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Beyond - Legends Save Me - DJ missing scene (Jaina/?)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by J_M_Bulldog, Feb 14, 2004.

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  1. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Apr 24, 2003
    I was listening to Evanescense's Bring Me to Life and well, you be the judge.

    Disclaimer: I do not own Star Wars. That belongs to George Lucas. I do not own Bring Me to Life. That belongs to Evanescense.


    Title: Save Me
    Author(s): J_M_Bulldog
    Timeframe: Dark Journey
    Characters: Jaina and a mystery man
    Genre: Eh, not sure. It's not really romance as deep thinking.
    Keywords:
    Summary:
    Jaina's thoughts about a certain someone while in the clutches of the dark side.
    Notes: The guy is left up to the interpretation of the reader.

    This is dedicated to JainaDurron.

    Enjoy!

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    How can you see into my eyes like open doors
    leading you down into my core
    where I?ve become so numb without a soul
    my spirit sleeping somewhere cold
    until you find it there and lead it back home


    Jaina could not understand it. How could he? There should not be a way for him to reach her. She had purposely distances herself for everyone. There was no way he could see to the very core of who she was. And yet there he was, in her mind, in her heart, standing there - arm out stretched. As if he would lead her back.

    (Wake me up)
    Wake me up inside
    (I can?t wake up)
    Wake me up inside
    (Save me)
    Call my name and save me from the dark
    (Wake me up)
    Bid my blood to run
    (I can?t wake up)
    Before I come undone
    (Save me)
    Save me from the nothing I?ve become


    She felt that her soul, her entire being was asleep. She walked in a trance. Her one hearts desire, to avenge the death of her brother. Til he stood there. He was willing to go against everything and pull her back.

    Now that I know what I?m without
    You can?t just leave me
    Breath into me and make me real
    Bring me to life

    (Wake me up)
    Wake me up inside
    (I can?t wake up)
    Wake me up inside
    (Save me)
    Call my name and save me from the dark
    (Wake me up)
    Bid my blood to run
    (I can?t wake up)
    Before I come undone
    (Save me)
    Save me from the nothing I?ve become


    He showed her that there was more to life than the vengeance she wanted. He jumped in when no one would and found her at the center of the storm her life had become. For that she was grateful. For that she loved him.

    Frozen inside without your touch without your love
    Darling only you are life among the dead

    All this time I can?t believe I couldn?t see
    Kept in the dark but you were there in front of me
    I?ve been sleeping a thousand years it seems
    Got to open my eyes to everything
    Without a thought without a voice without a soul
    Don?t let me die here
    There must be something more
    Bring me to life


    He was the only life amongst the dead that she had seen. Everywhere those she loved seem to die. Anakin. Jacen. It became to much for her to bear. Alone, she would cry, hot tears sliding down her face. Only alone did she do this. In public she was strong. In public she was something entirely different. But he had seen through that. He chose to see through that.

    (Wake me up)
    Wake me up inside
    (I can?t wake up)
    Wake me up inside
    Call my name and save me from the dark
    (Wake me up)
    Bid my blood to run
    (I can?t wake up)
    Before I come undone
    (Save me)
    Save me from the nothing I?ve become
    (Bring me to life)
    I?ve been living a lie, there?s nothing inside
    (Bring me to life)


    ?Someone save me,? she whispered into the dark. ?Some bring me back home, back to life.?

    ?I will,? a deep voice said from behind.

    She spun. There he stood, arms opened, in a silent gesture. She rushed into his loving embrace, burying her face into his broad chest.

    ?I?ll always save you,? he whispered into her ear.

     
  2. JainaDurron

    JainaDurron Jedi Master star 4

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    Aug 8, 2002
    Awww! You dedicated it to me! {{Hugs}} Wonderful BA, just wonderful. :)

    ~~Jilly
     
  3. AvenKiel

    AvenKiel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Oct 18, 2003
    And of course you were talking about Zekk, right JM?

    lol, nice post!
     
  4. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Feb 9, 2003
    Hmmm, i think I liked the idea of this, but I think you liked the idea of the song more than the fic. Or better said, the song reminded you of that scene.

    Which is good, but there's so few text and so much song text. This doesn't make it a fic, but more or less a topic.

    I think you should work this idea out to a longer fic, using that song.

    Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to bring this fic down, but just giving you advice.
     
  5. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Apr 24, 2003
    Mouse: Awww! You dedicated it to me! {{Hugs}} :D *hugs back* Wonderful BA, just wonderful. Glad you liked it.

    AvenKiel: And of course you were talking about Zekk, right JM? It is whoever you wanted. I purposely did not describe the man for that reason.

    lol, nice post! Hehe, thanks. Glad you liked it.

    Elfsheen: Hmmm, i think I liked the idea of this, but I think you liked the idea of the song more than the fic. Or better said, the song reminded you of that scene.

    Which is good, but there's so few text and so much song text. This doesn't make it a fic, but more or less a topic.

    I think you should work this idea out to a longer fic, using that song.

    Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to bring this fic down, but just giving you advice.
    I wrote this how I saw it in my mind. *shrugs* I don't think I can make it longer. I can understand what you are saying but I'm not so sure I can do that. If something comes to me I'll update this.
     
  6. Lt_Jaina_Solo

    Lt_Jaina_Solo Jedi Knight star 5

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    May 27, 2002
    Very nicely done, BA!
     
  7. J_M_Bulldog

    J_M_Bulldog Jedi Master star 4

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    Apr 24, 2003
    CaD: Very nicely done, BA! Thanks girl. Glad you liked it. :D
     
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