Beyond ~Quietly Irresistible~ Third place Entry for the J/J Fall Challenge. Thanks everyone!

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  1. JagsEternalFlame Jedi Knight

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    Hee, it's funny how your posts got longer, and longer, and then we have this.

    Wow! Talk about an explosive ending. It was somber, and angsty, and mushy, and wonderful all at once.:)

    What a hell of a nightmare! Yikes, yet the detail, and imagefry was so asstounding. I really felt like I was there. Truly inspired.=D=

    Can't wait for a sequal! We'll be waiting . . . patiently. (Our version of patiently at least, it's more akin to Anakin when he doesn't get something that he wants. Things tend to turn bloody.[face_devil] )

    Yet, death threats aside, I enjoyed this most immensily!=D=

  2. Lyne Jedi Knight

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    Loved Jaina getting busted for spying on Jag.


    May I add a pretty please to writing a sequel?




  3. BottledUpInside Jedi Knight

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    You know that commercial "I'm thinking Arby's?" Well I'm thinking sequel. Wonderful ending! Abdsolutely wonderful job writing this whole thing!

    ~Jen~
  4. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Well, this would lend itself very nicely to a sequel. Hint, hint... [face_mischief]

    She sighed. After all, she was Han Solo's daughter.

    One could forgive her for her lack of tact.

    Once again wishing that more of her mother's blood ran through her veins, Jaina moved slowly forward as her target prepared to leave. She'd been following him the whole day now, as one would gather from her jumbled mental banter. Well, how was she supposed to act. Hey, long time no see, sorry about the arm, by the way, can I mention that you still look edible?


    I loved that! [face_laugh]

    =D=
  5. JainaJag14 Jedi Knight

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    Mmmm...edible Jag...=P~ I totaly agree.

    We're both broken, yet maybe we can fix each other.

    Whatever the future brings, we can face it together.

    Suddenly, she didn't feel alone anymore.

    He leaned down to kiss her again, and he smiled. The future can rewrite itself.


    Perfect...simply perfect.


    Ahem, I will now take up the chant. SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! *end chant*
  6. jasa Jedi Knight

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    Feb 17, 2005
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    Please do a sequel! I [face_love] this story!
  7. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    OK, one vote for a sequel. Thanks.

    I'm, glad that you enjoyed it!


    She's Han Solo's daughter. Yep she's doomed.

    Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!


    Any LM or JJ stories? You may regret that,[face_laugh] but yeah, I'm really glad that you njoyed this!

    Yep JAg fits perfectly with Jaina. His coolness levels out her hotheadedness, and together they just make a great pair.


    :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

    [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh] [face_laugh]

    Heee, is that a pointed hint. Cureses. I guess I really need to do a sequel now.

    I'm glad that you loved it. And I will continue it. So many people need to get their butts kicked.;)

    And as for the length, this is officially the longest chapter that I have have ever written. Yep. It was a pain.

    The muse wouldn't shut up though . . . .


    Like Anakin you say?

    Crap, now I am getting death threats for a sequel.

    My muse is glaring at me . . . .


    Oh I had to bust her. It was too much fun to resist.

    Pretty please . . . . I think I am going to cave.


  8. JagsEternalFlame Jedi Knight

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    Can't wait for the sequal![face_dancing]

  9. FelsGoddess Game Host

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    Hey, long time no see, sorry about the arm, by the way, can I mention that you still look edible?

    [face_laugh] Oh that's my favorite line.

    Great job.
  10. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    [face_blush] :D

    Thanks!:D :D :D

    ~MJ@};-
  11. JainaJag14 Jedi Knight

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    See? Chanting does work. Can't wait for the sequel. Could you PM me when you do happen to start it?

    Procrastination...the endless hours of sitting at home reading fanfiction only to realize that you left yourself no time to do what needs to get done...The story of my life. [face_blush]
  12. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    I can identify, I'll be sure to PM you.

    And I am happy to anounce that this won third place in the challenge.

    Thanks to the wonderful judges, and the readers for making this possible.


    ~MJ@};-
  13. JagsEternalFlame Jedi Knight

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    Congrats on third!=D=

    My personal favorite though;)
  14. MaraJade4S Jedi Knight

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    Congratulations on winning! =D=

    Now, how about that sequel? [face_batting]
  15. DarthGizka Jedi Knight

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    SEQUAL! SEQUAL!!!!! [face_love]
    Omg, I love this story. ^-^
    Great job!

    I'm so addicted to you're J/J stories and I'm saddend that this is the last one that I hadn't read. :_|
    But alas, I have no reason to procasinate now...stupid religon project...><
  16. Mira_Jade The NSWFF Manager With The Cape

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    DarthGizka : I had almost forgotten about this story. I shall have to continue it after I finish my other projects.:)

    ~MJ@};-
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