Redemption in Time (Obi/angst) Vignette: Obi-Wan travels back in time to kill young Darth Vader

Title: Redemption in Time

Summary: Obi-Wan has traveled back in time to confront his apprentice, Anakin Skywalker, to prevent him from turning to the Dark Side.

Author's Note: This is my first fan fiction, and I hope you all enjoy reading it. I'd love to hear what you think of it.

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Very good. I enjoyed this.

 

Great first story Happy_Hobbit_Padawan! I really liked it. I think you did a great job conveying Obi's emotions and provided some nice imagery. Good Luck with all your future fanfics.

 

Yay, I have some readers!

PaddyJuan - Thank you for reading and replying to this!

NyghtFyre Thank you for your kind words.

 

I throughly enjoyed the fanfic. thansk for writting it.

 

Great start! More!

 

I loved it! Thanks for posting it.

 

Jauhzmynn: Thank you for reading it!

obi-ew: Thanks for reading! Hmm, I had originally planned on this being a one-time post, but who knows, maybe I'll see where it can go next.

 

Tyria_Sarkin: Thank you for readin' and replyin'!

 

This is a great story, Happy Hobbit Padawan.


I never read that idea before either. Great work here.

 

This is a great story Happy Hobbit. I've never even considered this kind of a plot, of Obi-Wan going back with an intent to kill Anakin before he could inflict harm on the galaxy. I do have to say though, I am glad he didn't kill him in the end. I mean, there'd be no Star Wars without Anakin.

It was a great vignette! I hope you either write more or write a story. Just write something else, I think you have a real talent for it!

JB

 

It's been far too long since I've checked this thread for replies!

Arwen_Solo: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

jedi_bounty: Thank you for the compliment. Hopefully my other writings won't disappoint you!

 

This fic nearly brought me to tears, great job HHP!

 

Thalia_Nox: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this. It was my first attempt at fan fiction, so I'm pleased to hear I did something right with it.

 

That was really good. Very original idea.

 

Yoda_da_Yoda: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.