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Saga Remember What the Dormouse Said: Clone wars era (OC -Schurke Canaille centric) Replies June 17th

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by DarthBreezy, Jan 20, 2005.

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  1. geo3

    geo3 Jedi Master star 4

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    I REALLY hope that this "indefinite hiatus" devolves into "I'll be right back"... :D
     
  2. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    Second that!
     
  3. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    A/Note: I think it's almost time to kickstart things again, expect a new posty by the end of the week!

    *fingers crossed* [:D]
     
  4. geo3

    geo3 Jedi Master star 4

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    This is very, very good news!
     
  5. amidalachick

    amidalachick Force Ghost star 5

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    A new post? Perfect timing, seeing as how I just finished reading this. :D Great job so far!
     
  6. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yay! I'm so excited to hear that!

    jazz
     
  7. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    About time!
     
  8. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    *gasp* *shock* *horror*


    An Actual POST!








    What the Dormouse Said

    Chapter 4


    Schurke awoke in a cold shivering sweat, and automatically reached for the vial of pills next to his bedside. He looked at them bleary eyed.

    They were the wrong ones.

    Groaning, he reached underneath his pallet and reached for a second container. Then a third.

    There you are, you little hive rats, he grumbled, picking out one, and then a second for good measure.

    Three weeks ago, the nightmares had started and once again he had turned to Sesso. Again, Sesso had come through for him, and again she had cautioned him to be discreet.

    And he had.

    But?

    He had fallen behind in his work.

    There?s nothing wrong?

    Madam Nu had chastised him for placing Master Yoda?s name on the registry of the lost.

    I can handle this?

    Four times.

    Things are just fine?



    ***

    ?Padawan Canaille,? the nononsense voice snapped him to attention. ?Unless you have mastered a new use of the Force, I doubt that you can read and transcribe the reports with your eyes closed and your head on the keyboards!?

    ?Madam Nu?? Schurke replied innocently.

    Frack!

    ?I think you should return to your quarters, Padawan Canaille,? the Jedi Master told him icily. ?Or perhaps to the Healer?s Ward, as your quarters seem to be a source of distraction.?


    ?Yes Madam Nu,? Schurke replied with what he hoped was the proper amount of deference. Old hawk-bat.

    Jocosta Nu arched her eyebrow as if she could actually hear his thoughts, and Schurke colored, expecting another rebuke. Instead, to his surprise, she softened.

    ?Padawan Canaille,? she said almost gently. ?Return to the Healer?s ward and don?t come back until you are well.?

    Relieved, Schurke bowed as low as he was able without falling over, then quickly hurried down the darkened hallway.

    Yes, to the Healer?s ward yet again, thought Schurke bitterly. With Sesso off to the Outer Rim, he would be at the mercy of whomever the Council had (shoehorned?) in. The Healer in charge would ask a few questions, hum and haw a little, and then present him with what he needed.

    He could handle this.


    **

    The Healer who eventually came to Schurke's bedside was a younger Padawan, perhaps only recently assigned to his Master; however, he still carried the authority of the Healer's status...

    ?I'm sorry Master Canaille,? he said quietly, a hint of the exhaustion that was so evident on his features creeping into his voice. ?I'm not allowed to dispense Nyokine or any of its derivatives. You'll have to wait until Master Sesso returns...?

    Schurke sighed, and pushed aside the idea that had snaked it's way into his brain, He's younger... tired... perhaps...

    ?Perhaps you should try meditation...?

    A spasm of pain, and perhaps something more...

    ?Perhaps,? Schurke replied softly.

    Another spasm... more urgent this time. ?When will Healer Sesso return??

    The young Healer rubbed his hands over his face and sighed. ?Soon, I hope...?
    Master Sesso would understand.

    ?Yes, Master Sesso would understand...? the young Healer said dully.

    Schurke blinked, surprised. Had he actually spoken aloud?

    The spasm became a dull, aching need.

    No one else would need to know... and you are a Healer after all...

    ?I'm a Healer after all...? the Padawan murmured. ?No one else would need to know...?

