Before Qui-Gon and the Day that was Slightly Better than Yesterday -- (Horrible Day Sequel!) Qui/Dooku Vig

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  1. Layren Force Ghost

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    Title: Qui-Gon and the Day that was Slightly Better Than Yesterday
    Author: Layren
    Summary: Qui-Gon's day goes slightly better than his very bad one.
    Rating: G
    Author's Notes Hey everyone I'm sorry this has been so long in coming .. this is the sequel to Qui-Gon and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day, which can be found Here


    Edit umpteen and a half -- Spelling errors.. I hate word sometimes ..

    Enjoy!!


    I went to sleep and when I woke up my bedside chrono went off at the right time like I set it and my book bag was in the corner so I didn?t trip either. I had two clean tunics but only one pair of pants. I could tell it would be a slightly better day than yesterday.

    For breakfast I wanted a muja fruit and I actually got one.


    I guess I?ll stay on Coruscant after all.

    I was on time to class for once but I left my book by accident even though I remembered my homework.

    Master Rajane still likes Tahl?s work better than mine, but I did get a higher grade than N?hirik so there.

    At astronavigation class I for once didn?t mess up the simulator. Master D?ju said it must be because of my pink boots. I glared at him when his back was turned but he must have eyes in the back of his head because I got in trouble for glaring at him.

    At quantum mathematics we did equations with variables and I got it wrong.

    Who needs variables?

    Missions with unknowns are dangerous anyway. Master Dooku said so.

    I could tell it was only a slightly better day than yesterday.

    I could tell because Kyran wasn?t mad at me anymore. He said sorry for getting mad cause that?s not right for a Jedi so I forgave him.

    They had sweet snow cones for dessert in the cafeteria. I didn?t get any but at least I got lunch this time. It was only a slightly better day than yesterday.

    That?s what it was because I had to spar with remotes in the afternoon. I hate sparring with remotes, but I killed them sooner than last time. I think I?ll stay on Coruscant after all.

    I sneaked without asking down to the room where they dye the cloaks brown. The Jedi Master in charge was gone so I dropped my pink boots in the dye and ran back out. Master Dooku caught me on the way back and he made me go and get those ugly shoes.

    He says hate isn?t for a Jedi but I hate those shoes. They?re for girls and they?re ugly.

    Today isn?t much better than yesterday, I grumbled after Master Dooku grounded me for sneaking.

    Master Rhy?ul on the Council came by. While he was talking to Master Dooku I went to the kitchen to mix a drink. The processor burst and my drink went everywhere. Master Rhy?ul said he would see Master Dooku later at his office instead.

    Master Dooku lectured me severely about not touching stuff in the kitchen without him again and he told me to go do my homework and go to bed.

    I finished my homework and for once had hot water for my shower. I was still out of toothpaste and my sleep tunic is dirty but the pants are clean.

    At least tonight was slightly better than yesterday, I said to Master Dooku as he came in to say good night.

    I?m very glad padawan, he said to me as he kissed me on the forehead. Sleep well.

    I guess I?ll live on Coruscant after all.

    The End
  2. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Feb 5, 2004
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    [face_laugh]

    At least this day was SLIGHTLY better than yesterday!

    At quantum mathematics we did equations with variables and I got it wrong.

    Who needs variables?



    For some reason this was my favorite part. Maybe because I HATE math?? :D


  3. Alethia Force Ghost

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    Feb 13, 2005
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    Aww...so sweet! I loved that it was slightly better than yesterday. And I had to laugh at the math part. Who does need variables?

    Anyway, I'm so glad you did the sequel! And it was so cute too. Nice that at least some things went better for poor Qui-Gon.
  4. DreamOfKenobi Jedi Knight

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    Jul 4, 2004
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    So he thinks he'll stay on Coruscant? Thank goodness! Obi-Wan will need him in the future. Poor little guy, all those bad days strung together! [face_laugh]
  5. DarthIshtar Chosen One

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    Mar 26, 2001
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    I'd say this was slightly better than your old one, but this was soooooooooo cute!
  6. CodeName_Targeter Force Ghost

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    Nov 7, 2003
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    At quantum mathematics we did equations with variables and I got it wrong.

    Who needs variables?


    Hey! :eek: That's what I wanted to know! :p

    Poor Qui, still has pink boots. :(

    Very cute ficlette! :p
  7. Jedi_Tigris Force Ghost

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    Mar 7, 2005
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    [face_laugh] That was great! I love how Qui thinks he'll stay on Coruscant, since it was a slightly better day. He's so cute! :D
  8. maychorian Jedi Master

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    Jan 7, 2005
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    Master Rajane still likes Tahl?s work better than mine, but I did get a higher grade than N?hirik so there.

