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Saga Sense and (In) Sensibility (Sequel to P & P, A/P Humor/Romance) Post Coming Soon!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AnakinsFavorite, Feb 19, 2007.

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  1. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yay, A/P mush, you know I love it. And the SabeWan mush wasn?t so bad either, hmm, I wonder if Sabé will think anymore about Artoo.
    Fantastic update AF and thanks for the pm.
     
  2. piratedreamer

    piratedreamer Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Well, I seems I didn't have to threaten at all for that deliciously lovely mush! I loved every moment of it [and lucky for Anakin, he was civil the entire time or else I would have had to have a word or two with him...] and I can't wait for the next installment! Oh lovely Anakin, stray not too far from your winsome bride...and come back quick, wouldja? lol.

    ~piratedreamer
     
  3. jedilegolas

    jedilegolas Jedi Youngling star 1

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    I shall remember that reverse psychology works on such great jedi master such as Mace Windu... hee hee[face_laugh]
    What is R2 up to? [face_thinking]
    I thought it was funny that Padme kept getting stopped on her trek to find Anakin... it seems whenever we're really in a hurry there's always stuff in the way to slow you down! Loved the mush! [face_love]

    And as for those dresses that Peach and Pear wore from What a Girl Wants... I totally know what you are talking about and those are positively hideous!! (I like that movie, too)
     
  4. randomangel22

    randomangel22 Jedi Padawan star 4

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    You know I'm a sucker for mush especially Anakin/Padme mush [face_love] [face_blush].

    Loved Padme's insight that she finds herself thinking like Eirtae but I'm pretty sure she's not up to her level yet [face_laugh].

    Uh-oh Anakin and Padme are almost gonna get caught :eek:!

    Great update =D=!
     
  5. jedi_princess18

    jedi_princess18 Jedi Youngling star 3

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    So the datapad was an excuse- I was thinking he left some kind of message for her on it.

    I don't think they'll be able to hide their marriage much longer...
     
  6. Onoto

    Onoto Jedi Knight star 5

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    Good chapter! Anakin and Padmé are a great couple. I'm thinking of hunting down a certain flannel-wearing movie maker and forcing him rewrite Episode III. But then we'd get more mushy dialogue. :oops: We'll do it George's way.
     
  7. michaellover

    michaellover Jedi Youngling star 3

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    May 30, 2005
    awwww, such a mushy couple!! and Ani was even being nice!!
     
  8. anakin_luver

    anakin_luver Jedi Knight star 5

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    Jul 26, 2005
    i'm so sorry it's taken me forever to respond.

    i'm so happy i got here though, this story is going GREAT!
    everything is so light-hearted and makes me feel all happy. :D

    i love the concept and i love the little "game" Anakin and Padme are playing
    Anakin seems to be enjoying it more though ;)

    Anakin? drunk? oh man! i have GOT to see this :D

    well done AF! can't wait for more.
     
  9. Jaded_Rose

    Jaded_Rose Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Nov 15, 2006
    ahh, drunk Anakin will be quite a character I'm sure. And Obi-Wan just had to ruin the moment, didn't he? Silly Jedi.

    J_Ro
     
  10. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Jun 28, 2004

    A lovely serving of mush for this update:) and next we get drunk Anakin!!!

    Can't wait!

    ( I volunteer to drive him home!!!;) )
     
  11. jumpforjoy

    jumpforjoy Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Awww... loved the mush. [face_love] It was hilarious how Padme kept on encountering everyone but Anakin. Good thing faithful Artoo was there!

    Coming Next: The bonding ceremony. Weird traditions entail? which lead to a drunken Anakin and a peeved Padmé?
    What? Weird traditions? A drunk Anakin? Now I have to wait a week for the next chapter... :( [face_thinking]
     
  12. ChewieSkywalker

    ChewieSkywalker Jedi Youngling star 3

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    Dec 8, 2004
    Nice post. I'm definitely intrigued by the teaser and looking forward to next week. Remember-we are in a Heroes hiatus and I am counting on you to make sure Mondays don't suck![face_peace]
     
  13. WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT Jedi Master star 3

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    mmmm I wonder who programmed R2..... I look forward to the bonding ceremony.
     
