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Discussion in 'Oceania Discussion Boards' started by the_jedi_princess, Apr 29, 2002.

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  1. the_jedi_princess

    the_jedi_princess Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I've started a story in Fan Fiction, and need some feedback. Its titled:

    "Darkness approaching. Light fading. Shadow's forever lingering."

    It would be good to get some home grown advice.

    :D
     
    the_jedi_princess, Apr 29, 2002
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  2. HawkNC

    HawkNC Former RSA: Oceania star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Read my reply on the Fan Fiction forums. In short though, it's good.
     
    HawkNC, Apr 29, 2002
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  3. the_jedi_princess

    the_jedi_princess Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I've put chapter 2 up, if anyone would care to have a look.
     
    the_jedi_princess, Apr 30, 2002
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  4. Protege-of-Thrawn

    Protege-of-Thrawn Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Alright, but you could of said please... :)
     
    Protege-of-Thrawn, Apr 30, 2002
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  5. the_jedi_princess

    the_jedi_princess Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Pleeeeaaaasssse....
     
    the_jedi_princess, Apr 30, 2002
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  6. Darth_Reign

    Darth_Reign Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Tis a good tale. It could have used some Leprachans or Eskimos though. But otherwise it was good.
     
    Darth_Reign, May 1, 2002
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  7. the_jedi_princess

    the_jedi_princess Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I got the third chapter up. Finally.
     
    the_jedi_princess, May 2, 2002
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