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Before - Legends "Serpent-Spawn", 08/08/2011 paintings added

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by AzureAngel2, Jan 12, 2008.

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  1. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Thanks for comming on this long journey in the first place, dear bird.




    Then there is much to look forward to in December, dear Gkilkenny.
     
  2. SWpants

    SWpants Force Ghost star 5

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    The girl needed healing of a different kind now. My part was done. I just hoped that Luçien would take no part of her healing process.

    :/ I?have to agree with her. *sigh* Oh Lucien


    After a little eternity a sturdy human man did enter the lounge. ?My name is Captain Antilles and I would ask you to come with me towards the ship.?

    [face_laugh] Her sense of time is a bit warped ;)
    Antilles! Hah, they?re everywhere all the time.


    I looked down in mild anger, finding a small hole in my sari.

    :eek: OH NO! ISA!!! :(



    With steady steps Luçien strode towards me. The dark angel had come to claim me.

    *cries* Oh Lucien, Lucien. Oh I liked you so much at first, I was hoping for your redemption. And now this.
    A wonderful parallel to Anakin.



    I still heard Luçien howling in pain and frustration when I was in-between worlds.

    She was his sister. She shouldn?t have had to have been forgiven in order for him to be sorry for what he did.

    Oh?Isa :( :_|



    ?What sort of story is that?? Anakin moved on, his brows drawn together in anger. ?It makes no sense at all.?

    ?True once more, Skywalker. The future makes not much sense at all at times. My honoured ancestor Isabeau Riwalan knew all about it. Yet her yearning for revenge made matters even worse. She made a very unwise decision by leaving her amulet behind.?


    Life often doesn?t make sense. I like that it was all part of a story that Anakin would hear. Yes, her desire for revenge would make things worse. It?s too bad he couldn?t learn that.


    ?Such an explosive temper.? I smirked. ?Somebody should warn that Padmé before it is too late. Is she pregnant yet? We should stop her getting with child by this man.?

    Ah, but she should know that it wouldn?t help. The future is always in motion, but trying to stop a certain event from happening will make things worse ? I believe anyway.


    It was good to know that there would always be a Skywalker out there helping another.

    [face_laugh] They?re everywhere too! All the time!


    I can?t believe this is over! I enjoyed reading it, a lot. :)

     
  3. AzureAngel2

    AzureAngel2 Chosen One star 6

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    Dear pants, your good critique and your kind comments feel good. And also thanks for your Christmas postcard. It waited for me yesterday evening.

    Anyway here is the summery of "Serpent-spawn"

    Prologue
    Chapter 1: Once upon a time in a galaxy far, far away
    Chapter 2: The Others
    Chapter 3: Ancient bonds
    Chapter 4: The dune sea
    Chapter 5: Dispute
    Chapter 6: The holocron
    Chapter 7: The tramp
    Chapter 8: Exile
    Chapter 9: Family of blood
    Chapter 10: The royal nanny
    Chapter 11: A new hope
    Chapter 12: Legacy of the Force
    Chapter 13: Hazy shade of winter
    Chapter 14: Even suns die
    Chapter 15: The only thing constant is change
    Chapter 16: A storm is coming
    Chapter 17: The Force unleashed
    Chapter 18: The Holy Consort
    Chapter 19: Family ties
    Chapter 20: Shield of lies
    Chapter 21: The lovers
    Chapter 22: The Light of the Force
    Chapter 23: Home again
    Chapter 24: The Ashla and the Bogan

    Epilogue


    The languages of the Chrysolith-System:

    The Planet Draconis
    Ophidiae
    = everybody knows Basic(English)
    = Ratoriam (language of the priestesses & scientists, Latin really)
    = Giogia in River Vally of Cunabula (Italian)
    = Alegria the Colour Desert (Spanish)

    Cygan, the folk of the Eastern Prairies
    = various accents of Ryk(basically: Polish, Romanian and Russian)
    Udaler, the free humans of the Northern Hemisphere
    = various accents of Tale(basically: Swedish, Norwegian & Islandic)
    Daoine Sidhe, Elves of the Grass Sea
    = Amhrán (Irish Gaelic)
    Sleah Maith, Mountain Elves
    = Rún (Scottish Gaelic)
    Gwyllion, Tree Elves
    = Sisial (Welsh)& Telepathy
    Korriganes, Forest Elves & mutilated war veterans
    = Anaon(Cornish) & Telepathy

    The Planet Amnion
    Humans = Basic & Logos(Greek)
    Scatel = Pysk(Cornish) & Telepathy

    Der Planet Sapuhru
    Lidérc = Ronronner(French)
    Asrai = Sioul(Bretonic) & Telepathy


    And here a painting of an older Lucien:

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8080089.jpg]


    And also of Sionnach:

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8060037.jpg]


    And of Grianán before getting maimed:

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8070053.jpg]

    And after having tattoos all over her body thanks to certain bad guy:

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/SW%20pictures/PA020109.jpg]



    If people would like to read more.


    Before

    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8060037.jpg]

    Title: Wolf whelp

    Co-Author & main editor: DarthUncle

    Co-editor: swpants666

    Time frame: long before even the Old Republic did exist

    Characters: own inventions, Luke & Tionne

    Genre: Drama/ adventure

    Summary:While the Jedi Temple on Coruscant is rebuilt, Tionne Solusar gets in contact with Luke Skywalker. The jedi historian wants to show him a curious artefact she found while transferring data from the ruins of the Great Jedi library on Ossus. It is a picture drawn by a child and having the name Skywalker on it.

    Disclaimer: SW is owned by George Lucas and Lucas Ltd.!!!

    Status: completed


    [image=http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n2/AzureAngel2_2006/Art%20Studies/P8070053.jpg]

    Title: "Cat litter", an attempt to redeem Dark Siders

    Author: AzureAngel2, still loving to teach her mother language in a country far, far away. Even though this is not that easy most of the time.

    Co-Author and editor: DarthUncle[/lin
     
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