I thought Star Wars dialogue was always awful. I mean Mr. Lucas couldn't write dialogue if his life was at stake. I actually liked that part where Threepio was telling the story to the Ewoks/Wookies. I think Lucas was seriously trying to show us the effects of storytelling even thought he messed up by having Threepio say Cloud City and a few other words in English. Have to agree with the last one. I really wanted to see Baron Harkonnen in Star Wars. Heck thats what he looks like in my rewrite along with mercenaries wearing Klingon armor.