    Quickly!

    ?Wait here...?

    ?I will...?

    And as the Padawan left, Schurke leaned back and closed his eyes.

    What have I done?



    **


    After securing the small amount of tablets the young Healer had given him and effectively erasing any memory of the... incident - in for a credit, in for a fortune after all- Schurke returned to his quarters and tried to think.













     
  9. DarthIshtar

    DarthIshtar Chosen One star 10

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    He's starting to scare me.
     
  10. geo3

    geo3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Wow! New reply formats!

    Poor, poor Shurke...he's in so deep.

    "I can handle this."

    Oh, boy. I have a VERY bad feeling about this.

    So glad to see you back!
     
  11. KrystalBlaze

    KrystalBlaze Jedi Master star 5

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    I'm so late, but I didn't see this post for some reason! *gasp*

    Sorry about that. [face_blush] I know its on hiatus, but DUDE! It's soooo good and I missed the chance to reply... wait! This was yesterday?

    WOOOOOOOO.

    Was it?

    Okay, I'm confused...

    But I love it! Schurke is so cool. :cool: [face_love]

    Brilliant, Breezy. I heart it so.

    -Krystal

    EDIT:

    Ok, figured it out. :D

    And as the Padawan left, Schurke leaned back and closed his eyes.

    What have I done?


    Oh, the poor kid. :( I feel so sorry for him.
     
  12. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    I'm glad to see that people haven't given up on me compleatly!

    I found to my dismay this AM that a Rat and a Mouse do not mix, so I am back on the lap top for today (until I can get a rat-trap and a new mouse! Or figure out how to hook up the DSL to the laptop!) But thanks for sticking around!
     
  13. VaderLVR64

    VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus star 8 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    I confess! I've been a lurker here! But I first "met" Schurke last year and as usual, your story brings him to vivid life!

    Uh, and feel free to send those PM chapters! :p

    Great work!
     
  14. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    Freindly bump as later I will do replies ect... [face_love]
     
  15. GunraysLawyer

    GunraysLawyer Jedi Master star 4

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    Rats....Rats...well, I hope your not squemish about unloading the trap.

    BTW, great post. As soon one says "I can handle it," you know that they can't. At least that's the general rule that I've observed.

    Bad things on the horizon for our favorite cad.
     
  16. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oh, yeah, he's definitely getting scary. When are Anakin and/or Kampher coming back to notice that something is really wrong?

    YAY! New chapter!

    uppies!

    jazz
     
  17. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    *shoot* Sorry it's taken so long to get back to everyone...

    DarthIshtar

    He's starting to scare me.

    Me too. [face_worried]

    geo3

    Poor, poor Shurke...he's in so deep.

    "I can handle this."

    Oh, boy. I have a VERY bad feeling about this.


    Me too....

    So glad to see you back!

    Slow but sure!

    KrystalBlaze

    Oh, the poor kid. sad I feel so sorry for him.

    Me too...

    VaderLVR64

    I confess! I've been a lurker here! But I first "met" Schurke last year and as usual, your story brings him to vivid life!

    Uh, and feel free to send those PM chapters!


    Yay! And check your PM box in a bit...

    GunraysLawyer

    Rats....Rats...well, I hope your not squemish about unloading the trap.

    They were glue traps, so niether is worse for wear although one was serioulsy PO'd!


    BTW, great post. As soon one says "I can handle it," you know that they can't. At least that's the general rule that I've observed.

    Yes, very true...

    Bad things on the horizon for our favorite cad.

    [face_whistling]


    Jazz_Skywalker

    Oh, yeah, he's definitely getting scary. When are Anakin and/or Kampher coming back to notice that something is really wrong?

    Soon enough, we hope!

    Righty, I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for your patience! [:D] [:D]
     
  18. DarthBreezy

    DarthBreezy Chosen One star 6

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    just a peek to see if there's anyone else out there... [face_batting]
     
  19. KrystalBlaze

    KrystalBlaze Jedi Master star 5

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    *whistles* [face_whistling]


    UPPPP!

    -Krystal
     
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