Saga ~*~ Repercussions ~*~ AU - Mara Jade/Vader/Emperor & OC's - COMPLETE =D

(Reviewing this before Vanessa kills me )

Chapter Twenty-Seven :

?Oh.. you probably aren?t a guardian.. but you are an angel??Jayden said.

awww!!!! And I see romance everywhere???? This was so cute!!!

?Thank you!? she said hugging him. And in that hug, Laya felt security? a security that she didn?t feel a long time ago? She remembered again what her father had told her? maybe he was right.


She admited that feels something for him???? *dances happy*


Mara is going to Hapes? hmmmmm.... ok... I've got a bad feeling about this...



Chapter Twenty-Eight :

?It would be better if it was the Princess doing this?? said Han.
Laya smiled and looked to his coat.
?You and the Princess..? she said, with a funny look and a big smile.
?You and my brother?? said Han, with a big smile too.
Laya took a long breath and looked once again to Han. Then, she laughed and said:
?There?s nothing between me and your brother!?
?Nor between me and the Princess..? Han said.

LOL

And this too:

?Stay calm, this is not so difficult!? Jayden said, through the Force.

?I?m calm? now? get out of my head!? she said, by the Force too, smiling.

?Sure, Commander Skyler..? he said.

?Now, Jayden Solo..? she said.


Ok it's fun and sweet at the same time!


Great post!


Chapter Twenty-Nine:

?Force! It is your brother?? she started and laughing at the same time.? ? and Princess Leia Organa dancing?? she asked.
Jayden looked to his brother.
?Yes.. although it?s an excited version of my brother!? he said.

LOL! Ok... *stops to laugh* I can't believe he said that!

Oh and Leia and Chewie dancing... should be fun to see.
I'm glad Jayden knows who Laya is, all the truth... I'm really glad... in this way, they can fall in love and they know who they really are

? I don?t think so.. Knowing the Empire as I know.. I think the Empire will strike back.? She said.
They?re in silence for a bit. Then, Luke added:
?If the Empire strikes back, we?ll be here to confront them!?

Laya is right, and Luke is also right!

?Don?t worry my friend? at last, we will have revenge!? he said.

Great ending, to a perfect story!

I liked very much the teaser of the sequel and I'm looking forward for it! Actually, I'll read the first chapter if you let me...

And, I want more Laya/Jayden, please???!!

Great posts! And you really don't want to thank me, I really enjoyed this story!

Edit: By the way, the trailers are very good

 

ArwenSolo: It's posted And is 'sequel'

Miladry: awww!!!! And I see romance everywhere???? This was so cute!!!

Ok... thanks!

She admited that feels something for him???? *dances happy*

[face_what_the_hell_are_you_thinking?] She just thought that her father was PROBABLY right... just this

Mara is going to Hapes? hmmmmm.... ok... I've got a bad feeling about this...

You got the bad feeling about this with reason

I'm glad Jayden knows who Laya is, all the truth... I'm really glad... in this way, they can fall in love and they know who they really are

Oh my...!!!


Thanks

And, I want more Laya/Jayden, please???!!

Ok. You'll have more Laya/Jayden

Once again, thanks


And the sequel is posted, somewhere in this forum well, here!

 

Hello Laya its Cardoso
Your fics are the BEST nessa

 

Hello nessa
Your fic is fabulous, marvellous
Keep going

 

Hey Joao, thanks This fic is complete.. but I have already started another one; here it is the link: here

 

Very nice ending

Now I'm off to a sequel

 

Thank you Luke

 

oooooooo, Laya, it's sooo beautiful !!

well, I like them all, like I said before, you have talent!! And I am glad to be your friend!!!

LoooooooooooooL

good luck to your writing

 

luthyen: Hon Thank you so much!

I'm glad you liked this story

And thanks for the wish of good luck lol

 

god nessa!!! I didn't saw, but cardoso posted......if is who I am thinking, right ?? Pirex

loooooooooool ok ok
keep writing, it's a gift

 

luthyen: Nope, it wasn't who you think it is

It was a friend of mine, a guy

 

looooooooooooooooooool, ok ok
my mistake