Beyond Safe (Luke w/mentions of Callista and Mara)

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  1. lukemaraben Jedi Master

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    Sep 2, 2012
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    Title: Safe
    Time frame: Darksaber
    Disclaimer: I don't own SW's or these characters!

    Safe

    She wanted to see me!

    It shouldn’t mean that much to me, but it does. Mara Jade actually admitted to wanting to see me! She went out of her way to see me. She could have just sent a message about the Hutts to me.

    Come off it. There is no reason I should be so happy over this. I saw her and Callista talking earlier. I hope Mara was jealous, just a bit…

    Wait. Why would Mara be jealous? Maras a friend, why do I hope she’s jealous even a little?

    Secretly, I had been hoping she’d come to visit for a while now. I would find myself wondering what she was up too…

    There is something so easy about being with her. It’s not like the strain I feel with Callista.

    Mara is just Mara.

    She says my name like it’s a curse. I let her. She thinks I’m vain and conceited. I just smile relishing the fact there is still someone who could care less about all my accomplishments and just treat me like a person not the Jedi Master.

    If only she knew how much her sharp tongue can clear up questions I have like nothing else. I would be scared to ever let her know. It’s so much easier to let her think that I have it all figured out. Safer.

    As much as I love Callista, I can’t help but wonder if I let myself could I feel this way towards Mara? Something tells me I could, and it would be so easy to let myself.

    That’s why I’ll never let her see how much her visit today meant. That’s why I stay the Jedi Master around her. Calm, collected, and seemingly in-human it’s probably not right, but then again if she can have her mask why can’t I?

    Because I know if Mara were to reject me…I’m not sure I would ever be able to live again.
  2. Nyota's Heart Combos & Paragraphs Host

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    Aug 31, 2004
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    Welcome! And woot! I like the I'm with Callista but I really am pining after Mara [face_dancing] I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought that was happening ;) I'd adore it if this continued post Callista leaving - buya! [face_laugh] and Luke finding out firsthand that Mara is hot - in several ways [face_laugh] [face_mischief] as in: better, best, bestest in all ways - emotionally Force-wise and getting it on with a zing! way! As in - rock his world Mara Jade LOL

    Ahem... my reputation probably proceeds me - I love mush. I eat it for breakfast. [face_rofl]

    ~Jade_eyes
  3. Jedi_Lover Force Ghost

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    Nov 1, 2004
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    Luke, you are an idiot. This is why it is going to take ten years and a Force intervention to get the girl. Dump the cradle robbing, bodysnatching, Force-reanimated corpse and ask Mara out!

    I love this viggie! Well done!
    Last edited by Jedi_Lover, Sep 18, 2012
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  4. Briannakin Grand Moff Darth Fanfic Manager

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    Loved this! I cant wait for more from you!
  5. Luna_Nightshade Manager Emeritus

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    Jan 25, 2006
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    Sounds like Luke's got it bad! Great viggie!
  6. Hazel Force Ghost

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    Nov 9, 2010
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    I totally see this happening. Well done!@};-
  7. kataja Force Ghost

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    May 4, 2007
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    Great viggie, LMB! Spot on! Though I guess that in canon, Luke wouldn't have been this much in contact with his own emotions :p

    =D==D==D=
  8. lukemaraben Jedi Master

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    Sep 2, 2012
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    Thanks, for the reviews!
  9. Lady_Misty Force Ghost

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    Mar 21, 2007
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    Luke should have asked her out YEARS ago.

    And Callista doesn't completely go away! She's gets absorbed by that monster from FotJ and Luke apparently insisted in setting her free without much thought for everyone else that had been absorbed.
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  10. jedi1952 Jedi Grand Master

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    Apr 15, 2007
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    Interesting story. I always wondered what was going through Luke's head when Mara and Callista had their little "meeting" at the acadamy.
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