Beyond - Legends See This? A Kyp poem

See This?
Kyp Poem

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See this?
A tangled mess
Wrapped in thoughts

See this?
Mirrors all around
Reflecting all but the truth

See this?
Shadows for all to see
The light, only me

See this?
Opposition in and out
Hanging from a thread

See this?
Perfection
But riddeled with holes

See this?
Reaching out
Only to touch emptiness

See this?
Spinning depths
Pulling in the outer stillness

See this?
Waiting for something
Someone maybe

See this?
Trapped in steel
Cringing for fear of sight

See this?
Overflowing depths
Wanting someone to catch the fall

See this?
All of it?
This is me


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To weird? Comments?

 

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Interesting poem . . . Kyp really is rather conflicted--it seems to me like he's trying to find a balance between dark and light. Very nice poem.

-duskwings

 

yea! Someone read!

Thanks, I agree Kyp is a character full of conflict,but then again, thats what makes him so intersting.

 

I agree with duskwings, this is a very interesting poem, but then that's what makes it good. I like it, it's not your usual format, or everyday fic. It describes Kyp perfectly. Good job!

JB

 

A great poem, Princess. You captured alot of great emotion there.

 

jedi bounty: Thanks! Yea, I agree it is unusual, especially asking a question at the begining, but what I was trying to do is to capture Kyp's essence in a way. Glad someone thinks I at least partially succeeded.


Sara: Hi! Haven't talked to you in awhile. Thanks, yea I did cram alot of emotion in there huh? But then again, I have a tendency to do that in fics or whatever I write. Bring on the drama!

 

Wow....

Usually I don't read or like poetry but this one was VERY GOOD.....

Good job Princess1

 

C3solo: Whoa, thanks! I got a non-poetry reader to read, thats quite a acomplishment! hehe, sorry I used to hate poetry a few years ago, now I love it, so I know what you mean. Anyway, thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked it.

 

oohhh, I didn't know you wrote poems! This is great!! I'm glad I decided to browse through the pages! Well done!

 

See this?
Overflowing depths
Wanting someone to catch the fall

My favorite stanza It's not a weird poem, it's a very good Kyp poem.

~aeryn

 

elfsheen: lol, you didn't know I wrote poetry? hehe, well I do. Thanks so much, glad you liked.

AERYN: Thanks soooooo much! Kyp is one of my favorite characters, so I am glad you think it worked. That was my favorite stanza as well.

Adalia: Thanks. ah yes, Kyp does seem to specialize in being tortured doesn't he?

 

See this?
Trapped in steel
Cringing for fear of sight


THis was my favorite stanza. Very good poem. I love poetry so I always like to see different peoples perspective through verse. Nicely written.

 

Jedi of Destiny: I didn't know you were a poetry fan! anyway, thanks I am glad you liked it, I adore writing anything to do with kyp.

 

that was great, Princess1! Really liked the style you wrote it in too, very original. You also kept it vague enough to apply to a lot of things, though you could definitley see how Kyp fit into it. Here was my favorite:

See this?
Perfection
But riddeled with holes

Kyp is the strongest Jedi in the Force, and yet he's filled with emotional turmoil and haunted by his past.

Great poem

 

It's great. Very pure and mystical.

 

yoda: wow, thanks, I know I wrote it in a unusual style, so its very cool to find out it worked. Your right, I definitly tried to not make it too specific and just get the impression of the character in it. Kyps my favorite character, and I think you summed him up perfectly when you said, that he's the strongest in the force, yet also filled with emotional turmoil, thats what I was trying to capture. Thanks soooo much!


keeper of swords: thanks, love your choice of words "pure and mystical" awwww, to cool, tottally neat you described my poem that way.