  14. CallistaSkywalker85

    CallistaSkywalker85 Jedi Youngling

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    great chapter:) you know i love anakin and padme mush. [face_love] i agree with Chewie Skywalker. I can't wait for heroes to come back and this is a wonderful replacement. I look forward to it every week. Thank you for the pm. Keep them coming please. I don't think Anakin and Padme can keep their secret for long, especially if their pregnant[face_laugh] Looking forward to next week. A drunk Anakin? I can't believe it! Or maybe I can. Can't wait for the next one.
     
  15. Jedi_Kassandra

    Jedi_Kassandra Jedi Knight star 1

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    Jun 19, 2006
    Aww....

    "Then what was that yesterday?"

    heeheehee....You know, goodbye kisses have to be the day you leave, Ani, not the night before. :)

    ~kass
     
  16. AnakinsFavorite

    AnakinsFavorite Jedi Knight star 5

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    Wedding Spoiler

    Somehow, Padmé managed to sidle up to Anakin and press herself against him without anyone noticing- everyone was rather squashed together. Her hands found his side, and she gave him a hard pinch?

    And earned a glare in reply.

    ?What?s going on?? the woman asked casually as if she were only talking to him because of their close proximity? and the fact that they?d promised to be nice to each other.

    Despite his gruffness, the Jedi?s eyes twinkled. ?They?re seeing who gets to be the handmaiden?s escort for the day.?

    It took Padmé only a few seconds to figure out what was going on.

    Correlian brandy. Dozens of men. Drunken laughter.

    The bouquet in her hands began to tremor so badly that the petals started to fall off. She was the handmaiden for the day, which meant whoever won the drinking contest would? ?Anakin!? she hissed. ?Do something!?

    Evidentially, he had thought that there was a planetary disaster and quickly reached for his lightsaber before scanning scanned the area for danger- and soon realized that the only distress came from his wife. Realization dawned in his eyes, and Anakin pursed his lips. ?And what do you want me to do about it??
     
  17. Star_Angel

    Star_Angel Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Yeah, what will Anakin do about it, you know how much I love spoilers but that was evil?I can?t wait.
     
  18. Onoto

    Onoto Jedi Knight star 5

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    Geez! You can't post something where Anakin ignites a lightsaber in a room full of drunken men and not tell us how liquored up he is!:p
     
  19. AnakinsFavorite

    AnakinsFavorite Jedi Knight star 5

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    I just realized something very important... I will be gone this next week due to Spring Break. Since I did not warn you all, I asked HandmaidenVeme to post it for me in my absence.

    Saying it ahead of time, I hope you all enjoy it! :)

    AnakinsFavorite
     
  20. Onoto

    Onoto Jedi Knight star 5

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    I'm sure we will! Have fun during Spring Break!
     
  21. HCzGIRL481

    HCzGIRL481 Jedi Knight star 1

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    My goodness-the last chapters were GREAT! I wonder though, will Padme ever tell Anakin what she said to the Head Mistress (is he going to use the "force")?
    You are a gifted writer my dear- can hardly wait for the next update:D
     
  22. Across_The_Stars-24

    Across_The_Stars-24 Jedi Youngling star 1

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    Thanks for the pm. The chapters were great.

    Chapter 1:

    The antics between Padme & Anakin were great.

    Chapter 2:

    Padme telling the truth and not being believed. I think she is going to make a wonderful politician.

    Chapter 3:

    Anakin & Padme seeing each other but not being able to express what they feel.

    Chapter 4:

    Poor Anakin being reemed about Padme's antics. Padme rushing the data pad to Anakin when he left it for her the next day. Lovely mush for Anakin & Padme.

    Can't wait for more.
     
  23. HandmaidenVeme

    HandmaidenVeme Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Here's the much anticipated update!!!!

