~Shadow Thickening~ (AU Ep. 3: Obi & OC) AT LONG LAST UPDATED 1 JULY 2003

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  1. Kendalina_Jinn Jedi Knight

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    I wouldn't stress to much over the lack of response posts, I'd say there are alot of lurkers and people like me, trying to read too many good stories and then getting behind! LOL
    I have noticed more people are using PMs to let loyal followers know of updates, that might be an idea to think about. Considering how fast a fic can fall sometimes. Plus it helps instill faith that a story just won't be abandoned, I know I just hate that.


    Hmm what was that about Ewan characters being ravished?!?!? All I have to say is bring it on! :D

    AnyHoo... keep up the good work and keep em coming :)
  2. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  3. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    next post will be up sometime this week, but i have tests and papers i need to work on first... i was gone this past weekend... had a good time...

    well i've gotta study latin so i'll do that and get to work on our next segment
  4. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  5. C3SoloP0 Jedi Master

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    Here I am! Here I am...

    Your story is really good Tunuviel_Jayna!!
    I finally decided that letting my presence be known would be a good thing!! hehehehe....

    Up!!!!!
  6. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  7. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    sorry everyone i keep forgetting i need to post here... i have one post written, but i'm hoping to finish the chapter and start on the next before i post again because i want to have some semblance of a continual string of posts for this story so i can finish it... there are 20 chapters total planned so the homestretch will come at some point.

    i'm working hard to try to get my muse to work for this story (for the muse is aiding the harry potter story more lately)...

    but i will post sometime before the end of this month... i hope...

    *shakes fist at darth school*
  8. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  9. Frazzled_Pip Jedi Knight

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  11. Linauri Jedi Knight

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    ::Runs into the thread and tackles TJ in a major huggle:: TJ, I'M SO SORRY!!! My comp went all Darthy on me and I was internetless for EVER!!! :eek: It was horrible!!! But I'm back now, and as soon as I catch up to everyone's stories, I'll resume my daily huggle UPs!! :D And I loved the last couple of posts that I missed! But did you have to tease us with a shirtless Obi-kins like that if you weren't going to make a whole chapter out of it. ::Sniffles:: You can be so cruel. ::pouts adorably:: Oh well. Gotta run. So much to read, so little time. ::Runs off to the next thread on her list:: Later!


    Love and huggles,
    Lin :D
  12. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  14. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    i'm desperately trying to work on the rest of the story.. very difficult because of Darth Writer's Block... don't worry i will have a post up within this month... hopefully these first couple weeks... this week i'm home for spring break so i'm not going to have a whole lot of computer access (and my brother and his wife whom i've not seen since september are coming down this week too, so i want to spend time with them)

    so i'm trying... sorry for the wait y'all...

    trust me, the next posts, you won't be disappointed...

    mush is coming soon... in a few posts... but it's coming... :D
  15. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  16. ForceAchtungBaby Jedi Master

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  17. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    *looks pathetic* i'm trying i'm trying... will work on one for this week PROMISE!

    *has just returned back to college from spring break*
  18. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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  19. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    Beware the Ides of March! not only did Sean Biggerstaff *huggles him if could* turn the big 2-0 today, but GASP i'm posting!!!
    Chapter Eleven
    Dragon of Lightning: part two

    The comlink awoke her dream. In her mind all that was left was a dragon like creature flying through a field and a lone lightning strike.

    And she wondered what relevance this dream and vision had to do with her current life situation.

    She hated being awoken and cut off at the 'and.'

    "We will see you now Jyana," Mace Windu's voice came through the comlink.

    Jyana groaned from being awoken from her slumber and okayed her Master.

    She had lost hope that her dream would ever be finished. Why she cared she didn't know.

    Was love something she truly desired?

    Mace and Yoda were in their joint meditation room and there was an extra seat for Jyana to take. She did so and waited to see what this meeting will entale.

    "I heard on Corellia you were struck by lightning," Mace began.

    Jyana only silently nodded as she remembered that incident.

    BANG!

    A sudden lightning bolt jolted through the sky and struck her. Jyana had collapsed to the ground.

    Obi-Wan, having witnessed this, dropped his lightsaber and knelt down to her side. He shook her with urgency. "J," was all he could choke out softly, "J." He looked at her face. Peaceful as in sleep, her eyes were closed. Noted he the rise and fall of her diaphram.

    As the sky outpoured its agony and grief, Obi-Wan tried his best to shelter Jyana with his torn up robes from the downpour. Holding her to his chest he buried himself down in her chocolate coloured tresses. He then kissed the unconscious Jyana Tinu Jade on the top of her head and held onto her like there was nothing else left.


    ~TBC~/>
  20. Frazzled_Pip Jedi Knight

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    *bites arm off*

    More! I need more! This was really good, it inspired me to go write more of mine! :D

    Dang, I can't pinch the board!
  21. Sabe126 Jedi Master

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    Hmmm, interesting reaction from Obi-Wan there! Looking forward to the next post and what Mace and Yoda will say
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  23. ForceAchtungBaby Jedi Master

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    I missed a postie! Urgh - how did that happen?
    Ummm and it was very nice - wet Obi Wan and all!
  24. Frazzled_Pip Jedi Knight

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  25. Tinuviel_Jyana Jedi Master

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    a glitch in the system made me post this twice... post is next
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