Mod!Challenge Red and Blonde (clue challenge) kitchen sink

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  1. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Jun 14, 2005
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    The Ewok – now fully awake – wriggled out of Vader’s hold and began to run, followed by the hissing pittin.

    Darth Sidious cackled with glee and Force lifted the Ewok. “Ewok tossing, I like it.”

    The Ewok flew from Sidious to Vader and back and back and back.

    And the pittin?

    She tried to catch the Ewok.

    This fanfic contains violence against Ewoks. [face_shame_on_you] But I laughed several times anyway! :D Because it was a fun update!
  2. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Aug 21, 2006
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    And here is the kitchen sink challenge


    Never enough of you

    He liked this new state. He was one with the Force. He could see all.
    There in his former home – the Jeditemple – he could see a brooding dark figure. Or was it?

    They were the lingering remains of the dark figure. Darth Sidious had been there in the home of the Jedi. He was gone. Darth Sidious had met his end on the second Death Star.

    He saw a great friend from his youth – he had helped Padmé Amidala to win the freedom for Naboo – united with her husband. ‘Why didn’t we see the obvious? He was always away after Geonosis, always protesting when the council put the senator in danger.’

    ‘The dark everything it clouds. But grieving for a loved-one clouded yours.’

    ‘Yes Master Yoda. And now she is here with me.’ He smiled when Siri Tachi joined him.

    ‘Look, Han Solo trying to baking a cake he is.’

    ‘Trying? Do or don’t there is no try.’

    ‘Youngling you are.’

    ‘He will do and look; Mara Jade has the same plans after reparing her lightsaber.’

    ‘Distracted the red-head will be. More fun it is for her dueling with it and the aftermath.’

    ‘Love-making?’ Siri nuzzled Obi-Wan’s cheek. ‘Or is it the pittin?’

    ‘Petting the pittin has to be first. Pittin interfering it can.’

    ‘Tossing the pittin will end that. He will know what to do. He has done it on Endor, tossing the Ewoks in the tree-village,’ Siri remarked.

    ‘At least the temperature is nice,’ Obi-Wan observed.

    ‘Not like Hoth where it is cold or Tatooine where it is hot,’ Siri quipped. ‘Come, let’s go and visit.’

    ‘Let the twins enjoy their evening with their loved ones,’ Obi-Wan took Siri in his arms. ‘We are here in the Force. And I can never have enough of you.’

    ‘Yes master Kenobi,’ Siri waved her hands, had him flying in the soft and downy grass and followed.

    And what was done there in the Force?

    FIN
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  3. Jedi_Lover Force Ghost

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    Nov 1, 2004
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    Nice, but I can disprove it.
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  4. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Aug 31, 2004
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    Great and squeelicious. :) =D=
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  5. Chilla Force Ghost

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    Jul 30, 2005
    star 4
    Very nice! A good idea to have a Force ghost view everything.

    Early, which ones are you guessing?
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  6. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

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    Jun 14, 2005
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    * pokes person above her for various reasons ( @Chilla )

    Never enough of you

    This title describes what I think of your fanfic, but during the week it is a bit problematic to go on-line for me, because my internet is very bad then & I am also way tired from work.

    ‘Petting the pittin has to be first.

    But you make me smile with such sentences anyway.
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  7. earlybird-obi-wan Force Ghost

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    Aug 21, 2006
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    Han Solo
    Mara Jade


    Repairing a weapon
    Dueling with a Lightsaber and/or blaster



    Jedi Temple
    Hoth
    Tatooine
  8. Chilla Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jul 30, 2005
    star 4
    Well, then I will send you a message and disprove your story. :)
  9. Jabari Force Ghost

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    Jun 25, 2007
    star 1
    Nice. I can disprove.
  10. AzureAngel2 Force Ghost

    Member Since:
    Jun 14, 2005
    star 6
    ‘The dark everything it clouds. But grieving for a loved-one clouded yours.’

    ‘Yes Master Yoda. And now she is here with me.’ He smiled when Siri Tachi joined him.

    ‘Look, Han Solo trying to baking a cake he is.’

    ‘Trying? Do or don’t there is no try.’

    ‘Youngling you are.’

    Fun conversations! Thank you!
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