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Beyond - Legends "Sell-Outs" (J/J/Shawnkyr, Post-RS) Author's note 8/17! (Kind of important)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by _Tenel_Ka_, Apr 2, 2003.

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  1. _Alisas_Silverleaf_

    _Alisas_Silverleaf_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    ?You just asked him if he offered vegetarian cuisine,? the man snickered.

    ?Ah,? Jag replied nonchalantly, ?Well, Huttese is a vulgar language anyway.?



    AHH! Awesome! :D As always it was great, Katie. 8-} :)
     
  2. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    Hehe - Jag trying to speak Huttese!! LOL!!

    Nice post, as always!! Can't wait for more Shawnkyr and Jaina!!

    I'll be with my aunt and uncle for two weeks, and I don't know yet if my cousin will let me use his computer, so if I don't reply to your next post, then I simply did not have the opportunity to read it. But I'll try, I promise!! If it's not possible, I'll be here again in two weeks!
     
  3. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    Uppies!!

    Your loyal reader wants more!!
     
  4. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Vacation lasted a bit longer than expected, but I'm home now! :)

    I believe the next post shall be ready by tomorrow afternoon sometime. I would try to have it by tonight, but Equinox will murder me if I don't have the next section of her Harry Potter fanfic ready to read by midnight. ;)
     
  5. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Ugh, sorry, went to the lake. I have a day off from babysitting, so I'll work on it.
     
  6. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    * * *

    The speeder bikes made a deep, growling noise as Jaina pushed the gas pedals all the way down and made a sharp turn to exit the pyramid. She could hear the roar of Shawnkyr?s bike behind her, and the sound of the Trandoshans in pursuit.

    Much to her misfortune, the rainforest grew very closely to the pyramid?s base, and Jaina was forced to circle around it, looking for a road, instead of plunging into the mass of trees.

    ?Solo!? Shawnkyr yelled, catching up to her, ?What is your planned course of action??

    ?Plan?? Jaina replied nonchalantly, ?Solo?s never plan. We make it up as we go along.?

    ?Figures,? Shawnkyr shot back, grimacing, ?Well, what does the brilliant Trickster goddess intend to make up at this point??

    ?You mean right now?? Jaina asked casually, flipping the gears on her bike and narrowly avoiding a low-lying tree branch, ?I was going to see where this road led. I can feel Jag?s nearby.?

    Shawnkyr said something that sounded like ?kriffing Jedi apothegms...? but it was lost in the sudden whine of blaster fire singing past their ears.

    ?Sith!? Jaina swore and pulled into the trees.

    ?What was that?? Shawnkyr demanded, ?Speeder bikes don?t have weapons, and the gods know Trandoshans can hardly fly, let alone ride and shoot.?

    ?There?s a land-speeder after us,? Jaina informed her sardonically, ?I caught a glimpse of it as I was fleeing for my life.?

    ?Wonderful,? Shawnkyr muttered.

    Neither woman had the concentration for any more verbal attacks, as the forest closed in tightly around them and they flew with deadly precision between the trunks and boughs of mammoth trees, scattering wildlife in all directions in their wake.

    Without warning, the trees ended and a pyramid nearly three times larger than the one they had just left loomed directly in front of them.

    Jaina took a brief glance at the road and saw their enemies still doggedly chasing them, then turned back to the pyramid and gritted her teeth. She accelerated the bike to its greatest capacity.

    * * *


    ?Jaina!? Shawnkyr cried, ?Are you crazy!? Turn!?

    ?No,? Jaina answered calmly, ?On the count of three, jump.?

    Shawnkyr?s eyes widened.

    ?One.?

    ?You?re insane! It?s a fifty foot drop!?

    ?Two.?

    The individual stones became visible in the wall of the pyramid. Shawnkyr could see the moss growing in the cracks.

    ?Three.?

    Shawnkyr bit back a scream as she leapt from the seat of her speeder. Chiss did not scream.

    She expected the ground to come rushing up at her, and that she would feel a sudden breaking pain, but neither of these sensations came. Instead, she found herself floating at a controlled pace towards the ground, and Jaina directly beside her, her eyes closed in focus.

    ?There,? the Jedi girl said smoothly as their feet hit the ground, ?Now we run.?

    Shawnkyr was too relieved to make an intelligible reply so she merely took off after Jaina into the undergrowth, hoping that one of them knew where she was going.