    I'm new to this and still in the process of getting PM's out to everyone on the list...I apologize in advance if I've missed you.:oops:

    I got a sneak peak and you guys are going to love this:D



    Author Replies:

    queenberuthiel: Ah, but we love mush so therefore it?s good! Yes, I can tell you loved it, padawan!

    VA_Parky: *Gasps* I made you smile on a M-Monday?! Wow! Grumpy? No. Chaotic- yes! I hope you enjoy this next burst of insanity.

    Laine_Snowtrekker: Let?s see what?s going to happen? chaos, of course!

    naadi: I?m glad you liked the mush- that is always the best to write!

    Star_Angel: Artoo has become a forgotten subject- that was just her train of thought there! Hee!

    piratedreamer: Hee! And I don?t take well to threats! I can be quite scary? well, not really. Don?t worry- Anakin hurried back in time for the wedding!

    jedilegolas: Ah, it was Trick #5 in my book here! Hee! I know- that always happens to me too and never fails! *Shivers at thought of dresses* I love that movie!

    randomangel22: I know! Thinking like Eirtaé=character defining moment! Methinks she?d have to stoop pretty low to get to that point!

    jedi_princess18: Oh, they will be able to- that will be what causes all of the problems between them!

    Onoto: Ack! No re-writes? it can only get worse (mushy dialogue, that is!) *shivers*

    michaellover: Anakin being nice? Now, that?s scary!

    anakin_luver: That?s alright! Thank you for the sweet words! When I thought up the ?game? I just knew I had to write a sequel for all the chaos! Hee! A drunken Anakin is always fun to see?

    Jaded_Rose: Methinks it?s silly Jedi all around- even Mace!

    HandmaidenVeme: *Hands Veme speeder keys* Make sure he gets home safely- and you are to go directly there? no stops or anything. (And thank you again for helping me out!)

    jumpforjoy: *Laughs* I for one know that?s how life works? things always tend to happen when you need to be going somewhere?

    ChewieSkywalker: Hence my guilt trip and this postie! I?m flattered you like this so much!

    WANNA-BE-JEDI-KNIGHT: Let?s just say that he?s tall and hot!

    CallistaSkywalker85: This one?s for you too? I felt so guilty when I realized that you guys weren?t going to be getting a post next week. On a side note? a baby would make things very complicated? indeed.

    Jedi_Kassandra: *Laughs* Men- what else do you expect, my dear!

    Star_Angel: Only something that will be devilishly fun!

    Onoto: You shall get a hint of how drunk he is at the end of this chapter? the fun begins in the next!


    Okay, I honestly forgot to tell you all that I was going to be on Spring Break this week and wouldn?t be posting? but I felt so guilty and asked HandmaidenVeme to help me out. This post is for you, my friend!

    Oh, and forgive the formatting? I shall come back and clean it up when I return!

    Sense and (In) Sensibility

    Chapter Five: Disaster

    It was ten minutes before the bonding ceremony was to take place, and Sabé was being violently ill in the ?fresher. Part of it was due to pre-wedding jitters- Padmé knew that she would have had them herself if she?d had enough time to get them- but some of her grief had also been caused by a mischievous Anakin.

    For reasons unexplained, the Chosen One had taken a devilish delight in talking about his own fright- and had taken the time to weave both of his wedding nights into one huge jumbled mess. The fact that he?d been forced to sleep on the couch for a while had left a rather large impression on the blond-haired woman?s mind, and it seemed that Obi-Wan was to share a similar fate.

    To make it even worse, Madame DesLauriers had just opened the door to find said Jedi standing there with a ferocious glower on his handsome face.

    ?She is in the ?fresher,? the headmistress sniffed, decidedly using
     
  24. Jazz_Skywalker

    Jazz_Skywalker Jedi Padawan star 4

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    Hahaha... a drunken Anakin and a sober Padme will certainly make for an interesting evening!
     
  25. Laine_Snowtrekker

    Laine_Snowtrekker Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Great post!

    Ropes? :confused: I'm hoping hilarity ensues.

    Thanks for the PM, as always.
     
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