Saga Serenity 1/1 Post TPM vignette, Movie challenge response

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  1. Juliet316 Chosen One

    Member Since:
    Apr 27, 2005
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    Title: Serenity
    Author(s): Juliet316
    Timeframe: Post TPM
    Characters: Surprise
    Genre: Angst, vignette
    Keywords: post - character death, vignette, post - TPM, Force afterlife
    Summary: He had never known such peace...
    Notes: Written for the [link=]Mod Movie Challenge.[/link]

    There is a peacefulness he had never known in his life. A bliss beyond compare. Images he could taste, and sounds he could touch. A sense of belonging, of peace.

    Yet, he was apart. The other's could sense him, but took no notice of him. It did not surprise him. They had lost their individual identities a long time ago. So how come he could remember who he was?

    He suspected it was all the studying he had done previously about the Force and his attunement to it. It perhaps was not the whole answer, but it was the best he could come up with at the moment. At the very least, it made sense to him. He had tried to communicate with the other side, but alas, he could not. It seemed that his studies only went so far and no farther.

    He knew he would have to figure out a way to send a warning and soon. Already beyond the bliss, he could feel the gathering storm clouds of darkness and chaos that he had felt right before his death. Unless something was done, it would one day consume nearly the entirety of The Force and very surely the very Galaxy he once inhabited.

    However that time was uncertain and he did not have all of his answers yet. As much as it pained him, those would have to wait for another day. He did feel certain that they would come to him in time.

    So Qui - Gon Jinn surrendered himself to the serenity of The Force, knowing that it would end all too soon.

  2. UnderCoverJedi Jedi Youngling

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    Jul 19, 2006
    star 2
    This was lyrically written. Lovely. =D=
  3. VaderLVR64 Manager Emeritus

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    Feb 5, 2004
    star 8
    I agree, a lovely piece! =D=
  4. Healer_Leona Squirrely Community Mod

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    Jul 7, 2000
    star 9
    Perfect piece, perfect Jedi for the title. [face_love] [face_love]
  5. BrentusofGath Jedi Padawan

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    Aug 12, 2005
    star 4
    So Qui - Gon Jinn surrendered himself to the serenity of The Force, knowing that it would end all too soon.

    A very lovely, fitting piece of art for Jinn. :)

    A very wonderful ending.

    Of course, the beginning and middle were great too. :p

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