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Saga Secrets of the Jedi (post-AotC AU; Siriwan; A/P) **Updated 3/13/12-Epilogue** Complete

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by JediMaster_Jen, May 25, 2005.

  1. usher-lover Jedi Knight

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    de-lurking to tell you what a great story this is! hope you update soon!
  2. JediMaster_Jen Jedi Master

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    Author Announcement

    I do have the next chapter finished, and it will be posted on 11/25/05 (Thanksgiving for us Americans).

    I will be sending out PM's from now on to alert my readers when a new chapter is posted.



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    Jaira Hmmm. Guess I'll check back later...

    Yep, check back on Thanskgiving Day, it'll be here. :)


    usher-lover de-lurking to tell you what a great story this is! hope you update soon!

    Well, thanks for de-lurking. [face_dancing] I'm glad you're enjoying the fic. It'll be updated in just a few days.


  3. AP4EVER Jedi Master

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    Can't wait to read the new post!:)
  4. princess_of_naboo Jedi Master

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    I'd like to be added to your PM list.
  5. usher-lover Jedi Knight

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    it's black friday [face_worried] up! please? :)
  6. zvalarens Jedi Knight

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    I just found this today, and it is excellent! I would love to be added to your pm list.

  7. SiriKenobi12 Jedi Knight

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    I thought I had reviewed this before, but I guess I didn't...I will give you a full one when I have more time!
  8. Jaira Jedi Master

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  9. Jaira Jedi Master

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  10. mara13 Jedi Padawan

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    ah...its december 10 and still no update and plz add me to ur PM list. plz plz plz continue with this.
  11. JediMaster_Jen Jedi Master

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    Author Announcement


    I am back everyone. I had a family emergency over the Thanksgiving holiday and have been out of town. I arrived home two days ago. I will be posting this weekend. I checked in periodically, but now I'm back and the new chapter will be up Saturday.



    Thanks for sticking with it. :)
  12. voxynking Jedi Knight

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    Looking forward to it.
  13. Jaira Jedi Master

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  14. usher-lover Jedi Knight

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  15. usher-lover Jedi Knight

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  16. JediMaster_Jen Jedi Master

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    Hello all--Below is the next chapter of this fic. It comes way later than I had planned, but DRL and the holidays have been kicking my butt recently. Family problems and other issues came up, but all is good now and I'm back.

    Thanks for sticking with the fic. I have learned not to predict when each post will be, but I'm hoping for them to be at least one a week. We'll see. Enjoy the next chapter.







    Chapter 6

    ?What are we going to do, Master?,? Anakin asked as they boarded a transport headed for the Senate.

    Obi-Wan took his seat. He folded his arms into the folds of his robe and sighed deeply. ?We?re going to be cautious, Anakin. We can?t afford to let Palpatine know that we suspect anything. If he is being controlled by a Sith, or if by some stretch he actually is the Sith Lord, we have to be extremely careful.?

    Anakin sat down as the transport began to move. He closed his eyes and stretched out with his senses. He easily found the Chancellor?s presence in the Force. The man was calm, but satisfied. Anakin could sense no darkness at all around the Chancellor.

    ?Nothing?,? Obi-Wan asked gently.

    Anakin shook his head. ?The Force is clouded again, Master. It doesn?t feel any different to me now than it ever has. I don?t know why it?it seemed so different for a time the other day.?

    ?I think it was our imagination, Anakin,? Obi-Wan said practically. ?Despite our clouded perceptions, there is no way we could have spent the last ten years under the rule of a Sith Lord and not known it.?

    Anakin nodded slowly. ?I was just so sure.?

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    Blue and yellow sabers clashed above the heads of the combatants. Sweat beaded on their foreheads as they danced around one another, their sabers twirling masterfully.

    ?You can?t win, my apprentice,? Master Siri Tachi playfully taunted her student.

    Ferus Olin, nearly an entire head taller than his master, knew that she was right. Even at twenty-one years of age, he?d managed to beat her in their practice duels only twice. ?I can fight until the end, my Master.?

    Siri attacked, her blue saber arcing high before coming down at Ferus? shoulder. The young man dodged her strike and rolled to his left, coming up on the balls of his feet to parry her next strike.

