SWRPF Archive Reveng of the Sith alternate story

Anakin has just found out Sidious is Palpatine, and has reported it to Mace, Obi - Wan acute senses (at least where Anakin is concerned) has picked up the shift and headed back to Corescant, where he meets Anakin on his way to Palpatines apartment.
"Anakin, whats wrong"
"Master Windu, Master Fisto"
"Calm yourself Anakin tell me what happened"
"The Masters they went after him"
"Went after who"
"Sidious"
"Sidious, where is he"
"You don't understand Master,"
"Then tell me Anakin"
"Sidious is Palpatine"
"What"
"The Chancalor and the Dark Lord"
"Anakin we must stay in the temple, the Masters will resolve the Problem,"
"NO"
"Anakin"
"but they'll kill him, I need him"
"Why"
"He Can Save Padme"
"Anakin, please we cannot interfere"
"I'm Going, Master, You can tag along if you like"
"ANAKIN WAIT"

Mace Windu has palpatine, he is slowly killing him by deflecing his lightning, Anakin bursts through the door,
"Master Windu STOP"
"Anakin"
Palpatine blasts Windu and he flies into a wall, he is knocked unconcious.
"Thank you Anakin if you had not saved me, I'm sure he would have killed me, now Anakin why are you here."
"I need you to save Padme, I'll do anything."
"Then kneel before me Anakin"
Obi-Wan reaches the door, his lightsaber already flaring,
"Anakin Stop"
"Master Obi-Wan"
"No Anakin I am your Master Now"
"Sidious, you will never be his Master"
"Anakin tell him"
A faint grown emits from the broken master in the corner, all eyes dart to him
"Anakin stop this madness, help me,"
"Anakin Kill him, for Padme"
Obi-Wan Lunges for Sidious, he is met by a wave of Force lightning which he deflects with his Saber, but is overwhelmed, and blasted back. Anakin then hurls force energy at the Sith Lord throiwng him into a wall.
"Master Obi-Wan, I'm Sorry"
"Anakin, thank you"

Mace Windu finds his way to his feet and stumbles over,
"Anakin I still sense hate in you"
"Master Windu Please Anakin has been through enough trauma today"
Anakins saber ignites and a look of pure hate spreads over both masters faces, he lunges in the direction of Windu, but knocks him over rather than stabbing him, He beheads the crawling, rasping Palpatine in one swift movement
"My hate dies with him"


The three Jedi stood recuperating, only for a few seconds, but for the three warriors it felt like a lifetime, but the eerie silence was finally broken by Master Windu
"Palpatine, what was he doing when you"
"Killed him" Anakin snapped almost solomnley, "I'm not sure"
"Master Windu," Obi-Wan whispered gravely "The Com units on" the two men who wern't already looking turned to see a cold dead hand lay on the keypad. Anakin dashed over followed by the other two, he flicked the buttons where the fingers lay, a figure flickered to life, one of the gleaming white soldiers of the republic
"Chancellor, Order 72 will be carried out, you have my word" it said Anakin turned to see Mace Windu flinching at the sound of the Clones voice, they served as a constant and unavoidable reminder of the bounty hunter he killed on Geonosis.
"Anakin was that the only transmission Palpatine sent" Anakin fingured the small glowing keypad on Windu's request,
"No one more was sent"
"Where to" Obi-Wan demanded, urgancy returning to his voice
"errrr Kashykk and someplace called Mustafar" Anakin replied obediently.
"Master Yoda" Exclaimed the to Jedi masters simultaneously,
"Obi-Wan there is much work to be done"
"Yes Master Windu"
"You must travel to this Mustafar, and Anakin, i'm almost sorry to ask this of you but you must go to Kamino, to find out about Order 72"
"Of course Master Windu" Anakin returned
"Master Windu, what of you and Master Yoda" Obi-Wan asked
"I will return to the temple, the Jedi must know of these events, and Yoda's fate is now in his own hands"
The two Jedi turned their paths would seperate here, now,
"Master Kenobi, Master Skywalker, may the force be with you" Mace added
"And you Master Windu" said Obi-Wan.
Mace Windu picked up his cloak and w

 

OOOO!!!OOOO!!!

I want Padme SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO bad!

Name: Padme Skywalker
Gender: Female
Age: 28
Species: Human
Homeworld: Naboo
Affiliation: Senator
Personality
---Traits: good-spirited, loving
---Habits: brushes haiir excesivly
Appearance
---Skin Color: fair
---Hair Color: loooooooooong, brown
---Eye Color: brown
---Clothing: senetorial robes
---Other Attributes: 5'10, slim
---Other Details: very pretty, slight accent
Weapons: Naboo royal Pistol
Starship
---Name: Naboo Starship
---Class: ?
---Weapon(s): None
---Crew: Padme's bodyguards/security
---Interior Description: roomy,comfortable
---Breif Description: very unique, handcrafted look

The Force
---Sensitivity: N/A
---Religion: N/A
---Lightsaber
-----Blade(s): N/A
-----Color(s): N/A
-----Handle Description(s): N/A
---Favourite Force Abilities (No more than 2): N/A
Biography
---Personal History: Was trained to be a Queen, then trained as a senator. is Anakin's wife, and has a sister
---Military History: Queen of Naboo, Senator for Naboo

Is this okay?
Do I get the part?

 

Well okay but in future can people PM me for the parts

 

Oh, sorry.

But...
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I got the part!

 

Ill join as soon as CS is approved...

 

Okay both the sheets i was sent are approved, just a small point i've never properly GM'd so is i mess up somone help me out

 

APPROVED

Name:Kit Fisto
Gender:Male
Age:30's
Species:nautoloid
Homeworld:unknown
Affiliation:Jedi
Personality
---Traits:n/a
---Habits:he has a humorous side to him
Appearance
---Skin Color:dark green
---Hair Color:n/a, head tentacles
---Eye Color:big black fish eyes
---Clothing:a dark brown Jedi tuni and cloak
---Other Attributes:n/a
---Other Details:n/a
Weapons:lightsaber
Starship
---Name:n/a
---Class:
---Weapon(s):
---Crew:
---Interior Description:
---Breif Description

The Force
---Sensitivity:yes
---Religion:n/a
---Lightsaber
-----Blade(s):single
-----Color(s):cyan
-----Handle Description(s)lain
---Favourite Force Abilities (No more than 2):
Biography
---Personal History:has been trained since he was very young in the jedi temple, and if it werent for the Jedi code and laws his feelings and respect towards Aayla Secura may have turned into something much greater.
---Military History: has fought in many of the battles and was/is a general in the clone wars

 

To start we need Mace, Deepa and Clone Palpatine

 

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I gots Obi-Wan. I'll have my CS up later.

 

OK thanks

 

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