Saga Secrets of the Jedi (post-AotC AU; Siriwan; A/P) **Updated 3/13/12-Epilogue** Complete

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That is the end??? *sniff* *tries to hold back tears* *fails miserably*

*after some time regains composure*

I just found this story, and I must say wow! I have always thought that many things would have changed between Obi-Wan and Anakin if only they had been honset with eachother. I have to say that I usually go for darker stories, (after all I consider myself a Sith ) but this is wonderful!

You are a wonderful writer and I am really enjoying this story. Could you please PM when you update? And, please update soon!!!

I look forward to reading more!

Ani-maniac

Malz4JESUS We'll be waiting!

Thanks. It won't be too long now.


DarkLadyRevan hate it when that happens it is so frustrating! Well at least you had everything on disc

Yeah, I hate it too. Thankfully I had everything backed up.


Venus_Star2-com please come back!!!!

On my way with the next chapter in hand.


AP4EVER UP!!! Please?

Thanks for the up. The chapter is done now.


Ani-maniac That is the end??? *sniff* *tries to hold back tears* *fails miserably*

Ah, don't cry. The next chapter is on it's way.

I just found this story, and I must say wow! I have always thought that many things would have changed between Obi-Wan and Anakin if only they had been honset with eachother.

Thanks. I alwasy thought that too, if only Anakin had been honest and Obi-Wan had opened up a little more, things might have been different.

I have to say that I usually go for darker stories, (after all I consider myself a Sith ) but this is wonderful!

Oh, don't worry this one will have darkness. After all, they are about to head into the Clone War.

You are a wonderful writer and I am really enjoying this story. Could you please PM when you update? And, please update soon!!!

I look forward to reading more!

Well, thank you for the compliment. I will PM you, no problem.


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Well readers, after weeks of computer problems, everything is finally fixed and the next chapter is here. I want to thank all of my readers for waiting patiently. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.






Chapter 4

Anakin crossed the threshold of the quarters he and Obi-Wan lived in just in time to see his mentor pulling on his boots.

?You?re awfully late getting dressed, Master,? Anakin commented lightly.

Obi-Wan looked up and he secured the last boot-strap. ?Siri and I chatted for quite a while. She wasn?t satisfied that I was okay until she?d checked me from head to toe.?

Anakin laughed. At nine years old he?d met Obi-Wan?s friends and he knew how protective they were of his Master, especially Master Tachi and Knight Bant Earin. Even Garen Muln was protective, but not to the degree of the two females.

?My condolences, Master,? Anakin quipped teasingly. ?I?m sure she poked and prodded as well as Healer Bant would have.?

?Oh, she was much gentler than Bant would have been, Anakin,? Obi-Wan teased back as he stood and grabbed his robe. ?Did you enjoy your breakfast??

Anakin moved into the kitchen and began preparing himself a cup of hot Alderaanian tea. ?I did. The younglings were happy to see me.?

?You?re good with the younglings, Padawan,? Obi-Wan complimented him. ?Someday you?ll be a wonderful Jedi Master.?

Anakin shook his blonde head violently. ?I don?t think so, Master. I can?t imagine putting up with a Padawan Learner in the same way you?ve put up with me for so long.?

Obi-Wan gazed fondly at the nineteen year-old young man. ?I used to think that, too. When I was your age, Qui-Gon and I were always being sent on one mission after another, much the same way you and I have been. Anyway, inevitably, I?d do or say something that would make him laugh and he?d threaten me with having to one day put up with a Padawan that was as much of a trial for me as I was for him.?

?The along came me,? Anakin said, his voice low. ?His prediction came true.?

Obi-Wan stepped directly in front of Anakin and rested a hand on his shoulder. ?Yes, it did. You?ve been every bit the trial that Qui-Gon predicted you would be. But Anakin, I wouldn?t trade one moment of the last ten years.?

A small smile lit the young man?s face. ?Not even the promise you made to him?,? he asked carefully.

?No, not even that,? he said immediately. ?I?ll admit that I was hurt when his last words were of you and not myself. I

Yes! You've updated!

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Absolutly loved the conversations between the two Master/Padawan pairs. It's refreshing to see Obi-Wan assureing Anakin that he's always cared for him. And Siri's talk to Ferus helped him (and the reader's) better understand the role a Jedi plays in the Galaxy.

A wonderful chapter, and worth the wait. Computers are a god-send, but can be a burden at times. Anyway, loved this chapter, Master Jen! Can't wait to read more!

P.S. As much as I'd love to see Anakin and Obi-Wan wipe the floor at the competition, I'm rather anxious to see some Clone War action. But, whatever you choose to do is fine with me!

Yay a post!

Obi and Siri are such great masters

I want to see the lightsaber competition too

I didn't even know about this fic I'm not all the way here yet, but I've started, just wanted to let you know I'm reading, and liking very much!

Wonderful chapter!

Thank you so much for the PM. As for the lightsaber contest, I wouldn't mind seeing it.

Please update again soon!

Ani-maniac

AP4EVER Yes! You've updated!

Yes I have.

Absolutly loved the conversations between the two Master/Padawan pairs. It's refreshing to see Obi-Wan assureing Anakin that he's always cared for him.

