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School Days - A 1st JA fan-fic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction Stories--Classic JC Board (Reply-Only)' started by Jedi Obi-Wan, Jun 20, 2000.

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  1. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Uhhhh. Still no post. Iam going to tear my hair out.
     
  2. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    me too, Padawan 3. where's the rest!?
     
  3. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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  4. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    up!!

    I hate the way these boards are, now...
     
  5. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You and me both. Jedi, I think you are ignoring this. (I KNOW you are ignoring this!!!!)
     
  6. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *talking to the wall* evil. leaves it at a cliffhanger, then doesn't post again...
    *grumble*

    :D

    no, i don't want to smegging 'suscribe'!
    harumph

    up!
     
  7. Jedi Obi-Wan

    Jedi Obi-Wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Evil! Me? Never! ;)

    I'll try and post soon. I've been tied up with school. padawan3, you might want to hang on to your hair a little while longer.
     
  8. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    upupupupupupupupupupupupupup!!! hey, that looks like pup! oh, well. see how bored i am, Jedi? you have to save my sanity! well, what's left of it... oh, yeah. well, never mind.
    but you still need to post!
     
  9. Jedi Susie

    Jedi Susie Jedi Master star 4

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    Please post soon! I know school can be Sithly...but hey so can fanfic readers ^_^
     
  10. Kaylla Norn

    Kaylla Norn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    yeah, we can be very very sithly... we can clog your mail with notes demanding more story... we can.... we can do lots of things so post allready!

    ;~)
     
  11. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    yes we can, Kaylla. and we might if we have to wait to long. *evil grin*
     
  12. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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  13. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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  14. Jedi_KnightMariah

    Jedi_KnightMariah Jedi Padawan star 4

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    *waves hand* You will post, Jedi Obi-Wan! Or I will .......do...something......bad.......like.....stuff.....your....locker.............with.......................fish? Oh, PLEASE POST! TOP again! I'll give you a.......um......REAL Lightsaber if you do! It's blue too! *pulls out 'saber*
    WONG! WONG!
     
  15. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    upppppppp!!!!!!
     
  16. Jedi Susie

    Jedi Susie Jedi Master star 4

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    Okay, now I am a very calm and collected person **hears people laughing and shouting out 'YEAH RIGHT' in the background**

    HEY I AM! **ehem** Anyways...so being so calm and collected **shoots evil glares at people making sure they stay quiet** I feel it is my place to calmly tell you to...

    POST SOON!!!! Please please please!! I, along with coutless others, am missing this fic and *need* an update soon!
     
  17. Jedi Obi-Wan

    Jedi Obi-Wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    "Qui-Gon, the Council-"

    "The Council is heartless!"

    Liven sighed. "I know you don't mean that."

    An uncomfortable silence stretched between them. Finally Liven spoke up. "We never know what we're getting ourselves into when we take a Padawan, do we?"

    Qui-Gon gave a small smile and shook his head.

    "My first Padawan's name was Jeri. We were never very close. He's a Knight now, training a Padawan. He turned out fine, but I can't help feeling he would have turned out better if I had been a better Master."

    "I don't know how you can keep your distance. I was never able to keep from developing a close relationship with them."

    "I had just been married when I took him as a Padawan. I spent more time trying to develop a close relationship with her than with him. That has all changed now. Carrie and I have been married for twelve years, so I've learned how to divide my time between my family and my Padawan."

    Qui-Gon smiled. "How did you pick Keni? She seems like a perfect fit with you."

    Liven chuckled. "I saw her fight one day, and was impressed, but I never thought about taking her, I was looking for a boy. However, our paths kept crossing. I got to know her, and she wasn't like most initiates around the Masters. She was loud, playful, daring, and she wasn't afraid to voice her opinion. She was a nuisance to the other Masters, but I was drawn to her. I nearly didn't take even then. My wife didn't like her, she told me not to take her. Our son, Ros, on the other hand, loved her. Eventually Carrie consented and I took her."

    Qui-Gon smiled. "I wasn't exactly "drawn" to Obi-Wan. I was his last chance at a Master, yet I refused him. Even after he had saved my life I was hesitant. It took watching him nearly die for me to realize that maybe we were meant to be." He looked out the window staring into space.

    Liven was compassionate. "You're afraid to lose him."

    "Yes."

    "We'll get him, my friend."

    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

    Keni slid her card into the door and opened it. She set down her books and jumped at the figure sitting on her bed.

    "Daen! What are you doing here?"

    "Waiting for you. Your class was supposed to end a half hour ago."

    Keni groaned. "I'm failing a class."

    Daen laughed.

    "It's not funny! It's Mrs. Lepard's class, the one where you learn how to be a lady." She sighed. "Todays lesson was on how to pick an object off of the floor."

    Daen nodded. "The gentlemen's class is equally useless."

    "You don't know the half of it. A lady never bends over with her posterior in the air, but slowly bends her knees until her hand can reach the desired object."

    Daen smiled.

    Keni sat down on the bed across from him. "Here I was in class, trying to figure out how we're going to rescue Obi-Wan and Adem, and they're worried about my bum becoming airborne when I bend over."

    "Thats an interesting way to put it."

    Liven and Qui-Gon entered the room. "Are you feeling better?" Liven asked, taking a look at Keni. She had healed fast, but cuts and bruises still made their appearances on her face and arms, and he face was still a little pale.

    "I'm fine."

    Liven took a seat on Ole's bed. "I'm going back to Oereta."

    "Just you?"

    Liven smiled. "The council has called for Master Qui-Gon and I both to return, but under the circumstances, we feel it's better if I return alone, and Qui-Gon joins me when Obi-Wan is safe."

    Qui-Gon folded his arms across his chest. "I don't want to waste anymore time. You should probably sleep the rest of the day, we're going to find them
    tonight."