    ?Now where did you learn that move?,? Siri asked, impressed.

    Ferus smiled as he once again attacked. ?From Master Obi-Wan. He showed me a few tricks a while back.?

    Siri switched to a one-handed grip on her saber to deflect a low strike from Ferus. Twisting away from her attacker, she launched herself into the air at the same time swinging her saber in a downward motion, just grazing Ferus? shoulder as she flew over his head.

    Ferus turned, knowing that his master would be behind him, and was stunned when he didn?t see her. The next thing he felt was the heat of her saber against his neck. He lowered his head and took a deep breath. ?I fail to understand how you manage to beat me every time we spar, Master. You beat me just hours ago, and now you?ve done it again.?

    Siri laughed softly as they both reattached their sabers to their belts and went to get a drink of water. Ferus sat down on a bench and wiped his sweaty brow with a towel while he waited for her answer.

    ?You?re over-eager, Ferus,? Siri said easily. ?You want to win so badly that you make careless mistakes. It?s part of the reason you?ve lost this tournament to Padawan Skywalker in the past. Until recently, your skills have been more developed than his.?

    Ferus nodded, taking in her instruction. ?What happened recently to give him the advantage?,? he asked curiously.

    Siri sat next to her apprentice as she took a sip of her own water. ?Geonosis, primarily. There is no greater teacher than experience, my apprentice. Anakin Skywalker now possesses experience that you lack, just as Obi-Wan has experience that I lack. They?ve learned over the years how to work as a team. Our missions have largely been diplomatic in nature and
  17. Jaira Jedi Master

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  18. serendipityaey Force Ghost

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    Thanks for the PM, great chapter :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
  19. ZaraValinor Force Ghost

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    What is Obi-Wan playing at? HM? need more soon? :p
  20. usher-lover Jedi Knight

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    yay, an update! and thanks for the PM:) cool update, and its making me wonder what Obi is up to[face_thinking]
  21. Ani-maniac Jedi Master

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    I am so glad you posted! :)

    This is a wonderful story, and I am very happy to see it continue.

    I really enjoyed this last post. Siri and Ferus' discussion of Anakin was wonderful, and I have a feeling that Obi-Wan is up to something suggesting that Palpatine stay at the Temple. Perhaps all the Jedi together will sense something... [face_thinking]

    I look forward to the next part!

    And thank you for the PM. :)

    Ani-maniac
  22. JediMaster_Jen Jedi Master

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    Jaira :eek: No! Bad Obi!

    Very bad Obi. What is he thinking? ;)


    serendipityaey Thanks for the PM, great chapter :) Can't wait to see what happens next!

    You're welcome, and thanks. Next chapter soon.


    ZaraValinor What is Obi-Wan playing at? HM? need more soon?

    Hmm, chances are he has a plan. More soon, I promise.


    usher-lover cool update, and its making me wonder what Obi is up to [face_thinking]

    Thanks.

    He's definitely up to something. Or is he? [face_worried]


    Ani-maniac I am so glad you posted! :)

    Me too. I was missing being able to write.

    Siri and Ferus' discussion of Anakin was wonderful

    Thanks. I'm hoping to flesh out their relationship a bit more than what we saw in the books.

    I have a feeling that Obi-Wan is up to something suggesting that Palpatine stay at the Temple. Perhaps all the Jedi together will sense something...

    Now there's an idea...having all of the Jedi trying to figure Palpy out. [face_laugh]

    I look forward to the next part!

    And thank you for the PM.


    Next part soon, and you're welcome.

  23. Venus_Star2-com Jedi Master

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    i have been away for a long time...so i have re-read all parts!!! yay! go me! i just wanted to say thank you for PM me!

    as for obi-wan inviting palps....well....obi-wan could have a plan...but that could be a BIG if.....who knows? i don't but you do probably

  24. zvalarens Jedi Knight

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    Oh yes still reading! Wonderful update!

    Thanks for the pm!

  25. Kynstar Jedi Grand Master

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    Thanks for the PM! :D

    Well at least Obi has his suspicions, better than he had in the original :)

    Let Palps reside in the Temple? LOL! That's gonna go over well! If anything perhaps Palps will have a continual upset tummy by being around all that 'goodness' [face_laugh]

    Great chapter! :D