Beyond - Legends Ralek Narren A.k.a. Darth Regault a jedi story AU

AU

Title Ralek Narren A.K.A Darth Regault
Genre Sci Fi and Romance
Rating Pg for violence and romance

Here i go

Chapter 1

Ralek awoke to another dark and foggy morning in the Coruscant underworld. Abanded at age 6 he was left to fend for himself in the Underworld. He noticed what appeared to be a rich person. He silently laughed to himself "easy pickins" he whispered. As the person walked towards the cantina Ralek snuck up to him as stealthy as as cat he reached his hand out and put it in the mans pocket. He quickly reached out and looked at what he got.To his amazing suprise he got only 156 credits. "Dang" he whispered but he thought it would at least buy him a roof and food better than being outside at night on Coruscant.


He bought a shabby little room at the local Cantina for 100 credits. In his mind he went over his pitiful life he hated this he was 8 years old and he had to fend for himself. In his dingy room filled with putrid smells from other people who had used this room he slept.

Not to Ralek's suprise he was kicked out of the room bright and early. As he walked toward the exit he saw a jedi. "huh" he thought "what are they doing here." He was in a stupor when the jedi motioned for him to come. Ralek nodded his head and jogged over. The jedi pulled out a needle. Ralek fearing poison lunged out with his leg. the jedi jumped to the side and gave him the shot.

He awoke inside the Jedi temple in their Med-bay

What do you guys think

 

If you're talking about the Jedi Temple, I don't think this is the place this story goes...You should probably post it over in Before the Saga (or if it takes place between The Phantom Menace and Return of the Jedi, the Saga).

Looks like you have an inspired concept though.

~Carr

 

I know it should be here because luke rebuilt the jedi temple after the war

 

Chapter 2

Ralek awoke in the jedi's med-bay he looked around he saw who he thought was a jedi master. The jedi master named Dacen Mano told the young Ralek "you are force sensitive you could live here and train with the jedi and become a jedi knight one day." Ralek hastily agreed and said when do i start my training. In a soft voice the master said "tommorow you will begin but for now you should rest."

The thought of rest was barely even on Ralek's mind he was so excited he would be living here in the comfort of the jedi temple. Eventually sleep came to him and he slept a peaceful sleep not imagining what the power of destiny had just given him.

At the crack of dawn he was up they started by giving him a force perception test it was to see how strong his connection to the force was. To Ralek's suprise he passed it with flying colors. Next was what Ralek had been waiting for was lightsaber training. He did the basic moves with such grace and fluidity to his motions it was no suprise when he aced that as well.

So it contiued like that until Ralek was 11 and his master became Dacen Mano. He tried to sleep when he was picked that day because he had a mission the next. He just couldnt sleep he had finaly been chosen.

 

Chapter 3

Ralek was awoken by the soft voice of his master he said "time to wake up padawan we have a big mission with 2 other master padawan teams."

Dacen and Ralek silently walked in they were right on time. One of the jedi council members gestured for them to sit. They sat and waited. Sure enough the other teams walked in.

Ralek observed the 2 padawans one was a girl who Ralek instantly fell in love with. She had shoulder length dirty blonde hair and she was skinny and she carried herself with inhuman grace her name was Telindra Pets.

The other Padawan was Narl Handa he was a young student he was athletic and good looking but not so succesful in the mental area. He had shoulder length matty and uncombed hair.

They sat down as we began being briefed. Are mission was to stabliize Malastare their goverment failed and their economy crumbled there were raiders everywhere and they had to stabilize the goverment not an easy task.

They boarded the transport and set off for Malastare.



Hows that