Thanks. I think all Anakin may ever have needed was to know that Obi-Wan did indeed care for him; that he wasn't just an obligation placed in his hands by Qui-Gon.

And Siri's talk to Ferus helped him (and the reader's) better understand the role a Jedi plays in the Galaxy.

I thought the role of the Jedi needed to be clarified. It's sort my own world view. People in power go about trying to save and/or police the world and more often than not, we run into people that don't want our help. So, I sort of applied that to the Jedi.

A wonderful chapter, and worth the wait. Computers are a god-send, but can be a burden at times. Anyway, loved this chapter, Master Jen! Can't wait to read more!

Thank you.


Senator_Leia73 Obi and Siri are such great masters

Aren't they? Anakin and Ferus are lucky young men.


Briman I didn't even know about this fic I'm not all the way here yet, but I've started, just wanted to let you know I'm reading, and liking very much!

Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it.


Ani-maniac Wonderful chapter!

Thanks a bunch.

Please update again soon!

I will.

Oh wow! An update! How did I miss it?!

I really like this story. The honesty between Anakin and Obi-Wan is refreshing. Obi needs to tell him of their child though...I think that's important.

Finally caught up, Jen, and wow! I am really into this fic now. You have a way of writing Obi-Wan that I find always captivating, you put him stories with really emotional plots and that just makes his character incredible to read about. I like Siri, too.

Personally, I wouldn't mind the lightsaber contest

I love this fic!!

The Siri/Ferus talk was amazing. You do such a wonderful job with dialogue.


Personally, I would love to see the lightsaber competition.


Great work.

Yay you updated!

Hmmm do I smell a competition...?

WooHoo!

Great post!


God bless,
Malz

Errine23 I really like this story. The honesty between Anakin and Obi-Wan is refreshing.

Thank you.

Obi needs to tell him of their child though...I think that's important.

It's important, yes, but how important?


Briman Well, thank you very much.

Personally, I wouldn't mind the lightsaber contest

I haven't decided yet which I'm gonna do. I may actually write both.


Skywalker_Angel I love this fic!!

The Siri/Ferus talk was amazing. You do such a wonderful job with dialogue.

Thanks. You do well with it also, you should post your stuff.

Great work

Thanks so much.


Siri-Wan-Kenobi Hmmm do I smell a competition...?

Yes you do.


Malz4JESUS WooHoo!

Great post!

Thanks.

I nearly missed that you had updated this story.

The dialouge in this chapter was great. Although it was a lot of explaining, it was easy to read and felt very natural all the time.

Very nice moment between Obi-Wan and Anakin.

I liked the bit with Ferus. Nice to see his thoughts on the matter. And Anakin isn't looking forwards to the war- I like how you portrayed that. Personally, I think seeing the lightsaber match would be fun, before you begin the war, by the way.

Oohh, do both, pretty please

I love these conversations. They really bring to light the fact that Obi-Wan and Siri are both good teachers.

I would be in favor of a lightsaber duel. Fun, fun, fun!

Hi , well I just found this fic... and what a finding!!!!! not only this is an amazing A/P but mainly a Siriwan!!! and they have a baby!!! I just love it!!!, I hope you are going to update soon, anything you'll like to write will be great , be well and take care.

Lexi The dialouge in this chapter was great. Although it was a lot of explaining, it was easy to read and felt very natural all the time.

Thanks. I was worried it was a bit too wordy.

Very nice moment between Obi-Wan and Anakin.

They?re good together when they?re being honest, aren?t they?


Alethia I liked the bit with Ferus. Nice to see his thoughts on the matter.

Thank you. I thought that maybe Ferus deserved a little more than a supporting role in this fic.

And Anakin isn't looking forwards to the war- I like how you portrayed that.

No, he isn?t. Why might that be?


Briman Oohh, do both, pretty please

I?m actually thining about doing exactly that.


DarthMousche I love these conversations. They really bring to light the fact that Obi-Wan and Siri are both good teachers.

Yes, it does. That fact may play a large role later in this fic.


Erin_21 Hi, well I just found this fic... and what a finding!!!!!

Well, thanks very much. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it.

I just love it!!!,

Thanks again.

Alright! Both!

UPDATE

?I did. The younglings were happy to see me.?

?You?re good with the younglings, Padawan,? Obi-Wan complimented him. ?Someday you?ll be a wonderful Jedi Master.?

I wonder if Anakin has already met Zakk and the two of them have possibly become close. I think Obi-Wan should tell Anakin who is wife is and that they have a child. I don't think that Anakin won't be upset that his master has a son. That part kinda comes with marriage.

Great job with this!

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Briman Alright! Both!

I'm only considering it.


Master_Jedi_Singh UPDATE

I will. Very soon.


bek I wonder if Anakin has already met Zakk and the two of them have possibly become close.

Very interesting observation. I wonder if they have met?

I think Obi-Wan should tell Anakin who is wife is and that they have a child. I don't think that Anakin won't be upset that his master has a son.

Anakin can be pretty jealous at times. Who knows how he'll react.

Great job with this!

Thank you.


jacen20005 UP!

Thanks for the ups.




Hello readers. As of right now, Saturday night, I'm looking at possibly having the next chapter up by Tuesday. I spent all day Saturday at a car dealership buying a car so I didn't have time to write, so I won't be posting this this weekend. Thanks for reading.