Saga - OT REBEL TRANSPORT- "Fates at Junction" (OCs, short story) COMPLETED

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Very cool story! I like how you have such diversity represented with the "rebel" characters (even if they aren't officially rebels). Cal has s a kind of Han Solo- just doing his job, trying to stay clear of trouble. Keia seems very kind hearted. I hope her trick to get Stormy's ship back will pay off as a means for their escape. The idea that the Imperials have arrested so many that the jails are overcrowded is kind of chilling.

Now I wonder how Cal will get wrapped up in it all.

Nice story!

 

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I like these guys. But then I do have a soft spot for underdogs. Hope they make it okay.

 

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Cal Sunrider is a good guy. A reluctant hero, at least for now, but his conscience just wouldn't let him sit back and do nothing. And I think maybe he likes Keia, just a little bit.

 

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Not quite Han Solo, is he?

 

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He's a terrific character. And yes, he is kind of a cowboy type personality. The thing is that I have always seen Han Solo as sort of a cowboy, so because of that, even though I like Cal for himself, I, personally, just can't not compare him to Han.

 

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BOR GULLET!

 

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Now let's see, who else do we know who can calculate hyperspace coordinates in their head? I think he also made a similar comment about ending up in the middle of a star. Hmmm.........

 

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The end ends in a new beginning. Now that is clever and I love this creepy photo. I will check twice tonight before turning off the lights.

 

Kurisan - sorry I'm late to the party.

I enjoyed this, for a number of reasons - your writing's always excellent, but this also feels very SW, and like an opening adventure of a new, small roleplaying game group. (I'm a sucker for RPG nods, intended or otherwise. )

These four are an interesting mix - and you used a Vurk! Not a species we see nearly enough of, IMHO.

And Cripps ... got off easily, IMHO. This Torment feels like an even less emotional version of Count Vidian, but different enough to be interesting. I also applaud the absence of Force-sensitives - this isn't a time period where they should be super-common (Rebels works for what it is, but I think it could've benefitted from Ezra perhaps becoming something besides a Jedi ... )