Saga Snow, for the MMM challenge (and rewrite challenge)

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  1. earlybird-obi-wan Jedi Grand Master

    Member Since:
    Aug 21, 2006
    star 6
    Snow
    Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
    Timeframe: CLWRS weeks before the battle of Azure
    Characters: Obi-Wan and Siri
    Genre: rewrite and MMM
    Summary: two Jedi are celebrating New Years Eve.

    Disclaimer: Star Wars is owned by G.L. and the mouse

    Snow

    It was snowing.
    Two Jedi – friends – were watching that snow.
    It was expected snow.
    On Coruscant – a planet with weather control – it snowed only when the controllers planned that snow and snow for New Years Eve was.

    But for the two Jedi it was the celebration of New Years Eve and something else.
    The snow had the two remembering fond moments and funny ones.

    It had snowed on a birthday, leading to a lot of fun.

    “You and those initiates; you let them pepper you with snowballs.”

    “And you were the starter of this Mrs. Tachi. You slipped the first snowball between my tunics and obi. You encouraged the initiates to gather the snow to make snowballs.”

    “It was funny to see you turning red. Your hair began to match your face. And it was oh so sweet to wipe you dry after the snow and fun and…”

    “Kiss me. That was sweet. And the Force agreed just like it did when you were the one to help me to regain my strength after Jabiim.”

    “It did and we have a bond of love, a bond of the soul, just like that stubborn guy told us when we were there to say goodbye when he left with the training group to go to Lingala.”

    “He will recover there and find a new future. You are mine Tachi.”

    “Yes Kenobi.”

    Hands encircled a waist.
    Lips moved.
    A deep kiss followed and two Jedi winked with their eyes when the snow continued to fall.
    Life was good for them on this evening.
    The war was for this eternal moment far away.
    Snow gave everything a soft edge, made things pure and white.
    Love bonded the two Jedi.

    FIN
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  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Force Ghost

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    Aug 31, 2004
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  3. lukemaraben Jedi Knight

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    Sep 2, 2012
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    I don't usually read Obi-Wan/Siri stuff...but this was super cute! [face_love]
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  4. KELIA Manager Emeritus

    Member Since:
    Jul 26, 2005
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    [face_love][face_love][face_love][face_love]

    That was wonderful. I love Siriwan!

    Great job

    =D==D==D==D==D=
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