diane Yikes! I know that I'm always saying the Obi-Wan is yummy and stuff, but I didn't mean it that way! Creepy and disturbing and wonderful as always. I felt cold reading that story. Great job. VL Sadly, this seemed entirely possible. It probably took a lot of inner strength for Qui-Gon to hold himself together in the wake of that betrayal. Excellent writing. Keep it up!