadawanKitara Jedi Master star 5

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  5. Darth_Silenous

    Darth_Silenous Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Miana, these were perfect. You captured the spirit and color of TPM beautifully--these vignettes seemed to be a stemming straight off from the film. I really felt as if I had seen them before. Wonderful! The emotion here was undeniably powerful;it was good to see Obi-Wan cry, and especially good to see Anakin's reaction to Qui-Gon's death. I enjoyed this immensely.
     
  6. CalaisKenobi

    CalaisKenobi Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ?I?ll never be as good of Master as Qui-Gon was, Anakin. But I will try. I will try my hardest to make you a Jedi. That I can promise you. But I can?t train you unless you are willing to let me try.?

    Aww! Somehow that is just great foreshadowing (not that I think Obi-Wan wasn't a good Master, just that he never really trusted himself in the role of mentor). Great job, good mix of happy and sad.
     
  7. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Kitara ~ :) Thanks!

    Sil ~ Yeah, I see how it is... you choose the shortest one to read... ;) (I'm joking, don't worry...) :D

    Calais ~ Yeah, I guess I did subconsciously put some foreshadowing in... Glad you like.

    A few more scenes are trying playing in my head... (that is if they don't get stuck in the cobwebs!)
     
  8. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Push this back up...
     
  9. Knight-Ander

    Knight-Ander Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Wow! I stumbled upon this post, and I'm glad I did. This scene is really great! I don't know what else to say except that I'm really impressed.

    Please, continue.
     
  10. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    :) Thanks, Ander! I'm trying to get something out, so expect it sometime soon. ;)
     
  11. Miana Kenobi

    Miana Kenobi Admin Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Okay, so maybe not so soon... :(

    Shameless upping!
     
  12. JediClare

    JediClare Jedi Padawan star 4

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    "I'll never be as good of Master as Qui-Gon was, Anakin. But I will try. I will try my hardest to make you a Jedi. That I can promise you. But I can't train you unless you are willing to let me try."

    Try not. Do, or do not. There is no try.

    Foreshadowing indeed (even if you didn't conciously put that in :p).

    That was great! :)


    (EDIT: I had a feeling I was saying the same thing over and over again (squawk, Polly wanna cracker!)...so I went back and checked and yes, I keep saying that this is great. But it is! :p)
     
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