    [face_laugh]

    Wonderful! I loved it. I'm glad he made the right decision about where to live. :D

    Aw, Dooku kissing him on the forehead. [face_love] Cute.
  9. Princess_Arulmozhi Force Ghost

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    Nov 16, 2004
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    LOL about the pink boots. And variables. He should listen to Dook- unknown variables are a lot of trouble :D. And then Master Dooku kisses him on the forehead. Awwww....sweetness!

    So now he stays on Coruscant. :D Great little viggie.
  10. amidalachick Force Ghost

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    Aug 3, 2003
    star 5
    Yay, Qui-Gon had a slightly better day!

    Awww, that was so cute and funny! I like this part:

    At quantum mathematics we did equations with variables and I got it wrong.

    Who needs variables?

    Missions with unknowns are dangerous anyway. Master Dooku said so.


    And I love how Dooku kisses him on the forehead at the end. So sweet. :) Nice job!
  11. AnakinsHeir Jedi Knight

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    May 2, 2004
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  12. mad4dos Jedi Knight

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    Feb 3, 2003
    star 1
    what a nice sweet fic :)
  13. dianethx Jedi Grand Master

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    Mar 1, 2002
    star 6
    This was cute. I especially liked that his tunic was dirty but his pants were clean. So I guess in the balance on things everything was alright. LOL.
  14. darshaassant Jedi Knight

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    Mar 13, 2005
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    LOL. THings aren't still looking up for him. Well, at least it's improving. :p Hey... he can give me his pink boots.... I don't mind. :p
  15. BrokenNoseOfQui-Gon Jedi Knight

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    Nov 15, 2004
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    Awesome! No time to say more (I'd better get off the computer here at work) but I loved it! [face_laugh]
  16. Layren Force Ghost

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    Oct 28, 2003
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    My apologies to everyone! I thought I had done replies to this already!

    VaderLVR You and me both :D I loathe math ... Qui does too...

    Alethia Nobody besides mathmeticians :D

    DreamOfKenobi So true! Good thing he stayed! Thanks for reading!

    DarthIshtar Thanks!!

    CodeName_Targeter Poor Qui -- he'll be stuck with those boots until his feet grow ;)

    Jedi_Tigris That's why we love him! Thanks for reading!

    maychorian Yes even I'm realizing that Dooku wasn't always a bad guy ;)

    Princess_A Yes they are! Too much so! Thanks for reading!

    amidalachick Well I couldn't let him have a *perfect* day .. those don't exsist for Jedi in the GFFA :D

    AnakinsHeir Thanks!

    mad4dos Thanks so much!

    dianethx Of course :D Nothing is ever perfect for poor Qui ;) Thanks for reading!

    darhassant I'll be sure to let him know, he's eager to get rid of them! Thanks for reading!

    BrokenNoseofQui-Gon Thanks!I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  17. Layren Force Ghost

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    Giving this a shameless bump :p
  18. JOINME Jedi Master

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    Jul 25, 2005
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    Master Rajane still likes Tahl?s work better than mine, but I did get a higher grade than N?hirik so there.

    [face_laugh] I can just imagine little Qui poking his tongue out and doing that childish 'so there!' lol!

    I glared at him when his back was turned but he must have eyes in the back of his head because I got in trouble for glaring at him.

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] That really cracked me up! reminds me an old hag teacher I once had LOL!

    Missions with unknowns are dangerous anyway. Master Dooku said so.

    [face_laugh] that is sooo cute!

    I guess I?ll live on Coruscant after all. awwww... I'm glad you decided to, little Qui. :D

    Fantastic sequel! [face_dancing]
  19. Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master

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    Feb 21, 2003
    star 5
    *giggles* Tis adorable!! :D The shoes were dropped in dye (HAH) and he got to eat lunch. ^_^ *hugs Qui* Hurray for the Day that was Slightly Better then Yesterday!! :D :D

  20. Force-sensitiveLyn23 Force Ghost

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    Aug 27, 2005
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    lol! Awesome! So glad that his day was SLightly Better Than Yesterday!!!
  21. hyperspace_police FanForce CR Arkansas US

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    Great sequel. [face_laugh]
    Really enjoyed it.[face_cowboy]
    Keep up the good work.=D=
  22. DriftingThread Jedi Knight

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    Oct 21, 2005
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    He says hate isn?t for a Jedi but I hate those shoes. They?re for girls and they?re ugly.

    [face_laugh] I loved that! Very charming!
    Excellent:D
  23. Kestrel_Kenobi Force Ghost

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    Sep 26, 2005
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    Aw, this was really sweet. I like cute Qui-Gon.
    :)
    Well done!
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