Before - Legends Runaway Jedi -- Update 6/3 -- Now 'Much Ado Over Nothing'

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making sure this works before i do anything....

ok, it works!! yea!

Title: Runaway (for a good reason) Jedi
Author(s): ShadowofLures, edited and sharpened by various friends (you know who you are )
Timeframe: Begins with a girl who just turned 13; in a few posts we discover Obi-Wan is 19.
Characters: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon, members of the Council, and my lovely OCs
Genre: Mystery / Thriller / Drama /
Keywords: ?
Summary: Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon stumble upon a common criminal that turns out to be not-so-common. His death brings my OC to them, and decides to let them help her in her mysterious task. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon's relationship will be tested beyond its limits, and there will be many a bloody death. (for those who can't handle blood of any kind, STAY AWAY!
Notes: it's under construction until i say so (), and the story itself may be modified several times until you as the readers are satisfied you understand the language of the way i write, and i pronounce it good enough.

this is something i wanted alot of opinions on, so if you got a PM, PLEEZ check this out?

here we goes......grab a popcorn bag......





Chapter 1

 

if everybody really wants another posting, i'll post it, because i know this didn't give you much to go on.

 

Oh, more please...I'm intrigued!

 

Nice to see you finally got this up.

 

Welcome back! And nice to see you posting a new story!

 

*looks around*

ACE!!!!!!!!!!!!! *HUG*

wow. LURKERS!!!!!!!!! please critique me.

 

Chapter 1, Part 2

 

Yay Shadow!!!! That was AMAZING and it makes me want to write a new story! Oh wait...I still have that one I've been working on since...forever. Oh well. This is still a wonderful story! One comment: keep an eye on your tenses. I noticed it every once in a while in the first post you would slip from present to past. Other than that, I couldn't find anything serious. Post more! Please?

 

*edit*

 

Chapter 2, Part 2

 

Wonderful my dear! I am hooked! Please update as soon as possible!

 

just to mix things up a bit.........





Chapter 3, Part 1

 

happy holidays, everyone! i'll work on the next part over the break, and be back and loaded with surprises!

luv ya!

-SoL

 

Nicely ominous, Padawan. Leaving out names and the black gloves leave me going 'I don't know who she is, but I do not like her at all.'

Of course, I doubt that anyone hanging out several miles underneath Coruscant's surface is a paragon of law and light. Except Obi-Wan, and he isn't there entirely by choice.

Qui-Gon is disqualified due to the 'law' part of the above statement. Just so no one kills me.

 

thanks, Master!
*up*

 

ok, so this chapter is being split in three sections, cuz i'm being evil (haha, your loss ) and waiting to know that (other than my buddies ) other individuals are interested in this, and/or are reading it. cuz i have e-mail addresses, and would perfer not to take up board space.





Chapter 3, Part 2

 

Very interesting so far and
intriguing, lots of secrets

I will be reading

 

Very interesting. I'm hooked

Up

 

That's amazing! I'm a little confused, though, with all these new characters. I'll sort it out, though.

 

Hola! I just found this.

Please update soon, I need to know what's gonna happen!

 

you think you're confused now..........



i'll be slow

HAPPY NEW YEAR'S EVERYBODY!!!!
*sips sparkling cider* <-- diet coke is better! heehee...

 

good start! i'll be back here often.

Before he could move another inch, the younger one kicked out with both legs, knocking Apsua to the ground. Whipping out his lightsaber, the boy poised it above Apsua?s throat.

?Sorry, did we intrude??
-lol sounds just like Obi-Wan!

-Roain <><

 

oh, good. glad you liked it!

 

*up*