Beyond REVOLUTION (NJO: Anakin Solo, Kyp Durron, Alema Rar, Others) Completed 9/24/03!

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  1. Yodas-evil-twin Jedi Grand Master

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    Maggy: great summery what had happened *sniffs*

    Thanks :(

    teehee ... spacechicken Vergere

    Yup.

    this humming... the former Jedi Temple?

    No [face_whistling]

    cool banter between Hul Choka and Kin
    and the bulding he seeks... the Senatehall where Ganner died?


    You are correct ;)

    aww... like how you describe how Corran sees Kyp

    I'm glad.

    Corran seems not to like it much

    With good reason [face_mischief]

    like how you write Corran ... a true CorSec

    Yup :D

    the worldbrains doing ... and Jacens (in a way)

    You've got it.

    superb call signs
    was clear that Kyp has to use Jedi One
    it?s obvious who who is


    [face_laugh] Glad you liked them.

    Oh my god, oh my god, that was great... hadn?t even time to think about anything exept taht it is superb written *hurries to next part*

    Thank you :)

    interesting ... perhaps some help? [face_hopefully]

    Perhaps ;)

    they are going to kill him and the settlement, they know too much about Anakin
    you wouldn?t mention them otherwise


    You're very clever [face_mischief]

    I have known it

    Yup, you called it.

    interesting discussion ...
    I still think Wrev is up to something...


    He is.

    interesting how he got saved ...

    I hope you liked it :)

    *headdesk*

    [face_laugh]

    Alema seems not to approve the plan

    Yeah, she doesn't like Strift either :p

    gah! He is only there to serve Shimrras little games ...

    True...

    It?s not sick, it?s funny

    Glad you like him :D

    u?re evil

    Why's that?

    Anakin will not play along

    Nope ;)

    I have thought about something to happen

    Then you were right.

    so great, cool story how Kin survived

    Glad you liked it :D

    *rofl* Kyp is cool

    He is :cool:

    would be a bad reputation [/i]

    Yes, in many circles :p

    *bursts out laughing*

    [face_mischief] It is Alema afterall.


    *grins while reading the whole post*
    wow! Superb written, Yobi :D
    wonderful


    Thanks, I think that one was my favorite. :)

    Corran shouldn?t trust him, have a bad feeling about it

    You're right, Corran least of all...

    this ending makes me wish i could start with the next part straight away...

    You can :p

    Yobi much i didn?t say exept reaction to the parts I commented.
    what to say?
    This is greatly written


    Thank you :)

    I like how your characters develop and how you spin your story. The fighting scenes are superb (you can choose craft combats or sabre combats or hand to hand ).
    You OC is a very interesting character and I am looking forward to learn how he turns out in the end.


    Wow, thanks. Glad you seemed to have enjoyed everything :D

    I am really looking forward to the next part Hopefully find time to start with it soon.

    I see that you have, thanks once again :)



    Evil-twin: Thanks :D
  3. Maggy Force Ghost

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    Yobi:

    finally :p ;) :D [:D]

    >superb call signs
    was clear that Kyp has to use Jedi One
    it?s obvious who who is <

    [face_laugh] Glad you liked them.


    yeah I really did


    >they are going to kill him and the settlement, they know too much about Anakin
    you wouldn?t mention them otherwise <

    You're very clever [face_mischief]


    [face_blush] thanks


    >u?re evil <

    Why's that?


    you are evil?! nearly sithly :p ;) :D


    >*bursts out laughing* <

    [face_mischief] It is Alema afterall.


    [face_laugh] aye :p


    Wow, thanks. Glad you seemed to have enjoyed everything :D

    yes I have :)
    It was fun reading it


    I see that you have, thanks once again :)

    aye, a bit anyway ;) :D


    ~Mags~
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