    Daen raised an eyebrow. "What do you mean, find them tonight? We don't know where they are."

    "I have a link with my Padawan, I'll just follow my feelings."

    Daen sighed. "You Jedi are too weird."

    Keni groaned. "And this coming from an agent?"

    Daen shot her an angry look. "Agents don't need some force to protect people. We do it out of our own skill."

    "And Jedi don't? I've been at the Temple all my life, and all it is is work! You couldn't stand it there for a mo
     
  18. Kaylla Norn

    Kaylla Norn Jedi Youngling star 3

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    A post?! <blink> <blink> Wow. And it was a nice post too. Still doesn't tell us what benny is or how obi is doing but...

    A post, what a marvel.

    :~D


    Please post again soon... er please post again sometime this month <very big cheesy grin>
     
  19. Jedi Susie

    Jedi Susie Jedi Master star 4

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    A....post! YES!!!!


    I'm so happy you posted **wipes tear away from eye** Thank you SO much!

    I still an dying to know what/who Benny is and can't wait for the next post.
     
  20. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    *shocked voice* A POST! I thought there was justgoing to be another up, but it was actually a POST!
     
  21. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    OMG there is actually a post. And I only lost half of my hair but now I am so happy. Qui-gon going against the council no suprise there. Keep posting.
     
  22. Senni_Arava

    Senni_Arava Jedi Youngling star 3

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    he's married? are you gonna go more into that? (like is the rest of his family Force-sensitive)

    and, of course: up!
     
  23. Jedi Obi-Wan

    Jedi Obi-Wan Jedi Youngling star 3

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    This is a I'm-really-sorry-I-haven't-posted-in-so-long-please-forgive-me post. This is for all my patient readers. Wait, I don't have any patient readers? It goes out to all of you who take the time to read this, then!

    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

    Qui-Gon, Keni, and Daen crouched low by the side of the building. All three were armed with blasters, and the two Jedi also with their lightsabers.

    Qui-Gon looked at the two others. "Ready?"

    They nodded. Keni, being the smallest of the three, scaled the fence first. Daen and Qui-Gon followed. They would next have to get in in disguise. Qui-Gon snuck up behind a gurad that looked about his size, and pinched a nerve on his neck. The guard fell to the floor, unconscious. He exchanged glances with Daen, who had also knocked out a guard. Keni went and scouted out the entrances to the building while they switched clothes with the guards. She returned, and they all crouched behind a bush.

    "From what I can sense, there is only one entrance, the main one that is guarded," She whispered. "We can get in easily."

    Daen grinned. "The suit came complete with handcuffs."

    Keni nodded and turned so that Daen could put them on her. Qui-Gon stood beside them as Daen held her cuffs. They walked up to the entrance. One of the guards turned. "Halt! Who goes there."

    "Guard 2271," Daen said. "We've captured an intruder."

    Keni stamped her foot, pretending to stamp on Daen's foot. Daen winced and cried out.

    "Intruder! I was only looking for my dog! He wandered off this way. Let me go now or I'll have sue you for everything you're worth!" She said nastily.

    She brought her elbow back in Daen's stomach, making it look as though she was throwing everything she had into it. Daen doubled over and cried out. Qui-Gon used the distraction to take the first guard, and Keni knocked out the second. They once again assumed the guard/prisoner role. They entered the building unnoticed.

    They followed Qui-Gon. He could feel his Padawan, and feel the great pain he was in. His feelings led him to the place he expected, the holding cells. They met another guard there. Daen stepped forward. "Taking this prisoner to her cell, sir."

    The guard looked confused. "I didn't hear anything about another prisoner."

    Qui-Gon used the force to manuever the glass of water on the guard's desk over his head, then released it. The glass had the right effect, and the guard slumped to the floor.

    Keni took the keys from his belt. There were two sets. She tossed one to Daen. "Which cell, Qui-Gon?"

    The Jedi Master closed his eyes and reached out. He walked forward a few rows. He put his hand on a door. "Obi-Wan?"

    No reply came, but Keni moved by it. She looked at her key chain, then Daen's. "There are too many keys. It will take to long."

    Daen smiled and knelt by the cell and pulled a small silver object out of his pocket. "Then why bother?"

    Keni and Qui-Gon watched as Daen effectivly picked the lock. They heard a click, and Daen swung the door open. His eyes went wide. Qui-Gon tried to get in, but Daen wouldn't let him. "You shouldn't see this."

    Keni pushed past Daen into his cell. They heard her gasp. "Obi-Wan? Can you hear me?"

    Qui-Gon pushed past Daen. He caught sight of the bloody mass on the bench and his knees nearly slipped out from under him. Keni looked up at him. She rushed over to him. "Are you okay? You're really pale."

    Qui-Gon didn't respond, just stood there in shock. Keni motioned to Daen, and they escorted Qui-Gon out of the room. "Calm him down." Keni said, and Daen nodded. Keni went back into the cell.

    "Obi-Wan?"

    A soft moan answered her. Keni smiled. "Hey, you ready to go?"

    "K-Keni?"

    "Yep. Now be quiet. I would ask if you could walk, but that doesn't look like a possibility."

    She slipped an arm under his back. He hissed, and Keni winced, but pulled him up. He leaned heavily on her. They slowly made it out of the cell. Daen was talking to Qui-Gon. He sighed and looked at Keni. Obi-Wan seemed to sense Qui-Gon's current state of mind. "M
     
  24. padawan3

    padawan3 Jedi Master star 4

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    Yes they saved them. For now anyway.
     
  25. Jedi Susie

    Jedi Susie Jedi Master star 4

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    Yeah another post!! Thank you SO much!

    So happy to see that Obi's safe...but as padawan3 added...for now <eg>
     
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