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Beyond - Legends Ressurection (AU, OC's, E, L)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Admiral_Palpetine, Jun 20, 2003.

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  1. Admiral_Palpetine

    Admiral_Palpetine Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Apr 2, 2003
    Hey all! Well here is my new Fan Fic.

    With a little mentoring from my Beta, Agent Jaid, it should be fascinating!

    Author: Admiral Palpetine

    Rating: PG

    Genre: AU

    Disclaimer: Its ok, trust me, i am not earning a dime off this thing, just a penny. JUST KIDDING 8-}



    Ressurection


    PROLOGUE


    G.F.A.P. Senate...


    ?The Clone Emperor must be stopped!?

    ?We need peace!?

    ?His bands of Imperial Remnants are threatening our trade routes!?

    ?They are gaining in strength!?

    ?War cannot be started!?

    ?We are coming to an end!?

    The Senate was in an uproar. No one knew how to respond to the Clone Emperor?s attacks. As a bead of sweat ran down Grand Admiral Palpetine?s face, the force began to flow through him. He began to see them clearly, the attacks that have taken place. He was searching, searching for a weakness.

    The pirates, they rely on weapons alone! They are practically defenseless, once you get through their lasers!

    ?Master Palpetine?? the voice ran through his head, ?Master Palpetine?? still faint, but ever so clear.

    ?Master Palpetine!? The Jedi awoke from his vision.

    ?Master Palpetine, sir!? it was his right hand man, General Lessur Nosined.

    Palpetine shook his head to get the last of his vision out of his mind. ?Yes, Le??

    ?Sir, we are waiting for you,? Nosined motioned toward all the representatives, as they were completely silent, ?Your decision, sir, on what you will have done about this??

    ?Oh, yes.? Palpetine turned towards the Senate, ?I must adjourn this meeting of the senate. I must meet with our Fighter Squadren. ?I have seen a vision...?

    General Nosined stood up. ?This session is adjourned!?

    The senate was cleared rather quickly, in a huge mumble of different languages, most likely wondering about the decision of the Grand Admiral. They had no clue about his vision. But they would get a response in time.

    ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-

    ?Set a course, Lieutenant. Set course for Coruscant. I have a little surprise for the Federation.? The Clone Emperor?s voice was hard and cold. He was planning a full attack on the Federation?s Senate Building.

    ?Yes, My Liege.? The young boy, nearly 16, commands all of the ships to set courses for Coruscant.

    ?Ready my shuttle. I am looking forward to sitting in a throne once more...?


     
  2. Kev-Mas_Colcha

    Kev-Mas_Colcha Force Ghost star 5

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    Dec 15, 2002
    NICE!!!! I like it! Keep it coming!
     
  3. Admiral_Palpetine

    Admiral_Palpetine Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Apr 2, 2003
    Dont worry, we will. We'll start on the first chapter soon...
     
  4. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Feb 21, 2003
    :D

    Ah.... Finally a beta.

    :p I still... Never mind.

    Well Sir, you know that I think this is good but for the general public I'll expand.

    I'm the beta. :p

    I think that this is going to be fun.

    I can come and bug the readers 'cause I'd know what happens before they will. *snickers*

    We'll start on the first chapter soon...

    *looks slightly confused*

    We will?

    Oh...

    We WILL!!! :D

    *cackles*

     
  5. GenOochy

    GenOochy Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Jan 8, 2003
    I like it...

    Very good job....

    :D :D

     
  6. Admiral_Palpetine

    Admiral_Palpetine Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Apr 2, 2003
    Hey everyone! Well, i have a teaser for you!

    Here it is:

    ...His eyes were very dark and cold. And then he turned his head quickly towards Palpetine?s sight and ignited his saber. The saber was like none other though. It had a black blade, so it was unusually hard to see. The Clone Emperor then laughed evilly and slashed Palpetine. He was knocked off the edge and fell to his doom...

    HAH! NOW YOU GUYS WILL HAVE TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER! MWA HA HA!

     
  7. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Feb 21, 2003
    [MSN_[face_plain]]

    Just so you know....

    BETAS DON'T LIKE TEASERS!!!!!

     
  8. Jedi_Allegra

    Jedi_Allegra Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Apr 10, 2003
    Ok....I will not comment yet...will read...may not comment because not a single soul has posted in over a century. :p
     
  9. Agent_Jaid

    Agent_Jaid Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Feb 21, 2003


    Aw, come on Elora. :p We're not that bad. :p

     
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