    * * *

    ?Tell me again, Mr. Thomree, why we use Trandoshans in our organization,? Thracken drawled as the speeder pulled swiftly into the hanger and came to an abrupt halt. He stepped smoothly from the vehicle, followed by his second in command. A Rodian and large human male stood at attention near by.

    ?I believe, Sir,? Dek stated uneasily, ?That it?s because of their superior strength.?

    ?I see,? Thracken replied coldly, ?I must remember from now on that I cannot tolerate superior strength if it comes with inferior intelligence.?

    ?Now,? said Thracken, turning to the Rodian, ?You will take me to Ces?na and the prisoner believed to be Jag Fel.?

    The Rodian and human nodded and Thracken and his entourage fell quickly into step behind them. They were speedily escorted through the convoluted mass of tunnels that made of the inside of the base, and shortly arrived at the same metal door Jag had stood in front of not so many minutes before.

    ?Mr. Thracken has arrived,? the human mercenary spoke into his comlink.

    The reply w
     
  7. JainaSticksSolo19

    JainaSticksSolo19 Jedi Grand Master star 3

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    bbbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaadddddddddddd.
    more soon?
    wait.........whats he gonna do to jaggie?
     
  8. Elfsheen

    Elfsheen Jedi Knight star 5

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    Oh I like this story. Even if it is J/J... I feel like such a traitor ;) Oh well. Hope to see more soon! Or when I get back from vacation!
     
  9. jagsredlady

    jagsredlady Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I LOVE this story. I'm at the edge of my seat. :)
     
  10. Rose_Skywalker

    Rose_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    awww poor jaggie! he can't be having fun. Jaina with Shawnkyr, thats the oddest pairing i've seen. They'll either kill each other or kill each other. ;)
     
  11. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    Great post, my Master!!

    More soon??

    Please!!
     
  12. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    JainaSticksSolo19: Don't worry, Jag won't have any lasting injuries...

    Elfsheen: Thanks! What do you usually ship if not J/J?

    jagsredlady: Thank-you very much! A writer loves to hear that!

    Rose_Skywalker: [face_devil] I'll go with option a... wait, no! option b! 8-} Shawnkyr's my hero. :D

    Csillan_girl: As soon as possible! ;)Or perhaps I shall warp space-time and it will be sooner than possible... [face_devil]
     
  13. Shinar

    Shinar Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    TK you started POSTING!!! :eek: :eek:

    Why didn't you tell me?? :_| ;) Now I've got to catch up! :D
     
  14. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    I'm so sorry Shinar!!! :_| And to think I forgot about one of my most loyal readers, who's stuch through all the rewrites and moving abouts....

    *hugs Shinar*

    Okay people, here's the deal: I'm off to fencing camp for a week with out any sort of access to a computer terminal or the internet, so don't hope for a post until after the twenty-third!

    Thanks!

     
  15. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    Okie-dokie, I'll be waiting!!
     
  16. JainaSticksSolo19

    JainaSticksSolo19 Jedi Grand Master star 3

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    ok as long as you dont forget us
     
  17. Shinar

    Shinar Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Okay, I'm mollified enough by the hug that I'll wait paciently ;) :p
     
  18. LadyMairead

    LadyMairead Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Enjoy yourself at camp! I can't wait to read more when you get back. :)
     
  19. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    *still waiting patiently*

    Uppies!!
     
  20. Saber-of-Light

    Saber-of-Light Jedi Master star 4

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    **blurs by here in search of a beta**
     
  21. Shinar

    Shinar Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Looks like Saber's been into the chocolate again! That's like the 6th post from her I've seen just this morning :p
     
  22. _Tenel_Ka_

    _Tenel_Ka_ Jedi Padawan star 4

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    PHEW!

    Back in black. :cool: Er, white... Well, I'm back anyways, and ready to finish off this story, so I'll be working away on the next one, stat. 8-}

    Thanks to everyone who upped it! :D
     
  23. JainaSticksSolo19

    JainaSticksSolo19 Jedi Grand Master star 3

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    YEAH!
    more soon?
     
  24. Csillan_girl

    Csillan_girl Jedi Master star 5

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    Cool, can't wait!!

    *shoots OPPM*
     
  25. jedishellyskywalker

    jedishellyskywalker Jedi Master star 4

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    I just finished reading this for the first time, and I'm hooked!!! That Thracken...he makes me so mad!!!

    More soon!!!
     
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